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It didn't help you? Help? No, why should it? In terms of writing style using colours is just marginally better than using script format. I don't mind it as long as the writing itself makes it clear who is talking even without the colours, but as I pointed out this is where your story was confusing ...

Tenses are a lot better than in the previous chapter - probably because this one is mostly present tense. A few remarks (not comprehensive): Since my shirts from home not sharing the same collar height "since my shirts from home don't share..." “I’m sorry! I didn’t look where I went to!” She bumped ...

Don~t overdo the culture clash thing. If I read the part so far correctly your character was born and raised in Japan, so there shouldn't be any issues regarding language and writing. That's my main gripe with the usual "western exchange student" and it shouldn't be an issue here, so I didn't mentio...

Apart from the beginning seeming VERY similar to the VN - especially the friends who visit for a few days and stop and the parents wiling to sell the house seem familiar - there's nothing much to complain about in this short bit. Except for the tenses... Those need some work and more than would be p...

Well, apart from the H-scenes thing and 4LS' unwillingness to censor anything - isn't it Steam's business modell to get a share of the sales?
How would they do that with a game that's completely free?

Well, this story is kind of sparse with temporal cues, but in chapter 8 it is still "a few days" before the festival, so chapter seven might still be Hisao's first or second day at Yamaku. Not that surprising that he hasn't met him yet.

On that note it also seems odd that He has Kenji for a neighbor but didn't even know Hisao existed.

Can you point to the section you're referring to?
I think I checked for consistency here, but I might have missed something...

Ähh... Seit Mitte letzten Jahres fertig?
Den Deutschpatch kannst du dir hier herunterladen.

You know, I'd almost forgotten about this story, but I'm glad to see it's still being worked on.
Just reread it from the start, and it's really good.

Oh, there are still quite a few people stil visiting the forum regularly - including some of the devs, so I'm sure your message will reach at least some of them.

You never had any scruples about jumping up and down timelines before...

Thats not what I meant ? I kind of mean it would of been nicer to see a date because it ended when she came out of her shell...I just wanted to see being able to express it You know it doesn't work like that, don't you? Hanako is not like a carterpillar - coming out of her pupa in the final scene a...

I doubt you will get a clear answer to this question, since the policy here has always been to leave interpretations to the readers. However iIrc the only medical professional who comments on Hisao's life expectancy is the doctor in the prologue, who says that people with Hisao's condition can live ...

I miss the community this forum used to have. It used to be hard to keep up with all the new posts and discussions. Now it can go days, even weeks at times without anything new really happening. By all means, start some conversation. You get going, somebody is bound to join in. ...as long as you do...

Very good chapter again, but I'm not quite sold on the pitch thing: Holy crap, somehow there was an entire paragraph explaining this that didn't get copied over. I'll fix that when I get home. The idea is that the computer ups the speed but keeps the pitch the same, so you simply play the tune at a...