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- Sun Aug 06, 2017 5:45 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Star Watchers
- Replies: 5
- Views: 2738
Re: Star Watchers
Agree with QS: If you want us to read the stuff, post it on the forum. I don't download any files from unknown sources from the internet.
- Sun Aug 06, 2017 5:42 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Dancing: A Miki pseudo-route (Update 7/30/17)
- Replies: 227
- Views: 112870
Re: Dancing: A Miki pseudo-route (Update 7/30/17)
Yeah, I guess it happened from me having Rin-route-Hisao levels of denseness and also karma for not paying attention in class. Well to be fair, it's not like KS is a super sexual or adult game outside of those specific scenes. If you don't know about them beforehand it's easy to see why they would ...
- Wed Aug 02, 2017 6:03 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Dancing: A Miki pseudo-route (Update 7/30/17)
- Replies: 227
- Views: 112870
Re: Dancing: A Miki pseudo-route (Update 7/30/17)
Although the first two were honest mistakes, the last one was deliberately put into past tense because Hisao's recalling what happened after a short timeskip. If it's supposed to be a timeskip it should be set apart from the rest of the story (not only at the beginning but also at the end of the ti...
- Tue Aug 01, 2017 9:34 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Dancing: A Miki pseudo-route (Update 7/30/17)
- Replies: 227
- Views: 112870
Re: Dancing: A Miki pseudo-route (Update 7/30/17)
If you're talking about the scene where Hisao's in the tub and thinking about Miki in a towel , that was deliberately in past tense because he was thinking about something in the past while he was doing something else at present. No there were several places... Mostly towards the beginnin iIrc... T...
- Mon Jul 31, 2017 11:12 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Dancing: A Miki pseudo-route (Update 7/30/17)
- Replies: 227
- Views: 112870
Re: Dancing: A Miki pseudo-route (Update 7/30/17)
Awkwardness: The moment when your girlfriend introduces you as "a good kid" 
Some sentences slipped into past tense again, and a few cases of what are probably copy-paste errors, otherwise no complaints.
Nice to see this isn't dead yet.
Some sentences slipped into past tense again, and a few cases of what are probably copy-paste errors, otherwise no complaints.
Nice to see this isn't dead yet.
- Sat Jul 29, 2017 3:41 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Some One-Shots (Updated 7-29-2017)
- Replies: 14
- Views: 12478
Re: Some One-Shots (Updated 7-29-2017)
I agree, very nice story.
Not sure Hanako's reaction would have been so mild when suddenly faced with those "bad memories" but I'll excuse that for the sake of the story.
I suspect Hisao will have some serious comforting to do later on, though...
Not sure Hanako's reaction would have been so mild when suddenly faced with those "bad memories" but I'll excuse that for the sake of the story.
I suspect Hisao will have some serious comforting to do later on, though...
- Fri Jul 28, 2017 4:40 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Ungraceful Reunion - An Emilogue (Chap 4 - Updated 2/20/19)
- Replies: 18
- Views: 9119
Re: Ungraceful Reunion - An Emilogue (Chap 2 - Updated 7/28/
Very good chapter - and I rarely say that about chapters containing H-scenes.
After chapter 1 I was more or less hoping for Hisao and Emi getting back together. Now that I know that would necessitate him frst breaking up with his current girlfriend I changed my mind
After chapter 1 I was more or less hoping for Hisao and Emi getting back together. Now that I know that would necessitate him frst breaking up with his current girlfriend I changed my mind
- Fri Jul 28, 2017 4:32 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Lost in Translation - A Shizune Prequel
- Replies: 49
- Views: 18800
Re: Lost in Translation - A Shizune Prequel
Yeah, sometimes my words come back to bite me...Mirage_GSM wrote:..., and since it's from you ... there's a good chance it will be finished, since you've delivered before, ...
- Thu Jul 27, 2017 10:27 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Hisao's Daily Life as a Teacher and other short stories
- Replies: 14
- Views: 5180
Re: Hisao's Daily Life as a Teacher and other short stories
I subscribe to all points Oddball mentioned - I thought about writing a list like this myself, but I didn't know where to start... or stop. I hadn't even noticed that their daughter was supposed to be mute on reading this... brain was probably shut down at that point already. How old is she supposed...
- Wed Jul 26, 2017 11:43 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Hisao's Daily Life as a Teacher and other short stories
- Replies: 14
- Views: 5180
Re: Hisao's Daily Life as a Teacher and other short stories
Seriously? I can imagine exactly zero of them to choose those online handles for themselves. Other than that you continue pushing out clichés like Shizune x Misha the satisfactory explanation of which would be a full-on story by itself rather than an inconsequential sidenote here. I wondered for a m...
- Tue Jul 25, 2017 3:10 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Hisao's Daily Life as a Teacher and other short stories
- Replies: 14
- Views: 5180
Re: Hisao's Daily Life as a Teacher and other short stories
Yes, leave a note for the blind teacher... That's going to be useful ^^° To be honest I'm finding it pretty hard to say anything positive about this story so far. It uses all the worst cliches like every single one of the VN characters returning to Yamaku as a teacher or the three-way relationship a...
- Sat Jul 22, 2017 3:50 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: All the World
- Replies: 5
- Views: 2605
Re: All the World
I agree with the others: Good story. I can see Rin taking up acting - she's an artist by heart, and when she doesn't want to paint anymore she'll need something else to scratch that itch... But I expect she'll have to be pretty much type-cast to a certain kind of role... As for the last part I thoug...
- Fri Jul 14, 2017 6:19 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Slippery Slope (A Post-Lilly Neutral Ending Fic)
- Replies: 7
- Views: 3617
Re: Slippery Slope (A Post-Lilly Neutral Ending Fic)
35 chess games take a LONG time - certainly more time than you plan for this story to take given the pace you're going... But one thing: I sigh. "Don't apologize. I promised her that I'd be there for you. Given what we learned about Hanako in her route THIS is the one thing she wouldn't like to hear...
- Wed Jul 12, 2017 12:56 pm
- Forum: Fan Works
- Topic: Katawa Shoujo for Rimworld
- Replies: 12
- Views: 6713
Katawa Shoujo for Rimworld
So lately I’ve been trying a bit more Rimworld and found a nice mod called “Prepare carefully” that allows you to edit your colonists. So here are the survivors of the wreck of the hospital-ship MS Yamaku who fled the ship in escape pods after a reactor malfunction and got stranded on some backwater...
- Mon Jul 10, 2017 5:46 am
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Interesting stuff about how deaf people think
- Replies: 2
- Views: 2656