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by gecko
Sun Mar 11, 2012 8:21 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Rin's Path discussion *spoilers*
Replies: 729
Views: 117593

Re: Rin's Path discussion *spoilers*

Yes to all those analysis. Creating art (not just playing with it, but really creating, like Rin tries to do) engages you completely. It's very hard to relate normally with normal people while in a creative phase. Some creators cope by having no relatives or rejecting them (see Picasso), some become...
by gecko
Sat Mar 10, 2012 5:02 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Lamb and The Fox
Replies: 83
Views: 20420

Act 3 – Scene 2

I'm a mess for the rest of the week. I don't think I've ever been daydreaming more than that, except maybe during English lectures at Yamaku the trimester after Rin left? It's strange how English is more interesting now that I'm in university, I've nearly caught up the slack between my former useles...
by gecko
Fri Mar 09, 2012 6:15 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Discussion - Emi Route (*Spoilers* Warning)
Replies: 290
Views: 47574

Re: Discussion - Emi Route (*Spoilers* Warning)

Dullfinn, I used the term 'race Emi' for a good reason: just choosing to exercise isn't going to put you on Emi's route. To do it, you need to RACE Emi: i.e. try to outrun the school's track team star while just recovering from hospitalisation and with a heart condition. This CANNOT be good for heal...
by gecko
Wed Mar 07, 2012 6:43 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Discussion - Emi Route (*Spoilers* Warning)
Replies: 290
Views: 47574

Re: Discussion - Emi Route (*Spoilers* Warning)

Dullfin, you have to understand that your choice don't only affect Hisao's immediate action, but set him in a state of mind. Talking about Emi with Misha means you're open about the problem. Racing Emi (which I would not, like you, deem 'good for Hisao's health') means you have the same kind of comb...
by gecko
Mon Mar 05, 2012 7:25 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Lamb and The Fox
Replies: 83
Views: 20420

Re: The Lamb and The Fox

Why would Hisao wonder if he were Rin's boyfriend, if she was still with her old boyfriend while dry humping Hisao? Hisao is jumping to conclusions that confuse me. Usually, when a girl is humping you and just explained her boyfriend is cheating on her, there's a good chance she's decided he's her ...
by gecko
Sun Mar 04, 2012 6:31 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Lamb and The Fox
Replies: 83
Views: 20420

Act 3 "Exile" – Scene 1

I wake up looking at some unknown ceiling, in a darkened room. I don't understand where I am. The hospital should be cleaner, this ceiling is not. Plus, shouldn't they have told me if they were going to transfer me? What about my parents? And why is it so dark? Or maybe I'm somewhere in Yamaku? Wait...
by gecko
Sun Feb 26, 2012 9:29 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Reunion: Hisao and Akira Avoid The Family
Replies: 38
Views: 17931

Re: Reunion: Hisao and Akira Avoid The Family

How can you dare do that?
Make me laugh, lower my defences, with things like "You look like a science teacher - I'm one", to dump that on me in the end!
Not bad, though.
by gecko
Sun Feb 26, 2012 8:52 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Reconciliation - (a Hanako bad-end story)
Replies: 227
Views: 79590

Re: Reconciliation - (a Hanako bad-end story)

That was a nice way of bringing closure to the story. But now, I want an epilogue. Why is Sho so close to Hanako? Will he be the boyfriend? How will Lily rebound? If you love those characters, you don't want to leave it to my imagination. (what if I get polluted by another fanfic and decide Hanako &...
by gecko
Sun Feb 26, 2012 8:10 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Discussion - Emi Route (*Spoilers* Warning)
Replies: 290
Views: 47574

Re: Discussion - Emi Route (*Spoilers* Warning)

Emi was my first route, so she put the impression that others were going to go just as fast as Emi, as in going to those special scenes as quickly instead of the adult scenes at the end. But unfortunately I was wrong, nonetheless it was a good storyline. This is because having the "special" scenes ...
by gecko
Fri Feb 24, 2012 7:06 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Lamb and The Fox
Replies: 83
Views: 20420

Re: The Lamb and The Fox

gecko, you ass, if you end the story here I'm going to beat something up with a 10 pound rainbow trout >:[ And I'm going to apply chainsaw to said trout. And lemons. And you will be [static] baked, and then there will be cake. Well, I'm working on act 3, so technically, it doesn't end here. The que...
by gecko
Fri Feb 24, 2012 5:59 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Lamb and The Fox
Replies: 83
Views: 20420

Act2 – Scene 4

Why is this situation disturbing me that much? I've been friends with Rin for what, three months top? By that count, I should still be depressing about Iwanako even more, and yet, I'm not. Hey, I even met her and my old friends again during the last holidays. I won't describe the meeting as very ple...
by gecko
Thu Feb 23, 2012 5:16 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Lamb and The Fox
Replies: 83
Views: 20420

Act2 – Scene 3

I step out of the upstairs corridor and steps down the stairway. I'm greeted by deafening dance music, but, at the foot of the stairs, I'm also greeted by Mio and a friend of her, a tall girl with electric blue hair. We can't talk, but she seems genuinely happy to see me. For a moment, I forget abou...
by gecko
Wed Feb 22, 2012 5:42 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Reconciliation - (a Hanako bad-end story)
Replies: 227
Views: 79590

Re: Reconciliation - (a Hanako bad-end story)

Lily didn't strike me as OC. It's the kind of behaviour you can expect from her when she lets her guard down (see the confession or the hospital scenes.
My suspension of disbelief was more stretched by Sho having so much to relate to Hanako... Oh well, rule of cool and everything, I'm still reading.
by gecko
Sun Feb 19, 2012 5:38 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Lamb and The Fox
Replies: 83
Views: 20420

Re: The Lamb and The Fox

Well, Ken isn't a black and white character, I'm glad it came across. Hisao's got a point (although being jealous, he tends to exaggerate it), but Ken's not just cold hearted, he's got one too, I'm glad it shows. I hope I didn't make him look too good now, the narrator is supposed to be Hisao! (and ...