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by Mirage_GSM
Sat Jan 21, 2017 4:24 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Ask!
Replies: 4980
Views: 1482614

Re: Ask!

Man, Hanako is the god damn top-tier waifu. Pretty much everyone loves her, myself included. Also, the team never really made any character with the intent of them being easily forgotten, or disliked. Although Hanako's original story was like that, it was later changed. First of all let me quote th...
by Mirage_GSM
Sat Jan 21, 2017 4:21 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Infinite Promises - A Lilly Epilogue [updated 6/8]
Replies: 51
Views: 23176

Re: Infinite Promises - A Lilly Route Epilogue [updated 1/20

What Jake said. Scissorlips' Suzu story was often critizised for depicting the Hollywood kind of narcolepsy that hasn't much basis in reality. Real-life narcoleptics will be on some kind of medication that will control their condition to some degree (and Suzu would be as well). I should have specifi...
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Jan 20, 2017 12:22 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Infinite Promises - A Lilly Epilogue [updated 6/8]
Replies: 51
Views: 23176

Re: Infinite Promises - A Lilly Route Epilogue [updated 1/20

Well, the first thing that stuck out to me was that if I was told to name a training method for Hisao where he was more likely to gruesomely kill himself than weightlifting, I would be coming up blank - except for maybe kickboxing. Moving on... very much enjoy the feeling of her fingers running thro...
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Jan 19, 2017 1:10 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Double Update 3/14)
Replies: 1140
Views: 572115

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 1/19)

Excellent chapter again! I especially liked the line I can't for the life of me remember what exactly that homework is, but I'm sure it will come back to me when my brain finishes rebooting. One minor quibble: Not that I'm not looking forward to seeing Saki, but even without that motivation, the clo...
by Mirage_GSM
Mon Jan 16, 2017 4:33 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Question about Lily's route
Replies: 6
Views: 3087

Re: Question about Lily's route

Yeah, it was also what disappointed me about her route. I get that she was raised to never go against the wishes of her parents, but she knew she would go to Scotland even before she got together with Hisao and started a relationship with him anyway. That's what would be the inexcusable part of her ...
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Jan 13, 2017 8:14 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Bells of Life-Kirino Kage (OC) Update:2018-05-14
Replies: 90
Views: 44735

Re: The Bells of Life-Kirino Kage (OC) Update:2016-10-31

Nice to see that you got back to your usual kind of writing. The previous chapter felt somewhat out of place in this story. Okay, a few comments on this chapter: I gather up all my things before heading off towards my room; doing my best to avoid as many people as possible. Since boys are allowed in...
by Mirage_GSM
Sat Jan 07, 2017 5:10 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 573205

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Happy Anniversary, KS!)

Well, if the question is what story felt most like KS rather than what story I enjoyed most I'd probably have to name Sisterhood - Guest Poster's epic continuation of Hanako's story. (For enjoyment it would still rate in my top ten.) ...though I'd like to specify the first part. The later addition -...
by Mirage_GSM
Sun Jan 01, 2017 2:37 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: First time playing and i got the same ending 3 times ina row
Replies: 7
Views: 4796

Re: First time playing and i got the same ending 3 times ina

There are four choice points in Act 1 that will inevitably lead you to The Deep End if you choose wrong. Those are: - Kicking Shizune and Misha out of your room when they want to come in - Blowing up on Misha when she asks you about your absence after your stay in the nurse's office - Not wanting to...
by Mirage_GSM
Sun Jan 01, 2017 2:30 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: New Flames- Chapter 4 (or: more food for more friendship)
Replies: 23
Views: 9798

Re: New Flames- Chapter 2 (or: The Ceremony)

Also, do you enjoy my story? Because despite the fact that you do read and care enough about my story, I don't know if you REALLY like it or you have other reasons. Well, so far there's not much story to go on. You introduced a few characters but none of them got more than one or two scenes yet. I ...
by Mirage_GSM
Sat Dec 31, 2016 5:06 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: New Flames- Chapter 4 (or: more food for more friendship)
Replies: 23
Views: 9798

Re: New Flames- Chapter 2 (or: The Ceremony)

Grammarwise this is better than the previous chapters. You still do the thing with Internal monologue from one character being on the paragraph of another character's lines, though.

Interesting fact: Most Japanese restaurants offer English language menus if you ask them for it.
by Mirage_GSM
Mon Dec 26, 2016 11:17 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: New Flames- Chapter 4 (or: more food for more friendship)
Replies: 23
Views: 9798

Re: New Flames- Chapter 2 (or: The Ceremony)

I have no idea what you mean - he was chosen for his English skills, wasn't he?

You do realize that English and Japanese use completely different alphabets and reading skills don't neccessarily overlap...

Oh well, nvm...
by Mirage_GSM
Mon Dec 26, 2016 5:36 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: New Flames- Chapter 4 (or: more food for more friendship)
Replies: 23
Views: 9798

Re: New Flames- Chapter 2 (or: The Ceremony)

Yes, that much was obvious from the chapter.
But what kind of ceremony would require an english text to be read out?
by Mirage_GSM
Sun Dec 25, 2016 9:32 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hisao and Kenji: Masterful One Shots! Winter Update!
Replies: 198
Views: 75382

Re: Hisao and Kenji: Masterful One Shots! Christmas Update

Seemed to end somewhat abruptly, but you don't get to complain about free stuff, eh?

Thanks for treating us and Merry Christmas!
by Mirage_GSM
Sun Dec 25, 2016 9:04 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: New Flames- Chapter 4 (or: more food for more friendship)
Replies: 23
Views: 9798

Re: New Flames- Chapter 2 (or: The Ceremony)

Might have been interesting to know just what kind of ceremony necessitated a text being read in English...
by Mirage_GSM
Sat Dec 24, 2016 4:20 am
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Blooper Reel
Replies: 1327
Views: 456728

Re: Blooper Reel

Spoken like a KS dev :lol: