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by Mahorfeus
Mon Apr 02, 2012 10:50 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Amendments (Complete)
Replies: 37
Views: 12061

Re: Amendments (Spoilers abound)

Woo, that was pretty intense. I have to say, I like where this is going.

It seems just like Hisao and Shizune to try to get answers out of Hanako, and just like her to panic over the pressure. I think you captured everybody's personalities pretty well.
by Mahorfeus
Mon Apr 02, 2012 7:25 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Character Voices
Replies: 68
Views: 19340

Re: Character Voices

As much as I like Kobayashi Yuu, I was that I couldn't really think of a decent KS character to go along with her.
by Mahorfeus
Mon Apr 02, 2012 4:37 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Thirteen Silver Chains
Replies: 11
Views: 6616

Re: Thirteen Silver Chains

Read like the pilot for an OVA - shit's happening, you have no idea what, and the protagonist turns out to be some huge badass that kills the villain with "little" effort.

That aside, I like. :P
by Mahorfeus
Sun Apr 01, 2012 10:09 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Whisky, Saki and Other Spirits- A Saki Story
Replies: 27
Views: 16946

Re: Whisky, Saki and Other Spirits- A Saki Story

Whisky, Saki and Other Spirits
Well, I'm slow.
by Mahorfeus
Sun Apr 01, 2012 10:08 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Agoraphobia [Mutou]
Replies: 95
Views: 26548

Re: Agoraphobia [Mutou]

Is my brain screwing with me, or did you flip your Mutou avatar upside down?
by Mahorfeus
Sun Apr 01, 2012 4:37 pm
Forum: Blog posts
Topic: Katawa Shoujo HD rerelease!
Replies: 93
Views: 69276

Re: Katawa Shoujo HD rerelease!

I am terrified of what I am downloading right now. I don't know why, but when it happens, it will happen fast.

EDIT: I didn't think it would be THAT fast.
by Mahorfeus
Sun Apr 01, 2012 3:45 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Agoraphobia [Mutou]
Replies: 95
Views: 26548

Re: Agoraphobia [Mutou]

Frankly, I'm more interested in how Mutou polishes his marriage than in how he's going to play fairy godfather to Hisao and Hanako. Not to say that isn't part of it, of course.
by Mahorfeus
Sun Apr 01, 2012 1:50 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Familiar Face (Hanako Neutral End Fan Fiction) (U 2/14/13)
Replies: 82
Views: 30978

Re: A Familiar Face (Hanako Neutral End Fan Fiction)

You just turned this story into pure garbage. Inconsistent tense, crap dialogue, everybody's out of character, sentence structure is out of whack, and there's no threesome going on yet...

April Fool's :D
by Mahorfeus
Sat Mar 31, 2012 6:20 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Lamb and The Fox
Replies: 83
Views: 32888

Re: The Lamb and The Fox

And this is why I need to use the thread tracker.
by Mahorfeus
Fri Mar 30, 2012 8:35 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: -
Replies: 86
Views: 26125

Re: Little Faith [Lilly Good Ending Extension, Spoilers, Sci

You say next chapter soon. Buts its been awhile :( But thats okay. I'll wait. Worth it He has two other fan fictions going on right now, Agoraphobia and With Apologies to Team Silent, so he's busy right now, can't wait until he gets back to this though, it's... intriguing, to say the least. I belie...
by Mahorfeus
Thu Mar 29, 2012 10:56 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: "Can You Open Your Heart?" - a Rika pseudo-route
Replies: 448
Views: 257656

Re: Rika Story - updated 3/29/2012

The plot thickens. Admittedly, I was worried that some big drama explosion would result from Hisao asking her about the camping trip. Looks like I made the same mistake he did. I do like the somewhat optimistic outlook Hisao tries give though. I thought to myself "you might as well have high standar...
by Mahorfeus
Thu Mar 29, 2012 10:52 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Greater Than The Sum (Finished!) - All days now up: 11/4/12
Replies: 96
Views: 44267

Re: Greater Than The Sum - Days 0 - 62 now up: 29/3/12

Daisuke looks like as much of a douchebag as I imagined. :lol:
by Mahorfeus
Thu Mar 29, 2012 3:25 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Greater Than The Sum (Finished!) - All days now up: 11/4/12
Replies: 96
Views: 44267

Re: Greater Than The Sum - Days 0 - 62 now up: 29/3/12

You somehow made something erotic with MS Paint. That can't be easy. I'll give you the benefit of the doubt.
by Mahorfeus
Thu Mar 29, 2012 2:27 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Agoraphobia [Mutou]
Replies: 95
Views: 26548

Re: Agoraphobia [Mutou]

If that's the most of your worries, then I think you're golden.