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by moonpalace
Fri Oct 28, 2011 12:10 pm
Forum: Blog posts
Topic: Rin's Path Direction Complete
Replies: 115
Views: 38153

Re: Rin's Path Direction Complete

I can see the ending. Ahh Poghorn beat me to it. I was going to ask "How? Are you a psychic?" Anyway thanks for the update. I won't have the restraint to save Rin till last though. So once Shizune's path direction is finished, there'll be beta testing for some time and then it'll be released? Hope ...
by moonpalace
Thu Oct 20, 2011 12:17 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Revenge: A Story in Three-ish Acts
Replies: 6
Views: 1569

Re: Revenge: A Story in Three-ish Acts

Yeah I was really enjoying it all the way until the third-ish act. It's not to say the epilogue wasn't well written and paced, but it kind of soured everything for me. I just can't imagine what Shizune could have possibly done to deserve that. Whereas previously I totally sympathised with Lilly and ...
by moonpalace
Wed Oct 19, 2011 9:04 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tripping
Replies: 89
Views: 24911

Re: Tripping

^ What he said.
by moonpalace
Wed Oct 19, 2011 9:01 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Playing Zelda game while visually impaired
Replies: 4
Views: 1498

Playing video games while visually impaired

Have you seen this http://www.oddworld.com/?p=394 ? After reading it I thought, it would be great if game designers could create an audio only game. A fully voiced sound novel would be cool but of course the script, voice acting and recording equipment would have to be the best quality. Thankfully I...
by moonpalace
Mon Oct 10, 2011 12:10 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Brogurt's Chocolatey Hanako Fanfiction (Updated Nov 26th)
Replies: 113
Views: 22033

Re: Pills

Thanks, I enjoyed that. I liked the simple embellishments you made to the story - the sweet little "ritual" they have, how she has opened up to him and of course the end with the chess. I also appreciate your attitude to criticism. The only other little thing I can think of adding is, Time passes us...
by moonpalace
Tue Oct 04, 2011 2:35 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tripping
Replies: 89
Views: 24911

Re: Tripping

Regarding Lilly though, you might have noticed that I'm not exactly going for natural speech in the first place. (I've taken a few liberties with her speech patterns compared to the VN to make her more distinct from the rest of the cast.) Yeah it's a fair point, it's just that I can't say I recall ...
by moonpalace
Mon Oct 03, 2011 10:10 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tripping
Replies: 89
Views: 24911

Re: Tripping

Yay! Hanako actually was my least favorite character in KS, though I'm sure I felt as teased at her ending as anyone else. But in this series, I have to say, you make all the characters so likeable and I love them all very much. In fact, I think KS will have it's work cut out to compare with your wr...
by moonpalace
Wed Sep 28, 2011 7:23 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Katawa Roadtrip! Chapter 6 up!
Replies: 45
Views: 8341

Re: Katawa Roadtrip! Chapter 5 up!

"I try to stutter out an answer, but my tongue trips over itself; the only word I can get out is a fumbling “W-what?” Unfortunately, I respond before Kenji does, drawing Misha’s attention to me, despite Kenji having been the one that spoke out against [her]." "I wrote it down, said goodbye to the la...
by moonpalace
Fri Sep 23, 2011 6:59 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Katawa Roadtrip! Chapter 6 up!
Replies: 45
Views: 8341

Re: Katawa Roadtrip! Chapter 4 up!

From Chapter 3, "I really can’t observe this scene any more. Call my heartless,".

I enjoyed it. Thanks.
by moonpalace
Wed Sep 07, 2011 12:17 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Musing on my Muse
Replies: 21
Views: 4091

Re: Musing on my Muse

Normally, I would start a post/story like this by explaining my motivation. However, in this instance, the explaination is a little autotelic and circular, so I will leave it to the story. It's funny you should say that because I saw something last night which sparked off a crazy train of thought. ...
by moonpalace
Sat Sep 03, 2011 12:43 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tripping
Replies: 89
Views: 24911

Re: Tripping

I wrote a plethora of praise earlier about almost everything in this chapter but it got deleted because I ran out of battery power so here is a regurgitated form; the serene environment and atmosphere, the usual humour that made me laugh which you pull off so well, Leon is really sweet, oooh and Ook...
by moonpalace
Sun Aug 28, 2011 6:41 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tripping
Replies: 89
Views: 24911

Re: Tripping

Really? It's funny to hear you say writing her is hard because by the finished product you make it look easy! When I started reading this I was really impressed with how you established the character was Hanako within the first few sentences. And then the accident with Leon, what a tragedy. I feel d...
by moonpalace
Sat Aug 27, 2011 3:11 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Learn Japanese sign language (site in English)
Replies: 1
Views: 872

Re: Learn Japanese sign language (site in English)

After 2:30 minutes in the I Love You video she shares a funny prank by a couple of Japanese girls. The victims' faces are priceless.
by moonpalace
Sat Aug 20, 2011 9:10 am
Forum: Fan Art
Topic: my favorite girl
Replies: 15
Views: 7208

Re: my favorite girl

Thanks for coming back and doing my favorite girl! Rin does look really pretty, the expression is great and I love the colouring on her skin and eyes. The style is more western and I like it.
by moonpalace
Fri Aug 19, 2011 4:11 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: About the game's erotica...
Replies: 427
Views: 50547

Re: About the game's erotica...

to totally change the context of the potter books, it only takes switching a d with a g in a single word I couldn't leave without saying thanks for this. I didn't care much for HP but I never... saw all those references like that! Brogurt, are you saying you are so adverse to the h-scenes that you'...