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by Demoneq
Tue Feb 21, 2012 5:03 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Random Drabbles
Replies: 31
Views: 4497

Re: Random Drabbles

themocaw wrote: Real heroes don’t need to be recognized. We just live our lives in peace.
I like this line, even if coming from Kenji it should probably be at least a little disturbing. :P

Also, what are the "summer wars" people mention? :o
by Demoneq
Mon Feb 20, 2012 6:24 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Wedding with Lilly
Replies: 8
Views: 3730

Re: A Wedding with Lilly

Heh. At first I thought it'd be the obvious Lilly/Hisao thing, and wanted to comment on it as a sort of prequel to Robnonymous' "Reconciliation" story. ;) I think Emi's pretty well portrayed, with her talking about the security guy at the airport etc. (and the stronger words every now and then ;) ) ...
by Demoneq
Fri Feb 17, 2012 2:32 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yields Six Servings
Replies: 24
Views: 5059

Re: Yields Six Servings

I'd certainly appreciate any feedback. I of course reserve the right to take it or leave it, but a second perspective is always good. I just went through it again, and what mostly felt somewhat overdone, was some stuff repeating sort over and over out of context/nowhere, like "Fireworks" or the par...
by Demoneq
Fri Feb 17, 2012 1:30 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yields Six Servings
Replies: 24
Views: 5059

Re: Yields Six Servings

Honestly the more Rin-isms thing was basically just me turning off my personal censor and free-associating whenever I felt the urge to do so. I don't know if it works: if it's overdone I might tone it back down. For me it, err, works partially? Some of them seem to fit, some to be a little forced. ...
by Demoneq
Fri Feb 17, 2012 1:27 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Reconciliation - (a Hanako bad-end story)
Replies: 227
Views: 69583

Re: Reconciliation - (a Hanako bad-end story)

Aww at Hanako's and Sho' speeches. It sort of made me want for some sort of afterlife to be out there, from where Hisao could watch and listen to them. (as silly as it might be for fictional characters ;) )

Also looking forward to more, as well.
by Demoneq
Fri Feb 17, 2012 1:24 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yields Six Servings
Replies: 24
Views: 5059

Re: Yields Six Servings

I like it, though for me the "more Rinisms" version feels a bit forced, as if someone would try to pretend to be Rin, or emulate her thinking, and overdo it a little. (though to be honest, I'm only in Act 2 of Rin's path right now, and besides, she probably has as many interpretations of her way of ...
by Demoneq
Fri Feb 17, 2012 1:17 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: New Experiences
Replies: 81
Views: 12334

Re: New Experiences

Robnonymous wrote: *makes a mental note to be exceedingly nice to Hanako*
Oi, you said you have your own Hanako already! Shoo!

;)

On more serious note, even though I knew, where the story might go, the thought of Hanako being a lesbian feels a little odd. I guess I just have sort of trouble imagining her as one.
by Demoneq
Fri Feb 17, 2012 5:55 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Reconciliation - (a Hanako bad-end story)
Replies: 227
Views: 69583

Re: Reconciliation - (a Hanako bad-end story)

Robnonymous wrote: Let's just say the next part isn't happy...
Have I already called you evil?
I sort of half-hope it's "only" related to funeral and stuff, there's only as much bad things happening that poor Hanako (and the reader/s?) can probably take.

Anyway, do want more. ;)
by Demoneq
Wed Feb 15, 2012 12:52 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Reconciliation - (a Hanako bad-end story)
Replies: 227
Views: 69583

Re: Reconciliation - (a Hanako bad-end story)

“What…” he still seems confused, “you mean within hugging distance?” lol, I'm liking Sho's character more just for the way he responded right there. I don't think he's dense at all, just lying to himself. Also more-or-less on the money. It's more that he's been shocked into awkwardness than an inte...
by Demoneq
Tue Feb 14, 2012 9:20 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: ~Poll~ Who is your favorite?
Replies: 24
Views: 3742

Re: ~Poll~ Who is your favorite?

Voted for Lilly and Hanako, though I also like Yuuko, even if she isn't an option.
by Demoneq
Sun Feb 12, 2012 5:01 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Music that makes you think of KS
Replies: 809
Views: 95804

Re: Songs that make you think of KS

"Someone like you" by Adele.
Beats me why really, maybe one of the girls from the "pair" could sing something like that, if Hisao would end up with the other one. (as in, Emi&Rin, or Lilly&Hanako - not counting Misha for obvious reasons)

www.youtube.com/watch?v=hLQl3WQQoQ0
by Demoneq
Fri Feb 10, 2012 9:24 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Weekend at Hisao's (Was: At the Train Station) - [Some Porn]
Replies: 201
Views: 92057

Re: Weekend at Hisao's (Was: At the Train Station) - [Some P

after all, there was supposed to be Kenji's route, but it was cut from the final version, I believe. No. (I realize you might be joking, but such things get quoted out of context all too easily.) Huh. I was fairly sure I have read about it (maybe in some earlier draft or so) somewhere in those foru...
by Demoneq
Fri Feb 10, 2012 6:02 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Weekend at Hisao's (Was: At the Train Station) - [Some Porn]
Replies: 201
Views: 92057

Re: Weekend at Hisao's (Was: At the Train Station) - [Some P

There's quite a bit of a difference there, since Kenji has never been in love with him. Who knows, maybe he was? (after all, there was supposed to be Kenji's route, but it was cut from the final version, I believe) ;) On more serious note, I meant that it could be awkward for different reasons, lik...
by Demoneq
Fri Feb 10, 2012 5:42 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Weekend at Hisao's (Was: At the Train Station) - [Some Porn]
Replies: 201
Views: 92057

Re: Weekend at Hisao's (Was: At the Train Station) - [Some P

I like that last part (and the previous one), though Hisao is a hypocrite, commenting on Misha as Shizune's maid, while having Kenji as his best man. :twisted: Also this part from the previous one: [Want to rock paper scissors for it?] I ask. Shizune shakes her head. She unwraps the bread and tears ...
by Demoneq
Fri Feb 10, 2012 4:56 am
Forum: Fan Art
Topic: Some stuff I drew
Replies: 40
Views: 9225

Re: Some stuff I drew

She received the scarf last evening, for her birthday. http://img36.imageshack.us/img36/9973/scarves02.jpg It was a gift from Shizune. Who's that, actually? Seems to be Lilly to me, but would rather make sure. please, for the love of Wotan, Zeus, and whatever else gods you may or may not believe in...