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by Brogurt
Tue Sep 11, 2012 8:13 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Am I the only one who feels that Hanako's arc is overrated?
Replies: 108
Views: 10530

Re: Am I the only one who feels that Hanako's arc is overrat

Yeah, route discussion is for kindergarten

Let's go back to metathreads and shitposting
by Brogurt
Mon Sep 10, 2012 9:49 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: The "feels" bazaar.
Replies: 2254
Views: 184531

Re: What KS really did.

Because Hanako's path is bad
by Brogurt
Sun Sep 09, 2012 2:45 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Just another one-shot compilation thread (new story 11/18)
Replies: 86
Views: 15025

Re: Just another one-shot compilation thread (new story 9/1)

Can't say I know any better place to put this post, since it sure as hell doesn't deserve its own topic, and the most relevant offense is in this thread somewhere. This is a public public, i.e., meant towards anyone and everyone who it may concern; not just towards Scissorlips, which is why I opted ...
by Brogurt
Mon Sep 03, 2012 12:12 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Birthday Surprise: A Short Series [Completed 9/12]
Replies: 35
Views: 7751

Re: The Birthday Surprise: A Short Series [Part Three 9/3]

find their way into that girls life for the long run, I'm glad it ended up being as good of a There should be an apostrophe in girl's, and each of those clauses is independent, so that comma should be a period or a semicolon. Also, Hisao seems pretty nonreactive in all this. It is true that such a ...
by Brogurt
Sun Sep 02, 2012 12:43 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: YourFavAnon's Various Fictions [Update 3/16]
Replies: 146
Views: 43061

Re: YourFavAnon's Various Fictions [New Story 9/1]

The kid reminds me of cirno
by Brogurt
Sat Sep 01, 2012 6:45 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Former Sisterhood thread
Replies: 515
Views: 174201

Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

Feel free to look through the BBCode for Mendacium if you're interested in a system where songs can be switched with two mouse clicks, and activated/deactivated with one.

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by Brogurt
Wed Aug 29, 2012 8:06 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Mendācium (Hanako) - Version 1.1.1
Replies: 292
Views: 49191

Re: Mendācium (Hanako) - Version 1.1.1

txalolrn9 wrote:I'll wait for Version 4.7.3.5 where Hanako never cheated on Hisao so nobody can bitch about it
If you think any of the versions will have any number of digits in them that are greater than 1, you are mistaken.
by Brogurt
Wed Aug 29, 2012 4:07 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Mendācium (Hanako) - Version 1.1.1
Replies: 292
Views: 49191

Re: Mendācium (Hanako) - Version 1.1.1

Now updated to 1.1.1 with the proposed changes. I actually did a runthrough of all of Part 4, cleaning up the prose as I went, but Part 4 was the only one I touched. It was surprisingly quick. I wish all my writing was this surprisingly quick. \ Also, this is a pastebin of the previous version http:...
by Brogurt
Tue Aug 28, 2012 8:05 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Former Sisterhood thread
Replies: 515
Views: 174201

Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

I assume you're not going to point out which posts are legit and which ones aren't? Is it that important to you, or are you willing to take me at face value when I say that some feedback has worth and some feedback does not? you're instead trying to base it on other people's posts here... I'm tryin...
by Brogurt
Tue Aug 28, 2012 12:01 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Former Sisterhood thread
Replies: 515
Views: 174201

Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

Also Brogurt, if you see this, I'll get to yours soon. Maybe on the weekend. I'm kind swamped with Uni at the moment. You know me way to well. I've been trying to find a reason to read this 18 chapter monster, but so far I haven't been able to convince myself. So I've been checking the comments, an...
by Brogurt
Mon Aug 27, 2012 6:07 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Mendācium (Hanako) - Version 1.1.1
Replies: 292
Views: 49191

Re: Mendācium (Hanako) - Version 1.1

I won't deny that the scene would still have some purpose, but I decided early on that all the parts of this story would have great significance to the story. No fluff or slice-of-life, (not like any of that would have been appropriate for the story anyway) so fanservice doesn't cut it. For that rea...
by Brogurt
Mon Aug 27, 2012 12:05 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Mendācium (Hanako) - Version 1.1.1
Replies: 292
Views: 49191

Re: Mendācium (Hanako) - Version 1.1

I'm not going to discard the opportunity to get feedback which is valuable to me just because of a couple people on an internet forum with attachment issues. My faith in my writing isn't that low.
by Brogurt
Mon Aug 27, 2012 11:43 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Mendācium (Hanako) - Version 1.1.1
Replies: 292
Views: 49191

Re: Mendācium (Hanako) - Version 1.1

So, I'm not really sure if this deserves a bump, but I had an idea last night that intrigued me. If anyone would be so kind as to respond, how would you feel if the following changes were made to Part 4? Near the beginning, some of the lines about "a lover's comfort" and related sentiments would be ...
by Brogurt
Sun Aug 26, 2012 12:45 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Birthday Surprise: A Short Series [Completed 9/12]
Replies: 35
Views: 7751

Re: The Birthday Surprise: A Short Series [Part One 8/24]

http://pastebin.com/eJc3YZ7C So, if there's one thing I'd like to emphasize, it's that you should make sure that your subject and verb usage is two things 1: Consistent. A speeding bullet should not lumber through the air. 2: Not redundant. A speeding bullet should not speed through the air. A speed...