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by Mirage_GSM
Sun Jul 02, 2017 2:34 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Akira-te Kid - An Akira Satou Fan Route
Replies: 35
Views: 17821

Re: The Akira-te Kid - An Akira Satou Fan Route

Not sure if you can write cursive Kanji... You can. Cursive kanji range from illegible to completely illegible to "possibly legible to people who have a specialist's knowledge of kanji but it's not a sure deal". It's great. Well, yes, but that's not exactly the same as what we understand as "cursiv...
by Mirage_GSM
Sat Jul 01, 2017 4:11 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 573204

Re: Yamaku Book Club (20170701 Questions for Readers)

Not everything. I steer clear of the HBHC, the "official headcanon thread" (which is an oxymoron by the way) and similar stuff.
But yes, I've read (almost) everything in the fanfiction section
by Mirage_GSM
Sat Jul 01, 2017 10:28 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 573204

Re: Yamaku Book Club (20170701 Questions for Readers)

I usually skim the most recent chapter before the hiatus and or read my comments in the thread. That's usually enough to jog my memory enough to continue reading.
I've found that knowing what I thought about the story works better than trying to get into the story again by rereading everything.
by Mirage_GSM
Sat Jul 01, 2017 10:24 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Akira-te Kid - An Akira Satou Fan Route
Replies: 35
Views: 17821

Re: The Akira-te Kid - An Akira Satou Fan Route

Why does nobody EVER ask me for my name?" Maybe because he tells everyone just to call him "nurse" when they first meet him? Unfortunately, her and Misha never showed up in the first place. "she and Misha" I mean, I would LIKE to watch more of them but everything that gets sent over here gets dubbe...
by Mirage_GSM
Sat Jul 01, 2017 9:42 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Visionary's Writing - Everything, Nothing, Red, and Green
Replies: 18
Views: 6701

Re: Visionary's Writing - Act 0: Deterioration (Latest 6/30)

...well, except for Lilly's good end; don't they stick a pacemaker in him, then? Whoops. Exactly what I was referring to. maybe he sort of expected the nurse to magically know about this rare disease that was way out of either of their specialties, and expected him to know the full intricacies abou...
by Mirage_GSM
Sat Jul 01, 2017 9:20 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Fading Memories
Replies: 42
Views: 12804

Re: Fading Memories

"Satoshi has the potential to be a good student, if he does not slack off and start chasing skirts." A comment like that in front of the whole class? "M-mrs. Nakai told me about y-your situation. D-don't go hiding your memory l-loss. We a-are here to h-help you." She says this while giving me a wea...
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Jun 30, 2017 11:29 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Dance Of The Delicate
Replies: 26
Views: 10753

Re: Dance Of The Delicate

Here's the first part of one of my 'character routes' - sorry it took so long :wink: I'll try to post the first parts of the other girl's routes also soon, so stand by for more - and tell me how you feel about it Okay... Not sure why you would do it that way. I certainly prefer reading a route in o...
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Jun 30, 2017 10:40 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Visionary's Writing - Everything, Nothing, Red, and Green
Replies: 18
Views: 6701

Re: Visionary's Writing - Act 0: Deterioration (Latest 6/30)

Okay, most of that is WAY beyond my paygrade, but most of it at least sounds legit :-) As for things that stuck out to me: - One thing the VN never claimed Hisao's condition to be was "progressive". In fact it's explicitly stated that it isn't. - Performing heart surgery while the patient is awake i...
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Jun 29, 2017 11:39 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: COM(promise) - A Miki Route (Updated Sep 26th, 2020)
Replies: 215
Views: 95109

Re: COM(promise) - A Miki Route (Updated Jun 28th, 2017)

“Say, do you want to join Hisao and I during tutoring sessions? Could be rationalized by Miki just talking sloppily, but: "Hisao and me" After some intermittent conversation between Hisao and I... Not rationalizable here... “Well... You can always come here to talk. Hell, if you told Suzu, she’d......
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Jun 29, 2017 10:33 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Ungraceful Reunion - An Emilogue (Chap 4 - Updated 2/20/19)
Replies: 18
Views: 9119

Re: Ungraceful Reunion - An Emi Epilogue (Back from the dead

Very interesting and well-written first chapter with lots of hints about past events that I will look forward to being resolved.

And if Rin planned all of this, she should be looking for job-openings in the "evil mastermind" section. :-)
by Mirage_GSM
Wed Jun 28, 2017 12:12 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Fading Memories
Replies: 42
Views: 12804

Re: Fading Memories

A few cultural remarks mixed in with the rest... His classroom sure reflects this. He has all kinds of "Chemistry and Physics for beginners" posters through his otherwise white room. In Japan teachers don't have their own classrooms. They visit the classrooms of their students. I hugged Sara, as she...
by Mirage_GSM
Tue Jun 27, 2017 4:57 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Fading Memories
Replies: 42
Views: 12804

Re: Fading Memories

Yes, I did notice, but if you exclude dialogue you can't have other characters reacting to it...
by Mirage_GSM
Tue Jun 27, 2017 10:44 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Fading Memories
Replies: 42
Views: 12804

Re: Fading Memories

If she's speaking twice, what's the next line about?
His response took me way off guard. Seriously, this guy is so dense.
He hasn't responded at all...
by Mirage_GSM
Mon Jun 26, 2017 6:25 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Fading Memories
Replies: 42
Views: 12804

Re: Fading Memories

Okay, tenses are really all over the place in this one. I think it's supposed to be present tense now, but there are at least a dozen past tenses strewn in. Also, did you have two different people talk on the same line here? "H-hello!" Shit! Gotta keep calm! Easy now. "W-what did you need?" Can't ma...
by Mirage_GSM
Mon Jun 26, 2017 1:11 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: In What Order Did You Complete The Routes?
Replies: 105
Views: 35440

Re: In What Order Did You Complete The Routes?

The option for Rin's first bad end is more or less up to luck, but for the second the choice is pretty obvious...