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by BlackWaltzTheThird
Wed Jul 29, 2015 2:51 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: What, this old (new) thing?
Replies: 26
Views: 7575

Re: What, this old (new) thing?

I can't say I'm a fan of the writing style (it feels as if I'm having the events of a story relayed to me by a second party, rather than being told the story outright (and also the frequency of parentheses (nested ones at that, ironically) does irk me)) but I'm intrigued by the premise. As I recall ...
by BlackWaltzTheThird
Tue Jun 02, 2015 11:43 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20191202 The Pusher)
Replies: 1812
Views: 251999

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Meeting Resumed 01 June 2015)

Mirage_GSM wrote:one featuring Kenji and... one of the girls, don't recall which as vampire hunters
It was Rika. Story never got continued as far as I know. See Thirteen Silver Chains by themocaw.

Also this is apparently my 600th post. Yay, I guess.
by BlackWaltzTheThird
Wed Apr 01, 2015 9:54 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 860
Views: 197004

Re: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}

They're not friends, like in the proactive sense, but they are acquainted with each other, and they're nice to each other. Hanako probably canonically likes Emi: that's how I choose to interpret that scene. (Dewelar? You wanna back me up?) Well, I'm not Dewelar, but I wrote a whole series based on ...
by BlackWaltzTheThird
Sat Feb 28, 2015 10:49 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: BlackWaltz's One-stop Oneshot Shop (New: 30th Apr 2014)
Replies: 144
Views: 51753

Re: BlackWaltz's One-stop Oneshot Shop (New: 30th Apr)

Hanako just felt so off. ... She just felt too normal. Understandable. I guess it's in part because it's an AU that Hanako is more developed by the time Hisao arrives, but that transformation could have been better paced, I agree. It comes down to the series being concieved as a single one-shot and...
by BlackWaltzTheThird
Sun Feb 15, 2015 11:24 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Greater Than The Sum (Finished!) - All days now up: 11/4/12
Replies: 96
Views: 25746

Re: Greater Than The Sum (Finished!) - All days now up: 11/4

Holy necropost Batman! I admit I'm somewhat surprised that people still read this, especially as we reach three years since its inception. It's always nice to see people enjoying it, too, even if I no longer think very highly of it. I do agree about the disconnectedness from the canon KS story, tho...
by BlackWaltzTheThird
Thu Dec 25, 2014 8:40 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Summer's Clover (Miki Path)
Replies: 102
Views: 150996

Re: Summer's Clover (Miki Path)

Hmm. Well done.
by BlackWaltzTheThird
Mon Nov 10, 2014 6:19 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Like Antennas to Heaven [Happy Birthday, Misha]
Replies: 11
Views: 2225

Re: Like Antennas to Heaven [Happy Birthday, Misha]

Somewhat predictable I guess, but nonetheless very sweet. I like the way you incorporate Misha's tendency to use tildes and exclamation marks in her speech, in her prose. One tiny error I noticed; " [some sort of event or happening... " has a lower case S at the start. Glad to see you still kicking,...
by BlackWaltzTheThird
Wed Nov 05, 2014 9:33 am
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Katawa Seiyu
Replies: 98
Views: 29899

Re: Katawa Seiyu

It is indeed dead. We were too ambitious and lacking in both experience and time sufficient to handle a project of this magnitude. It's unlikely that we'll collectively return to Katawa Seiyu in the future. Individually, some of us have moved on to other projects, such as Tyranee's Danganronpa Fandu...
by BlackWaltzTheThird
Wed Oct 01, 2014 3:34 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 11/28)
Replies: 1039
Views: 278675

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 9/20)

I would personally upload them to an image sharing website and link to them, rather than embedding each chapter with X amount of images. That way, the people who want to see the pictures can by clicking the links, and the people who don't need only ignore the links. It is an interesting idea though,...
by BlackWaltzTheThird
Mon Sep 29, 2014 3:33 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sisterhood: True Edition (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)
Replies: 318
Views: 341371

Re: Sisterhood: True Edition (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

Mirage_GSM wrote:I don't think BlackWaltz meant this to be an example to be followed... At least I hope he didn't.
I didn't. My point was that excessively long sentences with an inordinate amount of commas are undesirable, with the caveat that too few is also undesirable.
by BlackWaltzTheThird
Sat Sep 27, 2014 10:13 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sisterhood: True Edition (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)
Replies: 318
Views: 341371

Re: Sisterhood: True Edition (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

And then my vision fell upon the seven tall candles upon the table. At first they wore the aspect of charity, and seemed white and slender angels who would save me; but then, all at once, there came a most deadly nausea over my spirit, and I felt every fibre in my frame thrill as if I had touched t...
by BlackWaltzTheThird
Thu Sep 25, 2014 5:46 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sisterhood: True Edition (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)
Replies: 318
Views: 341371

Re: Sisterhood: True Edition (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

Chapter 20 spoilers >first aid instructor has a heart attack just after instructing Hanako how to respond to an emergency >I was just pretending! Fuck. You. "I guess what I did was a bit thoughtless," Nooooo, you think? Chapter 20 spoilers Hmm, interesting that Hisao and Hanako both accepted the of...
by BlackWaltzTheThird
Sat Sep 20, 2014 11:22 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sisterhood: True Edition (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)
Replies: 318
Views: 341371

Re: Sisterhood: True Edition (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

Whether they're sounds or actions isn't the point. The point is that it's a very very poor way of describing what is going on. I'll go so far as to say incorrect. It has no literary meaning to include text in asterisks other than that we have an association derived from our experiences online. What ...
by BlackWaltzTheThird
Sat Sep 20, 2014 8:49 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sisterhood: True Edition (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)
Replies: 318
Views: 341371

Re: Sisterhood: True Edition (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

Okay, at this point, I have re-read up to chapter 17 and no further, nor any comments. *prepares self* When I read the original post of this fic two years ago, I was blown away. As I recall, someone pointed out that it was "A Hanako bad-end inside a Lilly good-end inside a Hanako good-end", or somet...
by BlackWaltzTheThird
Mon Jun 23, 2014 8:49 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20191202 The Pusher)
Replies: 1812
Views: 251999

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Now Reading: The most suprising thing)

Well, I suppose my first port of call is the formatting of this story; the three-sectioned layout covering three different but ultimately converging time periods is not only a novel idea but adds to the mystery of the plot arc. It's kind of like completing a puzzle, where the pieces you select alter...