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by Mahorfeus
Wed Jun 06, 2012 4:13 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Agoraphobia [Mutou]
Replies: 95
Views: 26548

Re: Agoraphobia [Mutou] [Updated 4/12]

Two-Face I still can't tell if you're intentionally the worst poster or if you just do it without trying. This story isn't about Hanako and Hisao anymore so... y'know, get over it . For some reason, I get the impression that this isn't going to happen. It's nice to see that you guys get along so we...
by Mahorfeus
Mon May 28, 2012 9:16 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tea Gone Cold [WIP]
Replies: 70
Views: 14751

Re: Tea Gone Cold [WIP]

I feel a tad of irony here, since the popular consensus on the forums seemed to be that Hisao was a total tool for just letting Lilly leave like that.

However, seeing her actually point it out like that makes me want to punch a hole in the wall.
by Mahorfeus
Fri May 25, 2012 1:21 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tea Gone Cold [WIP]
Replies: 70
Views: 14751

Re: Tea Gone Cold

I'm interested in seeing where this is going - I like it so far. One thing I'd suggest is to space out your paragraphs better, particularly at points before a character speaks. Also, I don't think the dialogue really needs to be bold; it might just be me, but it puts a little too much emphasis on th...
by Mahorfeus
Fri May 18, 2012 4:37 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Mendācium (Hanako) - Version 1.1.1
Replies: 292
Views: 82024

Re: Mendācium (Hanako) - Version 1.1

Can't say I understand why the hate.

Mind me for asking, but any regrets?
by Mahorfeus
Wed May 16, 2012 11:42 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: "Can You Open Your Heart?" - a Rika pseudo-route
Replies: 448
Views: 257660

Re: Rika Story - updated 5/15/2012 (mature content)

I don't know about that. With Hisao becoming the Fresh Prince and all, I don't think he would really have a future with Emi or Rika. Rika's last line makes my blood curdle. Reading it made me feel like this wasn't the "good" choice, though it does seem to open up exposition for Emi's past. I never e...
by Mahorfeus
Wed May 16, 2012 3:43 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Running Interference (Haganai/KS Xover) *Discontinued
Replies: 96
Views: 40259

Re: Running Interference (Yozora vs. Hanako, Xover) Updated

Crossover or no, you've really given this story a life of its own. I'm instinctively rooting for Hanako, but I have that crushing feeling that she's on the losing end. This chapter seemed to tell us that much quite clearly.
by Mahorfeus
Mon May 14, 2012 4:12 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: -
Replies: 67
Views: 18335

Re: Doomish's Misha One-Shot Collection! [EXPLICIT~!] [5/13]

Never stand in the same room as themocaw, Rikabro, and/or Brogurt, lest you make the world explode with awesomeness. The dangerous ones are always the ones that come from out of nowhere though. Ranting aside, the latest fic was a good laugh. It scares me how you're able to throw my emotional spectru...
by Mahorfeus
Sun May 13, 2012 12:43 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 862
Views: 332236

Re: Mean Time to Breakdown — An Iwanako Campaign

Takashi and Akio seem like they would be prime candidates for love interests. Taro is... well... I mean, just look at the guy. [/sounds like an asshole] I love how well you pulled this off though. The idea of Iwanako being in Hisao's position came across my mind before and was mentioned in passing b...
by Mahorfeus
Sat May 12, 2012 1:51 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: In Ruin [Hisao, Miki, Lilly neutral end] [now with epilogue]
Replies: 56
Views: 15462

Re: In Ruin [Hisao, Miki, Lilly neutral end]

Yay, yay, Doomish is on a happy streeeeea-

*reads story*

MY FEELS. NOT AGAIN.

In all seriousness, sorry you had a rough day. It's good that you're able to vent through creativity... frankly, I'm incapable of venting gracefully.
by Mahorfeus
Fri May 11, 2012 9:31 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: All I Have
Replies: 43
Views: 22724

Re: All I Have

Amendments almost went there. Until Hanako friend-zoned Misha.
by Mahorfeus
Fri May 11, 2012 8:57 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Meanwhile I wait [Hisao x original character]
Replies: 202
Views: 79463

Re: Meanwhile I wait [Hisao x original character]

Easily my favorite Rin scene in any fic I've read yet. I agree that their personalities compliment one another rather well.
by Mahorfeus
Wed May 09, 2012 11:07 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Instafeels
Replies: 33
Views: 17148

Re: Instafeels

Was that Jecht's voice for Jigoro? It fit so well XD
by Mahorfeus
Wed May 09, 2012 7:21 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: All I Have
Replies: 43
Views: 22724

Re: All I Have

Another Scumbag Hisao fic. Can't say I approve, but good writing quality as always.

And Hanako is a tool, evidently.
by Mahorfeus
Wed May 09, 2012 1:32 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: "Can You Open Your Heart?" - a Rika pseudo-route
Replies: 448
Views: 257660

Re: Rika Story - updated 5/8/2012 (mature content)

I can't wait for the next installment. I'm guessing that Rika is going to chase after him in America, but I'm not quite sure how or why she would.
by Mahorfeus
Mon May 07, 2012 9:41 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: "Can You Open Your Heart?" - a Rika pseudo-route
Replies: 448
Views: 257660

Re: Rika Story - updated 5/7/2012 (mature content)

I don't think I have the heart to call this a "bad" end. It was amazing though.