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by Mirage_GSM
Fri Mar 17, 2017 11:51 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Benefit of Hindsight (updated 4/16!)
Replies: 175
Views: 67086

Re: The Benefit of Hindsight (updated 3/16!)

That much I’d figured out. I could be obtuse sometimes, but not THAT obtuse. Again one sentence in past tense... Not sure why Yamaku would frown upon "workplace romance" when they turn so many blind eyes to the students' relationships. By most standards the latter should be less socially acceptable...
by Mirage_GSM
Mon Mar 13, 2017 6:17 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hindsight (5 Epilogues - Complete)
Replies: 46
Views: 16877

Re: Trial by Fire

We're left alone again, and now that it's just Lilly and I, I feel... Lilly and me My father is very patriarchal, so I suppose he has claimed me in the name of Scotland, in a sense. Actually it's her mother who is scottish. Lilly's father is Japanese and Jigoro's brother in law. Okay, finished the ...
by Mirage_GSM
Mon Mar 13, 2017 12:22 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Teach Me To Dance - A Natsume Ooe Pseudo-Route(Updated 4/8)
Replies: 74
Views: 44240

Re: Teach Me To Dance - A Natsume Ooe Pseudo-Route(Updated 3

It's a little strange that I still don't recognize hardly anybody here.
Much too negative :-)

I have to say that this is the laziest I've ever seen Mutou in any story here :lol:
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Mar 10, 2017 7:26 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Teach Me To Dance - A Natsume Ooe Pseudo-Route(Updated 4/8)
Replies: 74
Views: 44240

Re: Teach Me To Dance - A Natsume Ooe Pseudo-Route(Updated 3

I'm not an expert on saunas by any definition, but would they really have it running in the mornings before class? Also, not even labelling the door to the girls' locker room seems excessively lax... Accidents waiting to happen :-) Not to tread on Mirage's territory but there was a couple cases of m...
by Mirage_GSM
Wed Mar 08, 2017 12:18 pm
Forum: Support
Topic: how to unlock the last picture?
Replies: 4
Views: 3986

Re: how to unlock the last picture?

If you follow the walkthroughs you will unlock all pictures.
The one people most commonly miss is on Rin's path - either the scene where he leaves the art club or the one where he doesn't - since it's seemingly random to get either without studying the walkthroughs...
by Mirage_GSM
Sun Mar 05, 2017 8:29 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Teach Me To Dance - A Natsume Ooe Pseudo-Route(Updated 4/8)
Replies: 74
Views: 44240

Re: Teach Me To Dance - A Natsume Ooe Pseudo-Route(Updated 3

There's two very wide windows "There are" Move your hand...down a little bit." She nervously instructs. I slide my hand down her side, stopping at her hips. Actually the shoulderblade would be the correct position for most dances... For someone who has never danced with a artner before, Natsume sur...
by Mirage_GSM
Sat Mar 04, 2017 4:41 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Teach Me To Dance - A Natsume Ooe Pseudo-Route(Updated 4/8)
Replies: 74
Views: 44240

Re: Teach Me To Dance - A Natsume Ooe Pseudo-Route(Updated 3

I sure hope he thought to set his alarm :-)

One more thing:
Why the hell would you go down there for?
This is a mixture of two questions. Decide on one.
by Mirage_GSM
Tue Feb 28, 2017 1:58 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hindsight (5 Epilogues - Complete)
Replies: 46
Views: 16877

Re: Hindsight (5 Epilogues - Complete)

Something that comes up several times in your writings: There's a reason Lilly and her are still so dangerous around each other. "Lilly and she" Her and Lilly Satou, if you…" "She and Lilly Satou" people are together in their own gangs and don't pay Rin and I any mind at all. she swerves around the ...
by Mirage_GSM
Sun Feb 26, 2017 1:12 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Can You Accept Your Fate? - Saki Pseudo Route (Ch. 8, 15/02)
Replies: 76
Views: 40228

Re: Can You Accept Your Fate? - Saki Pseudo Route (Ch. 8, 15

(And here's the pun by the way. The second chapter of Katawa Shoujo is titled 'Bundle of Hisao', some wordplay on the cells which transmit impulses from the AV node to the Purkinje fibers via the left and right bundle branches... or the Bundle of His. I'm determined to find out which dev included t...
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Feb 24, 2017 7:09 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Teach Me To Dance - A Natsume Ooe Pseudo-Route(Updated 4/8)
Replies: 74
Views: 44240

Re: Teach Me To Dance - A Natsume Ooe Pseudo-Route(Updated 2

"No. My turn."

...

Drat, a cliffhanger^^°

Well, I didn't expect the title of this story to be THAT literal... Kind of an exceptional hobby - especially for Japan. How did she train up to that point without a partner?
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Feb 24, 2017 5:27 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hindsight (5 Epilogues - Complete)
Replies: 46
Views: 16877

Re: Hindsight (5 Epilogues - Complete)

The thing that stuck out the most to me was how terrible both Hisao's and Shizune's memories regarding their classmates are: They spent a whole year together as a class - three in Shizune's case - and still don't recognize anyone at the reunion? I think I'd probably recognize more than nine out of ...
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Feb 24, 2017 12:21 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hindsight (5 Epilogues - Complete)
Replies: 46
Views: 16877

Re: Hindsight (5 Epilogues - Complete)

Okay... It will take me quite a while to get through all of this. Not sure how the individual stories are supposed to build up on one another if they're all based on the good endings. They are kind of mutually exclusive :-) For now I've read through Shizune's part, and I have to say it's quite good....
by Mirage_GSM
Tue Feb 21, 2017 6:06 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Monsters Like Us (KS x Monsters) Ch. 4: Shadows
Replies: 44
Views: 19085

Re: Monsters Like Us (KS x Monsters) Ch. 4: Shadows

Her footsteps, hard to hear even for herself, echo in the emptiness.
So... Are her footsteps hard to hear, or do they echo through the halls? :-)

Interesting chapter... Let's see what comes of it.
by Mirage_GSM
Mon Feb 20, 2017 7:38 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Dancing: A Miki pseudo-route (Update 7/30/17)
Replies: 227
Views: 112870

Re: Dancing: A Miki pseudo-route (Update 2/20)

I was a bit disappointed in the old woman's relative insignificance in the end, given that she'd apparently followed Hisao and Miki all the way from Sendai :lol:

Quite a few old stories have been taken up once more recently. Nice to see you join the trend.
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Feb 16, 2017 5:50 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Teach Me To Dance - A Natsume Ooe Pseudo-Route(Updated 4/8)
Replies: 74
Views: 44240

Re: Teach Me To Dance - A Natsume Ooe Pseudo-Route(Updated 2

a light-blue short-sleeved tunic top thats sides reach down passed her hips. The first thing is probably technically correct, though I've never seen it used that way. "the sides of which" is a bit clunky but easier to understand. "past" for the second bit. It doesn't look like Natsume is in quite t...