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by Mirage_GSM
Sun May 08, 2016 4:00 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tactility - A Parallel Universe Fanfiction
Replies: 27
Views: 9268

Re: Tactility - A Points-Of-Divergence AU Fanfiction

Hello from me as well. First of all, yes Proprioception Deficit Disorder, though very rare, does exist , but it's not quite what you described in your initial post. I've used a character with Proprioception Deficit Disorder in one of my stories , if you're interested. What you described sounds more ...
by Mirage_GSM
Sat May 07, 2016 3:10 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 573205

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Presenting: Nurse & Meiko)

Still haven't found that discussion on how unrealistic a Hisao X Meiko pairing would be, and I'm starting to think I might have imagined it^^°

While searching I came across the old "Limits of Fanfiction" thread... Ah... good old times :-)
by Mirage_GSM
Sat May 07, 2016 1:43 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 573205

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Presenting: Nurse & Meiko)

Hmm, I don't think that was the discussion I was thinking of... I was thinking of you because in the PMs I exchanged with Hotkey - and which I reread to remember what was going on back then - he was especially concerned about your criticism, but maybe that was because he didn't want to disappoint a ...
by Mirage_GSM
Fri May 06, 2016 7:05 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Are the pasts of the girls darker than they first seem?
Replies: 28
Views: 17005

Re: Are the pasts of the girls darker than they first seem?

Also, Jigoro is not the most trustworthy source for a psychological assessment... I agree that it's likely that Misha is suffering from depression, but I'm not a psychologist, so I won't presume to insist that diagnosis is true. I've been heartbroken before, being best friends with a girl who didn't...
by Mirage_GSM
Fri May 06, 2016 6:45 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 573205

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Presenting: Nurse & Meiko)

Lost Opportunities: Hmm. It's a well-written story, but I think it doesn't work that well as a standalone short story. It is just a scene from an ongoing narrative without a real beginning or end. Twice: Interesting to see that Meiko was originally supposed to be spelled Maiko :-) Also interesting ...
by Mirage_GSM
Thu May 05, 2016 6:54 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Are the pasts of the girls darker than they first seem?
Replies: 28
Views: 17005

Re: Are the pasts of the girls darker than they first seem?

She's clearly a manic depressive... There someone goes again throwing around the name of a medical condition they know nothing about, saying some character "clearly" suffers from it... Misha is not bipolar (which is the sciency name for manic dpressive people). She is unhappy, because she is in lov...
by Mirage_GSM
Tue May 03, 2016 6:17 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flutter - Level Twenty One: Footsies [25/3/17]
Replies: 258
Views: 103264

Re: Flutter - Boss Level: White Mage [2/5/16]

Well, I guess I'll have to defer to the Cook on culinary matters...
by Mirage_GSM
Mon May 02, 2016 12:21 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flutter - Level Twenty One: Footsies [25/3/17]
Replies: 258
Views: 103264

Re: Flutter - Boss Level: White Mage [2/5/16]

So when did nurse get promoted to doctor?

More importantly, how could Hisao choose Carbonara over Lasagna?
by Mirage_GSM
Sun Apr 24, 2016 1:43 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flutter - Level Twenty One: Footsies [25/3/17]
Replies: 258
Views: 103264

Re: Flutter - Level Ten: Shadow of Memories [24/4/16]

Nurse/Doctor's choice to grab Hisao is two-fold; A) because he's a tricky sonuvabitch and knows exactly what he's about to do to Hisao, ie - throw him under a bus and 2) because it would be good odds that Rika would rush to meet him out of class. I thought this would be the better route than having...
by Mirage_GSM
Sun Apr 24, 2016 5:20 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flutter - Level Twenty One: Footsies [25/3/17]
Replies: 258
Views: 103264

Re: Flutter - Level Ten: Shadow of Memories [24/4/16]

I’ve spent a lot of my time this semester alone with you; how could they not be? Japan has trimesters. it never feels like the right time to make my move or we interrupted… we are interrupted Do they keep the patient's medical history open for all to read beside their beds at hospitals whrere you l...
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Apr 22, 2016 5:34 pm
Forum: Feedback
Topic: Good Experience Nearly Ruined At the End
Replies: 13
Views: 7289

Re: Good Experience Nearly Ruined At the End

Of all the girls at Yamaku, she's the only one that comes close to outright causing you to drop dead, despite knowing goddamn well how dangerous Hisao's condition is. Well, she doesn't know quite how serious it is at the time... getting kicked out of her house in one path was a pretty shocking expe...
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Apr 22, 2016 1:02 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "Lost & Found" 16/5/16
Replies: 339
Views: 117723

Re: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "Snowblind Finale" 22/4/16

As we all know, I am a massive sadist and love to put characters through the ringer.
Not really, but you've again shown your aptitude for sarcasm :-)

Also: "wringer"
by Mirage_GSM
Wed Apr 20, 2016 10:34 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Mask Off: A Molly Route (Update 3/8)
Replies: 72
Views: 36021

Re: "Can you open your mind?" A Molly Route (Update 2/29)

“Ikuno and I went shopping last weekend and I bought these clothes. ” She should be wearing the clothes she bought as well.” The weekend before the track meet would have been the festival... Other than that there are a few places where it looks like you made last minute changes but stopped halfway,...
by Mirage_GSM
Tue Apr 19, 2016 9:52 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "Lost & Found" 16/5/16
Replies: 339
Views: 117723

Re: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "Snowblind Part V" 19/4/16

as it leaves without Miki and I.
You know what I mean, don't you? :-)

Nice artwork. Where'd you get Shizune from? She looks familiar...