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pull an allnighter

Funny how people change with time, what happened during Mendacium again? I am standing by the statement that Incense of Lavender did not contain smut, but sexually inclined storytelling. Technically I am in the process of writing a fic that would classify as little more than a fapfic with some DAW'...

Figured I'd try something different, and do something with no descriptions or monologues whatsoever. Just dialogue and a few written notes.

Chicken Scratch “Why, hello there again, Hanako.” “Hello… It feels like it's been a while… doesn't it?” “For me? Not particularly. But I suppose you might see things differently, depending on what's been happening lately… Speaking of, is there anything you'd like to talk about specifically this tim...

It's just like one of my japanese hentais

lolawesome wrote:I feel the ending was too bandaid over a gushing chainsaw on an main artery wound

and that's why I'm trying to think of ways to make the chainsaw wound more like a big papercut

I had an analogy involving hospitals and life support earlier, but then I forgot it

Why are you so rectumravaged

it is an eroge so there had to be a sex scene

that's all you need to know really

ONE MORE THING
consider making her try out a new hairstyle of some sort

txalolrn9 wrote: then a swarm of bees attack her out of nowhere for good measure

Not just that.
A swarm of flaming bees.

The situation I offered would not change the outcome of part 4 or anything, and I'm trying to keep as much of the story intact as possible without demolishing it.

I think the problem here is that you quite clearly made Hanako into the badguy in your story and kept trying to tell the readers she was still sympathetic. Nobody bought it and nobody wants to see the villain get a happy ending. Hanako spent her whole life having people think she was a broken perso...

>Food play
if this doesn't end with multiple infections I'll be disappointed

Because obviously what I was going for the entire time was an exploitation fic and there's no way I'd ever deviate from that

Part 4 is now up. Enjoy~