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Woo, that was pretty intense. I have to say, I like where this is going.

It seems just like Hisao and Shizune to try to get answers out of Hanako, and just like her to panic over the pressure. I think you captured everybody's personalities pretty well.

As much as I like Kobayashi Yuu, I was that I couldn't really think of a decent KS character to go along with her.

Read like the pilot for an OVA - shit's happening, you have no idea what, and the protagonist turns out to be some huge badass that kills the villain with "little" effort.

That aside, I like.

Whisky, Saki and Other Spirits

Well, I'm slow.

Is my brain screwing with me, or did you flip your Mutou avatar upside down?

I am terrified of what I am downloading right now. I don't know why, but when it happens, it will happen fast.

EDIT: I didn't think it would be THAT fast.

Frankly, I'm more interested in how Mutou polishes his marriage than in how he's going to play fairy godfather to Hisao and Hanako. Not to say that isn't part of it, of course.

You just turned this story into pure garbage. Inconsistent tense, crap dialogue, everybody's out of character, sentence structure is out of whack, and there's no threesome going on yet...

April Fool's :D

My god... what have you done?

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And this is why I need to use the thread tracker.

You say next chapter soon. Buts its been awhile :( But thats okay. I'll wait. Worth it He has two other fan fictions going on right now, Agoraphobia and With Apologies to Team Silent, so he's busy right now, can't wait until he gets back to this though, it's... intriguing, to say the least. I belie...

The plot thickens. Admittedly, I was worried that some big drama explosion would result from Hisao asking her about the camping trip. Looks like I made the same mistake he did. I do like the somewhat optimistic outlook Hisao tries give though. I thought to myself "you might as well have high standar...

Daisuke looks like as much of a douchebag as I imagined.

You somehow made something erotic with MS Paint. That can't be easy. I'll give you the benefit of the doubt.

If that's the most of your worries, then I think you're golden.