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by txalolrn9
Thu Apr 12, 2012 1:12 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Which two girls would you want in a non-pairing threesome?
Replies: 40
Views: 4482

Re: Which two girls would you want in a non-pairing threesom

The O.H.L. wrote:Miki and Misha. Together you just get a fuckton of ENERGY!!!!!!!!

I'd say Shizune and Emi

Misha isn't interest in you at all
by txalolrn9
Thu Apr 12, 2012 1:10 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Morning After ??
Replies: 37
Views: 3798

Re: Morning After ??

HarvestmanMan wrote:I'd love to wake up to Misha staring me in the face and going "WAHAHAHA~!"

But that's just me.


wake up

see this:

Image

crap pants
by txalolrn9
Wed Apr 11, 2012 10:27 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Morning After ??
Replies: 37
Views: 3798

Re: Morning After ??

http://radkliler.wakarimasenlol.com/wp- ... _smile.jpg

I wouldnt mind waking up to this for the rest of my life
by txalolrn9
Wed Apr 11, 2012 2:51 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Last sentence to Hanako (Spoilers)
Replies: 29
Views: 3196

Re: Last sentence to Hanako (Spoilers)

During that scene I think Hisao's most likely last sentence is ...

































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by txalolrn9
Sat Apr 07, 2012 2:27 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: How would Hanako be like unscarred?
Replies: 16
Views: 2209

Re: How would Hanako be like unscarred?

I remember a thread about what the girls would be like without their disabilities and you can imagine everyone of them having the exact same personalities with the exception of Hanako
by txalolrn9
Fri Apr 06, 2012 4:27 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Reconnect (Post-Hanako Bad End)
Replies: 21
Views: 4961

Re: Reconnect (Post-Hanako Bad End)

yeah I can see how just rehashing the convo from the other ending is lame

I'll try to change it
by txalolrn9
Fri Apr 06, 2012 2:01 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Reconnect (Post-Hanako Bad End)
Replies: 21
Views: 4961

Re: Reconnect (Post-Hanako Bad End)

This part definitely reads better than the last two, but it's good that you're able to spot the issues yourself. As for the story, I thought it was nice how you got Hisao to get Hanako's attention again. Something subtle that wouldn't chase her off. However, the ending felt rushed - Hisao showing h...
by txalolrn9
Fri Apr 06, 2012 12:20 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Reconnect (Post-Hanako Bad End)
Replies: 21
Views: 4961

Re: Reconnect (Post-Hanako Bad End)

oh, the tenses the tenses

sigh I'm never getting the hang of this

and it's way clunkier in flow and structure than I wanted, I seriously need to redo the last part - too many jumps in conclusion without any explanations ... grrr, I hate them, I might just erased it all and start all over

Le sigh.
by txalolrn9
Fri Apr 06, 2012 12:19 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Reconnect (Post-Hanako Bad End)
Replies: 21
Views: 4961

Re: Reconnect (Post-Hanako Bad End)

I had the strangest dream that I can't for the life of me remember any details of, but it didn't matter as they were sent off to oblivion by the annoying buzz of my alarm clock. A new day. I Quickly and efficiently take the pills that keeps me alive, take a shower, brush my teeth, put on my uniform,...
by txalolrn9
Thu Apr 05, 2012 3:49 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Music that makes you think of KS
Replies: 809
Views: 93221

Re: Which real life song you think fits your favorite charac

Misha and Shizune - Radiohead's "Where I End and You Begin (The Sky is Falling In)"

Hanako - Johnny Cash's "Ring of Fire" or Red Hot Chili Pepper's "Scar Tissue"

Emi - The Pillows' "Runner's High"
by txalolrn9
Wed Apr 04, 2012 5:30 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Team Shizune vs Team Lilly
Replies: 433
Views: 28052

Re: Team Shizune vs Team Lilly

Team Emi & Rin

... Remi


Team Remi
by txalolrn9
Wed Apr 04, 2012 12:36 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Reconnect (Post-Hanako Bad End)
Replies: 21
Views: 4961

Re: Reconnect (Post-Hanako Bad End)

Ah yeah, sorry about those tenses things, I write on the fly and try to edit later
by txalolrn9
Tue Apr 03, 2012 11:46 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Reconnect (Post-Hanako Bad End)
Replies: 21
Views: 4961

Re: Reconnect (Post-Hanako Bad End)

I tried to fix it as best I can, but impaired by ability So I apologize again for that and here's the next part, probably as terrible as the first What's the word when your mind is racing with what to say. There's so much of it all at once that you don't know where to begin. There's no beginning and...
by txalolrn9
Tue Apr 03, 2012 2:51 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Reconnect (Post-Hanako Bad End)
Replies: 21
Views: 4961

Re: Reconnect (Post-Hanako Bad End)

I would like to apologize in advance for being a crappy writer, and as such, the above is so rough and raw I typed it as I went along in oh, 10 or so minutes, so it's definitely a work in progress any constructive criticism and pointers would be greatly appreciated to flesh out this (hopefully) firs...