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by Silentcook
Sun Nov 20, 2011 8:54 pm
Forum: Act 1 Preview
Topic: [solved] phpBB warning on the threads
Replies: 3
Views: 3901

Re: phpBB warning on the threads

PyTom notified, problem should be solved.
by Silentcook
Tue Nov 15, 2011 1:31 pm
Forum: Blog posts
Topic: Shizune's Path Direction Complete
Replies: 159
Views: 79507

Re: Shizune's Path Direction Complete

Latest wordcount clocked in at more than 485 thousands - that's including all of Act 1 too, but still, it should give you an idea. Act 1 alone is very approximately 15-20% or so of the full game.

For further comparison, Fate/Stay Night is ~800,000 words and Clannad is ~600,000 words.
by Silentcook
Sun Nov 13, 2011 9:55 pm
Forum: Blog posts
Topic: Rin's Path Direction Complete
Replies: 115
Views: 61242

Re: Rin's Path Direction Complete

Funnily enough, the IP of the previous post is Italian, though. :mrgreen:
by Silentcook
Sat Nov 05, 2011 7:58 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Brogurt's Chocolatey Hanako Fanfiction (Updated Nov 26th)
Replies: 113
Views: 39232

Re: Brogurt's One-Stop Shop for Hanako Fanfiction

It's just a figure of speech, you'd have to be taking things very literally (too literally) to interpret this as Hisao being genuinely stupid. You're missing the point I'm trying to make. The problem is not whether Hisao is stupid or not. It's how he behaves in comparison to the rest of his behavio...
by Silentcook
Sat Nov 05, 2011 9:31 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Brogurt's Chocolatey Hanako Fanfiction (Updated Nov 26th)
Replies: 113
Views: 39232

Re: Brogurt's One-Stop Shop for Hanako Fanfiction

I realize the rest of my writing wasn't particularly top notch, but I really don't understand what this means. Care to elaborate? The statement of something that can only be absolutely obvious to the character is made in such a way that it looks like it took actual effort to figure things out. Ther...
by Silentcook
Thu Nov 03, 2011 4:14 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Brogurt's Chocolatey Hanako Fanfiction (Updated Nov 26th)
Replies: 113
Views: 39232

Re: Tea for Two

! Not playing Metal Gear perpetuated outright Doesn't mean what you think I’d might the heat and the cold And then there’s the words I have my fair share of disbeliefs concerning words. Grammar Stupid Hisao. Third person It certainly wouldn’t be good habit to let discrepancies like this go untouche...
by Silentcook
Tue Nov 01, 2011 11:05 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A very Halloween Katawa Shoujo CYOA TAKE2
Replies: 25
Views: 10053

Re: A very Halloween Katawa Shoujo CYOA TAKE2

traitor wrote:you know, I bet you could make a full interactive CYOA with a bunch of spoiler tags. It'll be like a CYOA thread, but without the groupies.
If you mean doing that on these forums, you seem to be misunderstanding the meaning of "Sorry, no."
by Silentcook
Thu Oct 20, 2011 4:04 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Revenge: A Story in Three-ish Acts
Replies: 6
Views: 3043

Re: Revenge: A Story in Three-ish Acts

Long story short, going over the top with characterization rape (ha ha) hardly ever works.

Pity, too. The problem here is not the ending shocker; it's that it's not properly supported earlier.
by Silentcook
Thu Oct 20, 2011 6:00 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Haiku
Replies: 47
Views: 12745

Re: Haiku

Yeah, I think we have kinda peaked the humor in this.
by Silentcook
Mon Oct 17, 2011 5:28 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Haiku
Replies: 47
Views: 12745

Re: Haiku

Oh look, a new thread
taking a peek inside it
...will need sunglasses

YE-E-E-E-E-
EA-A-A-A-A-A-A-
AH-H-H-H-H
8)
by Silentcook
Mon Oct 10, 2011 9:29 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Brogurt's Chocolatey Hanako Fanfiction (Updated Nov 26th)
Replies: 113
Views: 39232

Re: Pills

Re: prefacing lines with names. Therein does not lie improvement. You may want to take a look here . The alternative you picked is harder to perform, no doubt about it. Re: descriptions. They are not so much contradictory (except for audible pauses, who manages that too) as nearly meaningless . Rand...
by Silentcook
Mon Oct 10, 2011 4:29 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Brogurt's Chocolatey Hanako Fanfiction (Updated Nov 26th)
Replies: 113
Views: 39232

Re: Pills

You naffed up here: She takes a long pause. “I know.” I inhale deeply to try and compose myself. But even despite this, I can feel my heartbeat accelerating. It's impossible to be sure of who says the spoken line, which breaks flow badly. You also naffed up on the whole "Hanako is beautiful" bit. Sh...
by Silentcook
Sun Oct 09, 2011 5:53 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: About the game's erotica...
Replies: 427
Views: 103288

Re: About the game's erotica...

Let's see... use of the word "waifu", >greentexting, and whining about personal problems.

I strongly suggest you immediately stop doing any of the above.
by Silentcook
Sun Sep 25, 2011 9:36 am
Forum: Feedback
Topic: Italian Feedback: Commenti su Anteprima Katawa Shoujo Atto 1
Replies: 395
Views: 154946

Re: Italian Feedback: Commenti su Anteprima Katawa Shoujo At

A tuo piacimento. Una squadra con cui collaborare però ce l' hai, se vuoi. Sono IO . :mrgreen: E JaN, se decide di partecipare di nuovo, e almeno un' altra persona che si era presentata innumeri eoni fa per il gioco completo, se ancora è interessata. Inoltre, sia ben chiaro che dichiararsi disponibi...
by Silentcook
Sun Sep 25, 2011 6:41 am
Forum: Feedback
Topic: Italian Feedback: Commenti su Anteprima Katawa Shoujo Atto 1
Replies: 395
Views: 154946

Re: Italian Feedback: Commenti su Anteprima Katawa Shoujo At

Non siamo in cerca di collaboratori per la creazione del gioco completo, ma come per le FAQ: Q: I want to translate KS to a different language, what do you think about it? A: We think "sure". Contact Suriko on forums or IRC, but prepare to show that this is not just on the spur of the moment and you...