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I liked Miki in Hanako's route. She served as a good way of giving Hisao some third party insight on Hanako, and for all intents and purposes, she cheered him on from the sidelines. It was a small role but I felt that it made a difference in the long run.

Hanako's bad end.

Though, I'd blame that on a design trap. I don't like being given the illusion of choice, especially if I've already screwed up. Comparably, Emi's had a parachute of sorts that could save your butt.

I could mention how Misha must have slimmed down, or how she's probably the one who lit Hanako's house on fire (unless that's a desk..?), but the spirit of the season has convinced me to withhold such silliness.

At first I wondered, "Why not make Hanako Mustang?"

And then the irony of the current setup hit me.

Usually I disapprove of fake out fics, but then it kind of occurred to me that this isn't one. As in, I asked myself, "Who the hell else would be banging Emi's mom?" So it should have been obvious from the get-go. I mean, asides from Hisao of course. On a more serious note, I can't quite remember if...

Definitely a shame, but there's never any foul in calling it quits. I remember being one of the ones clamoring for a full expansion on your pseudo-route, and even though this is not finished per se, I think you did an excellent job on it.

My face melted a long time ago, so I think I'm practically immune to the shock factor now.

And yet, the one thing that still lights my thalamus on fire is the word "ropes." Thanks to you, I can no longer use it in a normal sentence.

That is a pretty excellent analysis, Prof. I find myself agreeing with a lot of it. In my case, I do suppose my only personal complaint with the story is that it seems to have already hit its crescendo, its climax, the point where Suzu probably should finally come to terms with her problems, at leas...

Wow, to be honest I was not at all aware that Dr. Seuss isn't a huge thing internationally. I grew up with his books, this being among them, of course. It makes perfect sense though, and I suppose it is just something I never bothered researching - never had a reason to. It might be a stretch for th...

Best solution: waste your life away refreshing the fanfiction forum over and over again. No this is terrible advice it has ruined my life don't do it. ;.;

Damn it, I can't stop thinking about this. And the more I do, the more I want one.

I'm not a very good writing critic, but I do get those instinctual cringes when something blatantly bad comes across my eyes. That hasn't happened. So far so good! Though, as BlackWaltz said, there isn't really much to go by. The basic story concept sounds interesting and you already have some fun o...

Your Rin's still my favorite. :) Admittedly, this chapter seemed a little like filler to me, but that's just the effect of the suspense from the last chapter talking. It did provide a decent bit of exposition though. Rin already complements Miya rather well, so it was cool seeing that relation being...

I'm sure you're just over thinking it. They live happily ever after, miraculously surviving their conditions until the ripe old age of 110, where they both die of heart attacks while riding a roller coaster.

That's what I'll tell myself before I go to sleep at night.

Banda wrote: Sometimes you get the boner and sometimes you get the feels.

And those awkward in-between moments. :/