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by Mirage_GSM
Sat Apr 08, 2017 10:27 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Teach Me To Dance - A Natsume Ooe Pseudo-Route(Updated 4/8)
Replies: 74
Views: 44240

Re: Teach Me To Dance - A Natsume Ooe Pseudo-Route(Updated 4

I imagine that her and Nurse probably talk about much more stuff than him and I do during my check-ups. "more than HE and I do" Just typing up some of the stuff that Natty had wrote about the festival. "has written" or possibly just "wrote" depending on what your emphasis is supposed to be. I feel ...
by Mirage_GSM
Wed Mar 29, 2017 12:46 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Name Withheld For Spoilers
Replies: 19
Views: 8055

Re: Name Withheld For Spoilers

Yeah, I'd have expected Mutou as well :-)

Well, I guess the VN never mentions if he has his own office, and that place that is outside the time loop probably is important for the story...
by Mirage_GSM
Mon Mar 27, 2017 11:53 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Name Withheld For Spoilers
Replies: 19
Views: 8055

Re: Name Withheld For Spoilers

I took a quick look at what you linked and will have to read it in detail at some point - it seems pretty interesting, especially depending on how closely it sticks to the source material. It's been a few years since I last read it, but I think it sticks pretty close to the source material - in fac...
by Mirage_GSM
Mon Mar 27, 2017 11:36 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Teach Me To Dance - A Natsume Ooe Pseudo-Route(Updated 4/8)
Replies: 74
Views: 44240

Re: Teach Me To Dance - A Natsume Ooe Pseudo-Route(Updated 3

"It's that time of the year again!" He answers back, a much more genuine grin on his face now. "Finals will be here before you know it, and I need to make sure that everyone's files are squared away...just in case." Wow, if he starts preparing for finals six weeks in advance he'll be stressed out l...
by Mirage_GSM
Sun Mar 26, 2017 7:11 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flutter - Level Twenty One: Footsies [25/3/17]
Replies: 258
Views: 103264

Re: Flutter - Level Twenty One: Footsies [25/3/17]

And another story makes its comeback after an extended hiatus.
Seems there's a lot of that going on recently - welcome back!
by Mirage_GSM
Sun Mar 26, 2017 6:50 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Name Withheld For Spoilers
Replies: 19
Views: 8055

Re: Name Withheld For Spoilers

The premise reminds me of one of my favourite pieces of fiction around here, so I guess you could say I'm looking forward to the continuation of this.
But do you really want to write two stories in parallel?
by Mirage_GSM
Sun Mar 26, 2017 5:38 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Benefit of Hindsight (updated 4/16!)
Replies: 175
Views: 67086

Re: The Benefit of Hindsight (updated 3/24!)

I’d be a little more nervous at the prospect of only the second girl ever to enter a bedroom of mine stepping through the doorway and into my innermost sanctum. Does he not count Misha as a girl or did he forget about her? When we finally break the kiss, a thin strand of saliva connects our lips. I...
by Mirage_GSM
Wed Mar 22, 2017 11:51 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Benefit of Hindsight (updated 4/16!)
Replies: 175
Views: 67086

Re: The Benefit of Hindsight (updated 3/20!)

1. Perception's a funny thing, isn't it? One of the things that I hope comes across in the fic is that Hisao generally gives Shizune the benefit of the doubt more than one might expect. Playing all of the routes leaves me with the impression that Hisao is the most consumed by his relationship with ...
by Mirage_GSM
Tue Mar 21, 2017 4:44 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Benefit of Hindsight (updated 4/16!)
Replies: 175
Views: 67086

Re: The Benefit of Hindsight (updated 3/20!)

Obligatory past tense senences: Like everything else about Kenji, it was a mystery, and would likely forever remain one. That thought bothered me more than I wanted to admit. Kenji just...leaving was unsatisfying, but that was how things worked, sometimes. Small mixup of names here: “Yeaaaaaaah, Mut...
by Mirage_GSM
Mon Mar 20, 2017 5:24 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Benefit of Hindsight (updated 4/16!)
Replies: 175
Views: 67086

Re: The Benefit of Hindsight (updated 3/16!)

Hisao/Lilly is more complicated still because she's technically his mentor - and is likely to write him a glowing review for entirely legitimate reasons that might be considered less legitimate if people knew they were dating. Okay, that might indeed be a problem - or at least an inconvenience. I w...
by Mirage_GSM
Mon Mar 20, 2017 12:55 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Benefit of Hindsight (updated 4/16!)
Replies: 175
Views: 67086

Re: The Benefit of Hindsight (updated 3/16!)

I have no idea where you live, but "professional workplaces" by no means "always frown upon" such a thing. In my company they only care whether the relationship is between someone and their superiour - and when that happens one of them can simply change departments, and the problem is solved. I know...
by Mirage_GSM
Sun Mar 19, 2017 6:37 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Teach Me To Dance - A Natsume Ooe Pseudo-Route(Updated 4/8)
Replies: 74
Views: 44240

Re: Teach Me To Dance - A Natsume Ooe Pseudo-Route(Updated 3

I'm sorry that I'm wearing this silly thing too, this is so embarra-" "I uhm...was just seeing if this leotard would still fit, I really didn't think that you were going to show up." She chuckles nervously to herself, looking down at her outfit. "I don't think I had...developed quite as much, when ...
by Mirage_GSM
Sat Mar 18, 2017 7:35 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Benefit of Hindsight (updated 4/16!)
Replies: 175
Views: 67086

Re: The Benefit of Hindsight (updated 3/16!)

Not sure if they would be easier to control, since they are adults and live off campus :-)

And my main question was "Why would they even try to?"
by Mirage_GSM
Sat Mar 18, 2017 7:32 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Double Update 3/14)
Replies: 1140
Views: 572115

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 1/19)

Oh, I wasn't really replying to you but to Zerebos' suggestion.
by Mirage_GSM
Sat Mar 18, 2017 5:10 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Double Update 3/14)
Replies: 1140
Views: 572115

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 1/19)

You should NEVER write a chapter just to "buy some time".