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by Mahorfeus
Tue Apr 17, 2012 11:57 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Meanwhile I wait [Hisao x original character]
Replies: 202
Views: 79462

Re: Meanwhile I wait [Hisao x original character]

If Hisao hits that, I think I'm gonna lose all respect for him.

Unless he tames the bi-, er, shrew.
by Mahorfeus
Tue Apr 17, 2012 4:30 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Mendācium (Hanako) - Version 1.1.1
Replies: 292
Views: 82023

Re: Mendācium (Hanako) - Complete

Same to you. Frankly, I'm already seeing holes in my own argument. I'm content with leaving it at that though.
by Mahorfeus
Tue Apr 17, 2012 4:14 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Mendācium (Hanako) - Version 1.1.1
Replies: 292
Views: 82023

Re: Mendācium (Hanako) - Complete

So it turns out that going to sleep isn't easy when you're on caffeine. Go me. Well, the rebuttal, if you have the patience and sobriety to read it. There was no such thing on behalf of Hanako, her confession smelled like she was boasting ("he is better than you blah blah", were she regretful and tr...
by Mahorfeus
Tue Apr 17, 2012 2:56 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Mendācium (Hanako) - Version 1.1.1
Replies: 292
Views: 82023

Re: Mendācium (Hanako) - Complete

will probably do again This. Ugh. What is this crap? It's come up more than once, and frankly I'm not understanding what the basis of it is. It entirely defeats the purpose of reestablishing trust, which is exactly what Hanako and Hisao tried to do. Hanako told Hisao everything; she did so knowing ...
by Mahorfeus
Tue Apr 17, 2012 12:11 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Mendācium (Hanako) - Version 1.1.1
Replies: 292
Views: 82023

Re: Mendācium (Hanako) - Complete

txalolrn9 wrote:she deserved that and more
nope.avi
by Mahorfeus
Mon Apr 16, 2012 10:09 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Mendācium (Hanako) - Version 1.1.1
Replies: 292
Views: 82023

Re: Mendācium (Hanako) - Complete

Oh, you're not alone.

You and I are just in the vocal minority. Admittedly, your situation is different in many ways, but the principle of forgiveness is always the same.

Telling the truth is the first step to reestablishing trust, which is essential for any relationship to have any future.
by Mahorfeus
Mon Apr 16, 2012 9:38 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: On the subject of "White Knights"...
Replies: 34
Views: 8341

Re: On the subject of "White Knights"...

I always saw the problem as being the fact that Hanako never responded to Hisao's patronization until it was too late, at which point she blew up at him . It's true that Hisao shouldn't have coddled her the way he did, but he can't be entirely put at fault. Hanako failed to convey her feelings to hi...
by Mahorfeus
Mon Apr 16, 2012 8:54 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Meanwhile I wait [Hisao x original character]
Replies: 202
Views: 79462

Re: Meanwhile I wait [Hisao x original character]

Steal his food, eh?

She'll have him thinking that the sun is the moon in no time.
by Mahorfeus
Sun Apr 15, 2012 10:56 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Mendācium (Hanako) - Version 1.1.1
Replies: 292
Views: 82023

Re: Mendācium (Hanako) - Complete

I liked it.

I'd go into detail about why I found it all believable, but I'm tired and I don't feel like engaging in a war right now.
by Mahorfeus
Sun Apr 15, 2012 12:24 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Mendācium (Hanako) - Version 1.1.1
Replies: 292
Views: 82023

Re: Mendācium (Hanako) - Part 3 Is Now Up

He's telling a story. There's no trying, and there's no ulterior motive. Jeez.

I am right, right?
by Mahorfeus
Sat Apr 14, 2012 10:39 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Mendācium (Hanako) - Version 1.1.1
Replies: 292
Views: 82023

Re: Mendācium (Hanako) - Part 3 Is Now Up

I would be less worried about getting her pregnant and more worried about getting Tenshi's firecrotch.

Just sayin'.
by Mahorfeus
Sat Apr 14, 2012 9:30 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Mendācium (Hanako) - Version 1.1.1
Replies: 292
Views: 82023

Re: Mendācium (Hanako) - Part 3 Is Now Up

BlackRockHanako wrote:You ask for opinions, then completely disregard everything said and get defensive...
What else is he supposed to do with them? Integrate them all like a braindead monkey?

Kidding aside, he never said what he would do with said opinions.
by Mahorfeus
Sat Apr 14, 2012 9:01 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Mendācium (Hanako) - Version 1.1.1
Replies: 292
Views: 82023

Re: Mendācium (Hanako) - Part 3 Is Now Up

I suspected that Hisao would attempt to kick it up a notch and pay the price for it.

His thought process seems to make sense, but his level of clarity is almost off-putting.
by Mahorfeus
Sat Apr 14, 2012 10:29 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Mendācium (Hanako) - Version 1.1.1
Replies: 292
Views: 82023

Re: Mendācium (Hanako) - Part 2 Is Now Up

I honestly don't want to get too into the discussion regarding Hanako's guilt in the context of this story, but all I will say is that I disagree that she is unforgivable, or "beyond redemption" so to speak. She is a shattered wreck at this point, but if she's willing to reform herself, then there i...