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by themocaw
Mon Feb 20, 2012 11:32 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Random Drabbles
Replies: 31
Views: 10274

Random Drabbles

A drabble is a story in one hundred words. If I think of one that I don't think belongs in a "set" like my others, I'll put them here. ----- I wake up to the sound of chirping birds and a lovely naked woman with dark hair laying in my bed. I lean over and give her a gentle kiss on the forehead. She...
by themocaw
Sun Feb 19, 2012 9:36 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: 2400 words from a path never written.
Replies: 47
Views: 29138

Re: 2400 words from a path never written.

I figured that what happened in that scene was probably an acceleration of her condition that prevents her from going back to school or something. She's still got years/decades left, but in a greatly reduced condition, possibly confined to a wheelchair now, and is driving her "boyfriend" away out o...
by themocaw
Sun Feb 19, 2012 3:21 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: 2400 words from a path never written.
Replies: 47
Views: 29138

Re: 2400 words from a path never written.

CNB wrote:
themocaw wrote:(She didn't lose her teeth smashing them against the curb, by the way.)
So, more like, "I slipped and fell... onto the other guy's fist."
Let me clarify: she did loose her teeth smashing them into the curb. She didn't get there on her own. :P
by themocaw
Sun Feb 19, 2012 1:14 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: 2400 words from a path never written.
Replies: 47
Views: 29138

Re: 2400 words from a path never written.

Liked it a lot (Saki being a mere April's Fool joke is the biggest disappointment the KS devs have given me) but it's not without some gripes from me. As already observed, not only the illness consumes her too rapidly, it isn't even consistent. At the beginning, she says about a life expectancy tha...
by themocaw
Sun Feb 19, 2012 12:19 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Weekend at Hisao's (Was: At the Train Station) - [Some Porn]
Replies: 201
Views: 144131

Re: Weekend at Hisao's (Was: At the Train Station) - [Some P

tsunami_state wrote: What is your archiver by the way?[/img]
Ar. . . chiver? I have no idea what you mean by that.
by themocaw
Sun Feb 19, 2012 4:18 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Disappointment of Haruhi Suzumiya
Replies: 3
Views: 2456

Re: The Disappointment of Haruhi Suzumiya

Now I'm intrigued.
by themocaw
Sun Feb 19, 2012 3:37 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: 2400 words from a path never written.
Replies: 47
Views: 29138

Re: 2400 words from a path never written.

Looking back on this one, I am completely dissatisfied with it, but will keep it up as is. You shouldn't be, as it's quite good. My only complaint is that she died too soon! She should have had years, and it sounds like she died in a matter of weeks. I'm constrained by the format, which limits me t...
by themocaw
Sat Feb 18, 2012 2:29 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yields Six Servings
Replies: 24
Views: 10490

Re: Yields Six Servings

Pulled back a few of the Rin-isms.

Going to go back over it later with a razor of editing and pare it down to essentials.
by themocaw
Sat Feb 18, 2012 1:08 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Katawa Shoujo on Squadron of Shame's podcast
Replies: 9
Views: 3479

Re: Katawa Shoujo on Squadron of Shame's podcast

Very nicely done: very insightful, very analytical, not only of the game but of the greater culture. I think I've found a new podcast to listen to.

By the way, I stopped listening just as you started talking about Digital to avoid spoilers.
by themocaw
Sat Feb 18, 2012 11:35 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Least favorite girl?
Replies: 262
Views: 67328

Re: Least favorite girl?

Don't even get me started on Shizune. Start please? Given that you wrote a damned good fanfic in which you nailed Shizune's personality, I'm pretty interested in hearing your take on her route. It's bound to be more insightful than 'argh no liek'. I love Shizune as a character. Her route has some f...
by themocaw
Sat Feb 18, 2012 3:03 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Katawa Shoujo on Squadron of Shame's podcast
Replies: 9
Views: 3479

Re: Katawa Shoujo on Squadron of Shame's podcast

It truly amuses me that a cripple porn visual novel ended up being the Gateway series for many people. Then I remember that my first VN involved romancing a genderbent King Arthur and laugh. :lol: SABER IS MAI DAMN WAIFU! YOU STAY AWAY FROM HER! >:[ Seriously, though, F:S/N for the win, although th...
by themocaw
Sat Feb 18, 2012 1:12 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: 2400 words from a path never written.
Replies: 47
Views: 29138

Re: 2400 words from a path never written.

Looking back on this one, I am completely dissatisfied with it, but will keep it up as is. I wouldn't sell yourself short, but I sort of agree in that it doesn't seem quite up to par with some (i.e. most) of your other stories. Then again, you've been writing a TON of them. :P Well. Sometimes you g...
by themocaw
Fri Feb 17, 2012 11:29 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: 2400 words from a path never written.
Replies: 47
Views: 29138

Re: 2400 words from a path never written.

Looking back on this one, I am completely dissatisfied with it, but will keep it up as is.
by themocaw
Fri Feb 17, 2012 6:11 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: 2400 words from a path never written.
Replies: 47
Views: 29138

2400 words from a path never written.

Sometimes, an idea gets stuck in your head and refuses to go away. A drabble is a story in one hundred words. A double or triple drabble, therefore, is a story in two or three hundred words, respectively. Each segment below contains a drabble, a double drabble, and a triple drabble. The end result ...
by themocaw
Fri Feb 17, 2012 2:13 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Least favorite girl?
Replies: 262
Views: 67328

Re: Least favorite girl?

Dr. Robotnik wrote:The drawback is that HISAO ALMOST FUCKING DIED.
The critical word in that sentence being it's subject.