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by Brogurt
Mon Aug 20, 2012 8:35 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Behind my Scars [Updated to: Chapter 6]
Replies: 58
Views: 17846

Re: Behind my scars [Updated to: Chapter 4]

The spoiler with the 'contains mature content' was to save myself from mod wrath. KS itself is adult content, and I've never seen anyone punished for not designating their fanfiction as the same thing. Besides, you had your warning in the story itself, just like I've done before, and that serves th...
by Brogurt
Mon Aug 20, 2012 12:51 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Body proportions
Replies: 50
Views: 8218

Re: Body proportions

Maybe if KS took place in America there would be more 200/300/200 but it's not so there isn't.
by Brogurt
Mon Aug 20, 2012 12:48 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Petals Fall Twice
Replies: 17
Views: 5452

Re: The Petals Fall Twice

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by Brogurt
Sat Aug 18, 2012 10:34 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Behind my Scars [Updated to: Chapter 6]
Replies: 58
Views: 17846

Re: Behind my scars [Updated to: Chapter 4]

Time for some... hmm, what do you guys call it? Critique? Constructive criticisms? Regardless, I call it bitching. ♥ Contains mature content surprise spoiled >all these ellipses Maybe this is just me who thinks this way, but people who stutter and pause don't have to have pauses in their thought pro...
by Brogurt
Sat Aug 18, 2012 9:14 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: 4LS Has a lot to live up to
Replies: 23
Views: 3509

Re: 4LS Has a lot to live up to

Aura wrote:None of you actually know what is really happening internally with us
Yeah and it sucks monkey fuck
by Brogurt
Fri Aug 17, 2012 9:57 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Did Akira even get a degree for that corporate job?
Replies: 36
Views: 4452

Re: Did Akira even get a degree for that corporate job?

She got the job through some favors.
by Brogurt
Mon Aug 13, 2012 10:42 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Behind my Scars [Updated to: Chapter 6]
Replies: 58
Views: 17846

Re: Behind my scars [Updated to: Chapter 1]

Keep going please
All of the ongoing hanako epilogues are on some kind of hiatus, mine included since I'm such a lazy fuck, and I need my fix
by Brogurt
Mon Aug 13, 2012 7:15 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Behind my Scars [Updated to: Chapter 6]
Replies: 58
Views: 17846

Re: Behind my scars - Teaser

Tormound wrote:Nice teaser
qft
by Brogurt
Sat Aug 11, 2012 7:14 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Recommend a Fan Fic
Replies: 19
Views: 8771

Re: Recommend a Fan Fic

I'm gonna go way out of the way here and pick the fic that kind of inspired me to write in the first place, despite the fact that it was written over 38 months ago. And no, there is no part two. Please don't necro.

Golden Room
by Brogurt
Thu Aug 09, 2012 5:24 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: YourFavAnon's Various Fictions [Update 3/16]
Replies: 146
Views: 43062

Re: YourFavAnon's Various Fictions [New Story 8/3]

YourFavAnon wrote: Don't bother with critique for this one to be honest, save it for the next one.
I don't even read things that aren't Hanako, let alone critique. The hell are you talking about?
by Brogurt
Tue Aug 07, 2012 12:08 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: What do you think about Hisao's personality?
Replies: 54
Views: 5273

Re: What do you think about Hisao's personality?

His only personality trait is stupidity which varies wildly as necessary to advance the plot, and that comes off as very contrived more often than not.
by Brogurt
Tue Aug 07, 2012 3:28 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Am I the only one who feels that Hanako's arc is overrated?
Replies: 108
Views: 10530

Re: Am I the only one who feels that Kanako's arc is overrat

Well the route is patchwork and was written by someone who didn't want to write it, but on the other hand Hanako is probably the most popular girl.
Oh wait the latter half of that statement doesn't do anything to rectify the former.
by Brogurt
Sun Aug 05, 2012 9:47 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: YourFavAnon's Various Fictions [Update 3/16]
Replies: 146
Views: 43062

Re: YourFavAnon's Various Fictions [New Story 8/3]

YourFavAnon wrote:while running on minimal sleep
As opposed to the last one in which you passed out while writing?
Anyway I'll get around to criticizing/bitching in a sec, then I'll probably edit this post to accomodate
by Brogurt
Sun Aug 05, 2012 4:21 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Random discustion's on the character's
Replies: 29
Views: 3552

Re: Random discustion's on the character's

Some shit with a dog
Fuck the police
by Brogurt
Fri Aug 03, 2012 2:43 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: YourFavAnon's Various Fictions [Update 3/16]
Replies: 146
Views: 43062

Re: YourFavAnon's Various Fictions [New Story 8/3]

Oh hey, you posted it here so I don't have to seek you out or anything. Forget what I said on /vg/ then.

http://pastebin.com/wGukfnmP

Bam. Enjoy.