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by Mirage_GSM
Sun Aug 06, 2017 5:45 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Star Watchers
Replies: 5
Views: 2738

Re: Star Watchers

Agree with QS: If you want us to read the stuff, post it on the forum. I don't download any files from unknown sources from the internet.
by Mirage_GSM
Sun Aug 06, 2017 5:42 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Dancing: A Miki pseudo-route (Update 7/30/17)
Replies: 227
Views: 112870

Re: Dancing: A Miki pseudo-route (Update 7/30/17)

Yeah, I guess it happened from me having Rin-route-Hisao levels of denseness and also karma for not paying attention in class. Well to be fair, it's not like KS is a super sexual or adult game outside of those specific scenes. If you don't know about them beforehand it's easy to see why they would ...
by Mirage_GSM
Wed Aug 02, 2017 6:03 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Dancing: A Miki pseudo-route (Update 7/30/17)
Replies: 227
Views: 112870

Re: Dancing: A Miki pseudo-route (Update 7/30/17)

Although the first two were honest mistakes, the last one was deliberately put into past tense because Hisao's recalling what happened after a short timeskip. If it's supposed to be a timeskip it should be set apart from the rest of the story (not only at the beginning but also at the end of the ti...
by Mirage_GSM
Tue Aug 01, 2017 9:34 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Dancing: A Miki pseudo-route (Update 7/30/17)
Replies: 227
Views: 112870

Re: Dancing: A Miki pseudo-route (Update 7/30/17)

If you're talking about the scene where Hisao's in the tub and thinking about Miki in a towel , that was deliberately in past tense because he was thinking about something in the past while he was doing something else at present. No there were several places... Mostly towards the beginnin iIrc... T...
by Mirage_GSM
Mon Jul 31, 2017 11:12 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Dancing: A Miki pseudo-route (Update 7/30/17)
Replies: 227
Views: 112870

Re: Dancing: A Miki pseudo-route (Update 7/30/17)

Awkwardness: The moment when your girlfriend introduces you as "a good kid" :-)

Some sentences slipped into past tense again, and a few cases of what are probably copy-paste errors, otherwise no complaints.

Nice to see this isn't dead yet.
by Mirage_GSM
Sat Jul 29, 2017 3:41 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Some One-Shots (Updated 7-29-2017)
Replies: 14
Views: 12478

Re: Some One-Shots (Updated 7-29-2017)

I agree, very nice story.
Not sure Hanako's reaction would have been so mild when suddenly faced with those "bad memories" but I'll excuse that for the sake of the story.
I suspect Hisao will have some serious comforting to do later on, though...
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Jul 28, 2017 4:40 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Ungraceful Reunion - An Emilogue (Chap 4 - Updated 2/20/19)
Replies: 18
Views: 9119

Re: Ungraceful Reunion - An Emilogue (Chap 2 - Updated 7/28/

Very good chapter - and I rarely say that about chapters containing H-scenes.
After chapter 1 I was more or less hoping for Hisao and Emi getting back together. Now that I know that would necessitate him frst breaking up with his current girlfriend I changed my mind :-)
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Jul 28, 2017 4:32 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Lost in Translation - A Shizune Prequel
Replies: 49
Views: 18800

Re: Lost in Translation - A Shizune Prequel

Mirage_GSM wrote:..., and since it's from you ... there's a good chance it will be finished, since you've delivered before, ...
Yeah, sometimes my words come back to bite me...
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Jul 27, 2017 10:27 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hisao's Daily Life as a Teacher and other short stories
Replies: 14
Views: 5180

Re: Hisao's Daily Life as a Teacher and other short stories

I subscribe to all points Oddball mentioned - I thought about writing a list like this myself, but I didn't know where to start... or stop. I hadn't even noticed that their daughter was supposed to be mute on reading this... brain was probably shut down at that point already. How old is she supposed...
by Mirage_GSM
Wed Jul 26, 2017 11:43 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hisao's Daily Life as a Teacher and other short stories
Replies: 14
Views: 5180

Re: Hisao's Daily Life as a Teacher and other short stories

Seriously? I can imagine exactly zero of them to choose those online handles for themselves. Other than that you continue pushing out clichés like Shizune x Misha the satisfactory explanation of which would be a full-on story by itself rather than an inconsequential sidenote here. I wondered for a m...
by Mirage_GSM
Tue Jul 25, 2017 3:10 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hisao's Daily Life as a Teacher and other short stories
Replies: 14
Views: 5180

Re: Hisao's Daily Life as a Teacher and other short stories

Yes, leave a note for the blind teacher... That's going to be useful ^^° To be honest I'm finding it pretty hard to say anything positive about this story so far. It uses all the worst cliches like every single one of the VN characters returning to Yamaku as a teacher or the three-way relationship a...
by Mirage_GSM
Sat Jul 22, 2017 3:50 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: All the World
Replies: 5
Views: 2605

Re: All the World

I agree with the others: Good story. I can see Rin taking up acting - she's an artist by heart, and when she doesn't want to paint anymore she'll need something else to scratch that itch... But I expect she'll have to be pretty much type-cast to a certain kind of role... As for the last part I thoug...
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Jul 14, 2017 6:19 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Slippery Slope (A Post-Lilly Neutral Ending Fic)
Replies: 7
Views: 3617

Re: Slippery Slope (A Post-Lilly Neutral Ending Fic)

35 chess games take a LONG time - certainly more time than you plan for this story to take given the pace you're going... But one thing: I sigh. "Don't apologize. I promised her that I'd be there for you. Given what we learned about Hanako in her route THIS is the one thing she wouldn't like to hear...
by Mirage_GSM
Wed Jul 12, 2017 12:56 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Katawa Shoujo for Rimworld
Replies: 12
Views: 6713

Katawa Shoujo for Rimworld

So lately I’ve been trying a bit more Rimworld and found a nice mod called “Prepare carefully” that allows you to edit your colonists. So here are the survivors of the wreck of the hospital-ship MS Yamaku who fled the ship in escape pods after a reactor malfunction and got stranded on some backwater...