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by Petermeter
Mon Aug 08, 2011 8:07 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: KosherBacon's writefaggotry: Lilly, Hisao, Page 18
Replies: 282
Views: 57831

Re: KosherBacon's writefaggotry: Short one on page 17

Good to see you're writing something new once in a while, I like how most of your stories swing off of the usual routes at some point. Makes me lol quite a bit sometimes. But erasing a whole segment of a life, discards the joy along with the pain. On a sidenote, you might want to lose the comma there.
by Petermeter
Sat Jul 30, 2011 2:56 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tripping
Replies: 89
Views: 24562

Re: Tripping

It's a real delight for me to come each week and read latest installment. I love how your writing flows so smoothly. btw I'm also really enjoying "these slice of life" episodes as I think someone put it. I laughed at the characters' observations and jokes you told, like the exchange with Ooki and J...
by Petermeter
Fri Jul 29, 2011 7:43 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: ~Bad End ~ (Rin's path)
Replies: 5
Views: 4006

Re: ~Bad End ~ (Rin's path)

I hereby give today's golden spade for digging up the (pretty much) oldest post available to Aakren. Grats, man.
by Petermeter
Wed Jul 13, 2011 8:39 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Finger Training
Replies: 68
Views: 10292

Re: Finger Training

I don't think either that the story is bad, you just have a lot of work with figuring out all the characters as it seems you're not using (or not yet) any prebuilt characters. That leaves all the work to you, you don't get much of a base to build on. (Of course, I am saying this with nothing compara...
by Petermeter
Sun Jul 03, 2011 9:49 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tripping
Replies: 89
Views: 24562

Re: Tripping

Heh, the comma discussion was one thing where I learned about my mistakes, too. Not that I'm gonna change because of that :P
Anyways, Ookis chapter was one of my favourites so far, so I thought I'd comment on it, too.
by Petermeter
Mon Jun 13, 2011 6:12 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: No Title~ Fragment 1 up~
Replies: 13
Views: 2516

Re: No Title~

*Bump* *bump* *engine dies* … -awkward silence- *door opens* ..... I think the above gives a pretty good summary of what caught my eye in that text. My opinion would be that you really should *not* use the asterisks for actions that take place, but rather - if you use them at all - for emphasis. " ...
by Petermeter
Wed Jun 01, 2011 2:45 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: screw it, we need a boobs and ass topic
Replies: 89
Views: 16904

Re: screw it, we need a boobs and ass topic

Deafmutes, on the other hand, don't. They might not be able to talk, but what keeps them from making sounds? I mean, like, do they have to be ninjas to be mute? But your point may just be that they're not able to use their vocal chords. That much should be valid. Also I'd say masturbating would inc...
by Petermeter
Tue May 31, 2011 5:40 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Recommend a VN
Replies: 1746
Views: 229490

Re: Recommend a VN

FFUUUUU- okay, listen, I've been going by "Silentcook" on the Internets since well before F/SN was ever released. It's a coincidence! Really! Delta thought it would be funny to stick me with that forum title! I'm sorry, just kinda stumbled over the line in the game and thought it was familiar :) An...
by Petermeter
Mon May 30, 2011 1:51 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Recommend a VN
Replies: 1746
Views: 229490

Re: Recommend a VN

I would really recommend Fate/Stay Night. Story is rather great, the paths you can play are really different which counts as a bonus point for me since you basically have three complete stories to choose and I love the bonus material (and some others seem to, too) Only point to deduct there would be...
by Petermeter
Thu May 26, 2011 7:45 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Katawa Kijo
Replies: 146
Views: 53253

Re: Katawa Kijo

Just on a sidenote here - maybe you would like to update the OP with the links to the last four or five chapters ( btw: there is a typo in the OP in the number eightteen - not that it really matters). Just in case there are new people to this story.
by Petermeter
Thu May 26, 2011 7:42 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Numbered Days
Replies: 117
Views: 29421

Re: Numbered Days

I just reread the entire story for memory reasons, because it seemed fitting to do so after the epilogue.
Nice work, Leotrak, nice work indeed. Thanks for sharing it.
by Petermeter
Mon May 16, 2011 5:58 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Katawa Kijo
Replies: 146
Views: 53253

Re: Katawa Kijo

I loved this fanfic. Easily within the top ten of stories I have read - and I'd like to say I read rather a lot.
Thanks a lot for letting us in on that story, Mirage. If you find the time to write other stories, I'd spend my time on reading them anytime.
And btw: my respect for nearly 50k words o.O
by Petermeter
Sun May 01, 2011 11:24 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Katawa Kijo
Replies: 146
Views: 53253

Re: Katawa Kijo

Your reward for finding it is the next chapter ;-) Well, thank you a lot :) Hanakos reaction to Kenji in general is written out pretty nicely, liked that a lot. Keep the story up, its rather better than some of the books I read, and as somebody stated elsewhere, I did pay for them and this is free....
by Petermeter
Sat Apr 23, 2011 9:31 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Katawa Kijo
Replies: 146
Views: 53253

Re: Katawa Kijo

Gotta say I loved that turn in the story, its a pretty good explanation of why Kenji is (was) so mad about women. She dried to drain him (Thats rather in the middle of this Chapter) I don't really know if that makes sense there, I read it as "She tried to drain him", but feel free to correct me. But...
by Petermeter
Tue Apr 19, 2011 11:50 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Katawa Kijo
Replies: 146
Views: 53253

Re: Katawa Kijo

Mirage_GSM wrote:
Please look forward to chapter Sixteen
I guess I'm gonna wait for chapter 15 before waiting for 16 :) Anyways, nice chapter as always.