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Now that would be quite a... development . shoot me now But on a more serious note, I agree that this kind of stress can't possibly be healthy for him. He has three (or four) women - most of them his close friends - that want him. He's already stressed out as is, and it's only bound to get worse if ...

Really, the problem isn't with the plausible deniability, it's with reconciling this Hanako with the later canon one. I guess that's more of what I was getting at. The circumstances are certainly plausible, but for the Hanako we know to do something like this is in itself, implausible. Of course, t...

I kinda thought that plausible deniability hinges on, well, you know. Plausibility.

This was a pleasant surprise. I admit I haven't reread the earlier chapters like I told myself I would, so my memory might be a little shaky. But in this chapter, Miya seems more open with her insecurity. Perhaps because she is talking with someone who is family(?). Or at the very least, because she...

I completely agree with leaty, btw- if Hisao chooses to become a hermit or monk or just a lonely single guy I don't think you could blame him. It wouldn't stop me from being sad though. Why? There would be nothing depressing about Hisao independently coming to the resolution that he's strong enough...

...and here is an even better example of that drama.

Hisao is getting a little cracked in the head. For some reason I keep imagining his laughter as being maniacal.

I really hope he isn't stupid enough to call that number, though it might not matter if someone ends up finding out about it first.

If Hanako does have an outburst at some point, I'd be very interested in seeing how exactly it comes about. A lot of the drama here seems to come from everything being out in the open, rather than being concealed. I think this last chapter was an excellent example of that. But that's enough speculat...

Pretty much what Loeloe said.

That is definitely the wrong kind of attitude to bring here, especially if you are looking for a friendly reception. Or readership, for that matter.

I've seen TV Tropes mentioned across the boards fairly often. I don't know why it surprises me; I guess I just never imagined the site being a gateway to fanfics, of all things.

She who bares, wins.

Okay, that was terrible.

I'm having difficulty imagining what amazing, head-spinning revelation Hisao could come up with that would implore him to choose one way or the other. And that's a good thing.

Just kidding, he's totally going to flip a coin.

dewelar wrote:"Apparently, there have been some...interesting developments in the week since I left Yamaku."

Hey, that's the name of the show!

If by "good" you mean "total bastardization of the source material," then we are in agreement. :P I tried to read the Inferno once, but I was too young. The integrity of my attention span did not hold. As for the fic itself, I might just be a little nitpicky today, but even as a poem, it didn't real...

It seems a little less like a drabble and more like a summary of a story.

So... basically Rin is nightmare fuel. That explains a lot.