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by Mirage_GSM
Mon Oct 31, 2016 1:26 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hisao and Kenji: Masterful One Shots! Winter Update!
Replies: 198
Views: 75382

Re: Hisao and Kenji: Masterful One Shots! Halloween Update

Having seen neither of those films probably takes away from the enjoyment of this story a bit, but still - thanks for the treat :-)

Oh, and:
a considerable feaet since it wasn’t twist-of
by Mirage_GSM
Mon Oct 31, 2016 10:22 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Bells of Life-Kirino Kage (OC) Update:2018-05-14
Replies: 90
Views: 44735

Re: The Bells of Life-Kirino Kage (OC) Update:2016-10-31

Thanks for the new chapter! No complaints this time around, only the beginning was a bit abrupt - it didn't really follow the end of the previous chapter, as if there was a bit missing in between. And one minor nitpick: He allows himself to hold the cigarette puff for a moment, allowing the smoke to...
by Mirage_GSM
Mon Oct 31, 2016 9:37 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Double Update 3/14)
Replies: 1140
Views: 572115

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 10/31)

Very good chapter again, but I'm not quite sold on the pitch thing: “Okay Saki, I have the metronome set at two thirds of normal speed for this piece. Is that okay?” If you've got a player with speed control try listening to a piece of music at 66% speed... That's going to be harder to play than ori...
by Mirage_GSM
Sat Oct 29, 2016 2:42 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 573205

Re: Yamaku Book Club (All Hallow's Eve Edition)

Couldn't really get into Ghosts. For one thing the weird way everyone is talking is putting me off, for another the story seems disjointed with the attempt of putting it all together at the end not really working. Ghostbusted was better in those regards, but I'm not really sure where it fits in chro...
by Mirage_GSM
Sat Oct 29, 2016 2:10 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Mask Off: A Molly Route (Update 3/8)
Replies: 72
Views: 36021

Re: "Can you open your mind?" A Molly Route (Update 10/21)

Nice to see you're back. One or two typos, but nothing worth mentioning.

The chapter was good overall, but the shopping section dragged on a bit - with four or five stores and listing what everyone was looking at for each of them.
by Mirage_GSM
Wed Oct 26, 2016 4:52 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Black and white (updated 10/18/16)
Replies: 26
Views: 15464

Re: Black and white (updated 10/18/16)

Never dismiss first hunches...
Hell, Saki had to practically bribe you just to get you to come here—”
Well, it was more extortion than bribery :-)

Anyway seeing this back was quite a surprise. Is there more coming, or is this just getting the remnants out?
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Oct 07, 2016 3:09 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: What happened? - Shizune sad ending
Replies: 1
Views: 2416

Re: What happened? - Shizune sad ending

Whelp...

You managed to make a sad end even sadder - Congratulations, I guess :-)
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Sep 30, 2016 4:12 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Prequel KS- Haruhiko Suzumiya
Replies: 6
Views: 3955

Re: Prequel KS- Haruhiko Suzumiya

I dimly recall seeing this when it was put up, but like Oddball didn't want to read that wall of text. Then I didn't notice when you changed it... So, first of all some technicalities, since you said this was a language exercise for you. The track carrie d s a dense smell of burnt rubber to see that...
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Sep 30, 2016 1:37 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Summer of Tales -A H&K Summer Series
Replies: 42
Views: 16836

Re: A Summer of Tales (Updated 9/26)

Thanks for having written another few thousand words to keep us entertained :-)
by Mirage_GSM
Sun Sep 25, 2016 7:23 pm
Forum: Support
Topic: Missing a Picture and a Scene.
Replies: 9
Views: 6011

Re: Missing a Picture and a Scene.

Yes, it is, but the fight is probably the most memorable thing do distinguish between the two paths. If you don't remember talking to Misha, you probably did not have the fight. Tell Mutou you don't have time for him if he asks you, and then when you visit Emi go after her instead of talking to her ...
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Sep 22, 2016 11:21 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Summer of Tales -A H&K Summer Series
Replies: 42
Views: 16836

Re: A Summer of Tales (Updated 9/19)

Two small things:
but for a much simply reason.
simpler
“At least your busy,..."
you're

Also: Yay, Halloween specials! 8)
by Mirage_GSM
Tue Sep 20, 2016 4:13 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Random KS Discussion
Replies: 3060
Views: 642477

Re: Notable non-KS disabled characters

Yesterday I saw a performance by a chinese troupe in which all of the artists are disabled. It was fantastic. I found a few videos on Youtube: Behind the scenes Thousand-armed Guanyin The Soul of the Peacock If you pay attention you can see the person directing the performers at the side of the stag...
by Mirage_GSM
Mon Sep 19, 2016 8:09 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: A new novel by Cpl Crud
Replies: 29
Views: 14821

Re: A new novel by Cpl Crud

It's Russian and simply means "land"... No idea if there are other meanings in other languages.
by Mirage_GSM
Mon Sep 19, 2016 4:23 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: A new novel by Cpl Crud
Replies: 29
Views: 14821

Re: A new novel by Cpl Crud

Is there a PDF version available somewhere? Amazon only offers "Kindle"
They offer apps for emulating kindle on phones but I dislike reading novels on small screens.
by Mirage_GSM
Mon Sep 19, 2016 4:15 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: A new novel by Cpl Crud
Replies: 29
Views: 14821

Re: A new novel by Cpl Crud

I just ask because I don't want to risk being banned by the Cook :-)