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by gecko
Fri Feb 10, 2012 6:25 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Weekend at Hisao's (Was: At the Train Station) - [Some Porn]
Replies: 201
Views: 104923

Re: Weekend at Hisao's (Was: At the Train Station) - [Some P

Thanks for the explanation on Japanese weddings.
by gecko
Fri Feb 10, 2012 6:00 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Lamb and The Fox
Replies: 83
Views: 20420

Act2 "Exploration" - Scene 1

I sometime wonder if I've got some masochist tendencies. At first, for a youngster bored on a Saturday night, going back to the Slaughterhouse seemed a good idea. Tokyo might offer all kinds of entertainment, but most of them are above my allowance. It's not for nothing that I accepted to share a fl...
by gecko
Fri Feb 10, 2012 12:34 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Weekend at Hisao's (Was: At the Train Station) - [Some Porn]
Replies: 201
Views: 104923

Re: Weekend at Hisao's (Was: At the Train Station) - [Some P

My feels for the last one and half part were quite... Meh... I guess that as a married man, I'm not that teary-eyed about all that wedding ceremony thing, or formal engagement thing. On the other hand, I found it well-written. I've especially appreciated the waiting-for-the-bus part, the atmosphere ...
by gecko
Fri Feb 10, 2012 11:09 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A view from the dark (Feedback appreciated!)
Replies: 33
Views: 5068

Re: A view from the dark (Feedback appreciated!)

I find it even more confusing than the first version.
What are the quotes about?
by gecko
Thu Feb 09, 2012 5:31 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Lamb and The Fox
Replies: 83
Views: 20420

Re: The Lamb and The Fox

Thanks, and you can take your time.
I try to post new chapters weekly more or less, so you're not missing much by reading it at the rhythm that suits you.
by gecko
Wed Feb 08, 2012 5:30 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: KS Academic Conference Paper - Seeking Help
Replies: 143
Views: 38065

Re: KS Academic Conference Paper - Seeking Help

1. Which girl's thread affected you the most emotionally? Why did it do this? Rin. I think it's because I recognized a part of me in her, and admired the other part. The creative person is what I didn't dare to be when I was her age, keeping my imagination to myself, because I didn't want to turn ev...
by gecko
Tue Feb 07, 2012 6:02 pm
Forum: Support
Topic: Steam selling Katawa Shoujo
Replies: 4
Views: 2572

Re: Steam selling Katawa Shoujo

Just check the release date...
by gecko
Tue Feb 07, 2012 5:40 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Reconciliation - (a Hanako bad-end story)
Replies: 227
Views: 79590

Re: Reconciliation - (a Hanako bad-end story)

Arg. I wanted to find something to criticize, like I like to do, but when Lily called, I just had to read as fast as possible and completely forgot about that... Only thing I can say (after a second read), is that I like that Hanako blurted it out directly. Adding another miscommunication on top of ...
by gecko
Tue Feb 07, 2012 5:25 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Lover's Gasp, Lover's Grasp
Replies: 38
Views: 10265

Re: Lover's Gasp, Lover's Grasp

Nice first part, but then, the change of narrator is a bit jarring, given that your first posting was all Hisao, I thought we were going for a single first-person narration. Plus, is the flashback necessary? Hisao could have given us the update about Hanako, and completed it by discussing with her. ...
by gecko
Tue Feb 07, 2012 5:13 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Lilly's Route
Replies: 518
Views: 96023

Re: Lilly's Route

Seems I liked this path just for the thing you didn't: deconstructing the "purity sue" image, and discovering the private Lily letting her hair down and acting on her impulses (healthy adolescent sex drive FTW), and even planning for them (see her being already on the pill) was for me one of the gre...
by gecko
Mon Feb 06, 2012 5:32 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Rin's Path discussion *spoilers*
Replies: 729
Views: 117594

Re: Rin's Path discussion *spoilers*

I don't think the point is that Hisao finally understands Rin. I think the point is he accepts she's thinking differently and loves her like that, misunderstandings included. (and honestly, it gives a brighter outlook for their future - a couple of Rin would have serious problems finding its place i...
by gecko
Sun Feb 05, 2012 5:57 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Is there a path on Hanako's that doesn't approach H-scene?
Replies: 38
Views: 6452

Re: Is there a path on Hanako's that doesn't approach H-scen

I just did Rin's path and the H-scene made me angry. But I don't want to turn off adult-content 'cause I feel it won't be the same. So after reading this thread i found that there will be more shocking H-scenes. UGH! Do all visual novels have H-scenes? I think they could have had complete story eve...
by gecko
Sun Feb 05, 2012 5:43 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Reactions and Reflections (Hisao/Hanako)
Replies: 11
Views: 3620

Re: Reactions and Reflections (Hisao/Hanako)

Good enough for making me want to comment, but I'd say unequal (not in terms of writing quality, more in terms of content for me, so it's purely subjective) Some were a bit too sugary for my tastes. But Lily's one felt nice. And Kenji's was really good. Especially in the first part monologue, I felt...
by gecko
Sun Feb 05, 2012 5:25 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Reconciliation - (a Hanako bad-end story)
Replies: 227
Views: 79590

Re: Reconciliation - (a Hanako bad-end story)

Same here: nice rewrite of a canon scene from another POV, I'd like to see where this goes.
by gecko
Sun Feb 05, 2012 5:24 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Bad Dreams (Hanako)
Replies: 33
Views: 13959

Re: Bad Dreams (Hanako)

I liked it, except for the final scene, where I couldn't think for the smallest moment that Hisao was going to dump her, so I thought it was a bit long before Hanako realizes, I hate trying to follow a dumb narrator (not that Hanako's that dumb, but she was clearly wearing the dumb act during that m...