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by Mahorfeus
Thu Feb 20, 2014 11:12 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Bad Hanako (Pt5, 20/2)
Replies: 46
Views: 15924

Re: Bad Hanako (Pt5, 20/2)

I predict that it will end with Hanako lighting herself on fire, only to survive with grotesque, third-degree burns all over her body. And then her pain and suffering will curse Yamaku for yadda yadda yadda...
by Mahorfeus
Tue Feb 18, 2014 2:12 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565861

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Chapter 34 up 2/

Another point on the scoreboard for Hanako. I was a little worried that she'd cave once she learned that Lilly was returning, but it at least seems to have bolstered her resolve to do... something. Emi still needs to get her shit pulled together, but I don't know if she can do it alone. I don't doub...
by Mahorfeus
Mon Feb 17, 2014 5:29 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Lustre: A Misaki Kawana Route [Update 11/05/2014]
Replies: 30
Views: 13246

Re: Lustre: A Misaki Kawana Route [Started 14/02/2014]

That's what I figure. I suppose it would be a little redundant to have two different sets of photographers.
by Mahorfeus
Mon Feb 17, 2014 4:14 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Lustre: A Misaki Kawana Route [Update 11/05/2014]
Replies: 30
Views: 13246

Re: Lustre: A Misaki Kawana Route [Started 14/02/2014]

Hm. Isn't Misaki in the photography club? Though I suppose that could be connected to the newspaper club. And that aside, I suppose the 3-3 roster picture isn't necessarily "canon."

I'll have to give this a look once the girl comes onto the scene.
by Mahorfeus
Mon Feb 17, 2014 4:07 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Double Update 3/14)
Replies: 1140
Views: 572096

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 2/14)

I have to confess, I almost did not give this one a chance. I have a bad habit of letting other people's interpretations of "blank slate" characters stick in my head. The notorious "head canon," so to speak. The topic has already been beaten to death by now, but I'm sure that you can guess that it i...
by Mahorfeus
Fri Feb 14, 2014 3:33 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Avici
Replies: 12
Views: 5880

Re: Avici

Hanako Goes to Hell? A ridiculously depressing concept, but I think you've sold me on it.

Edit: Oh wait, it's a necro. Oops. How oddly appropriate.
by Mahorfeus
Thu Feb 13, 2014 1:49 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Blue Balls and a Slack Jaw (Taro Pseudo Route)
Replies: 18
Views: 7873

Re: Blue Balls and a Slack Jaw (Taro Pseudo Route)

I would have rather seen you kill him off than subject poor Taro to this... mess.

I mean, what the hell?
by Mahorfeus
Thu Feb 13, 2014 1:41 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Rin: Clearer Than Words
Replies: 13
Views: 7623

Re: Rin: Clearer Than Words

Sweet little story. I like the contrast with the oddness and bitterness of your other two Rin stories. Which I may or may not have commented on already.
by Mahorfeus
Tue Feb 11, 2014 10:55 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Overdrive (Lilly)
Replies: 29
Views: 15916

Re: Overdrive (Lilly)

Hm. I actually kind of liked it, asides from the rapiness. "Lilly as Hisao's English tutor" was a pretty good segue into their relationship. However, I feel like there were some pacing issues; not enough time devoted to developing each character. Hisao can be an idiot at times, but I think he was a ...
by Mahorfeus
Mon Feb 10, 2014 3:03 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Bad Hanako (Pt5, 20/2)
Replies: 46
Views: 15924

Re: Bad Hanako (Pt4, 10/2)

Frankyo wrote:Lol, this story should be renamed to Hanako kills everyone. A good fast-paced thriller, though I feel that Hanako is OOC
I don't think that OOC even begins to cover it...
by Mahorfeus
Sat Feb 08, 2014 7:39 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Enjoy The Silence (Ch. 10 2014-02-08, complete)
Replies: 80
Views: 30909

Re: Enjoy The Silence (Ch. 10 2014-02-08, complete)

Oddball wrote:It ain't bad and it's interesting how you went about it. Me? If I had continued my own story, it would have been bad endings all around for everyone.
More or less what I was expecting, to be honest.

Ironically, I think I felt the most pity for Shizune.
by Mahorfeus
Sat Feb 08, 2014 4:02 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Enjoy The Silence (Ch. 10 2014-02-08, complete)
Replies: 80
Views: 30909

Re: Enjoy The Silence (Ch. 10 2014-02-08, complete)

Oddball's original premise was pretty screwed up to begin with, but I don't know how I feel about this one, to be completely honest. I suppose I feel like the resolution came a little too easily. Perhaps that is more because of the time skips and the fact that the story is all from Hanako's perspect...
by Mahorfeus
Tue Feb 04, 2014 6:22 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565861

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Ch 33 added 2/3/

Well, it's not like the story is called Arrested Developments... I don't expect to see the main characters all feeling like miserable failures by the end of this. Though I guess it could go like that. :(
by Mahorfeus
Tue Feb 04, 2014 1:45 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565861

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Ch 33 added 2/3/

I think the difference is up until even now, Hisao doesn't really know Emi. He is not uncomfortable around her because she keeps her emotional baggage to herself - just like in the VN, she is not interested in dumping her burdens on someone else. On the contrary, she's doing everything she can to ma...
by Mahorfeus
Mon Feb 03, 2014 6:31 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565861

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Ch 33 added 2/3/

Eh, at this point it seems like Emi might withdraw like she did in her own route and push Hisao away to satisfy this guilt complex she has. I get the impression that she believes neither of them can be hurt if she doesn't love him (even if she really does). And maybe what Hisao intended to say to he...