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Well... Original in the way that everything is quite irrrelevant. This start is not any different than if the story had directly set in during "Bundle of His" - except for leading the readers on during the prologue, which worked very well :-) As such it's probably the best and most plausible way to ...

Same with the always honourable tradition and part of the hazing process among KS writers. Of the girl realising Hisao likes Sweatshirt vests and likely has a draw full of them. Never gets tiring... Disagree about that part. I thought it got tiring a few years ago. I can subscribe to the rest of yo...

I was worried you might have been hacked or something, but it seems sometimes security updates can be worse than hackers...

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The beginning felt a bit strange - as if Lilly and Misha really didn't know each other that well, but you acknowledged the connection towards the end, so it's probbaly just me. This is the kind of story I expected there to be more prompts for: Christmas shopping, choosing of gifts and giving thereof...

Nice story. Was the AltUniverse part of the prompt?
What exactly WAS the prompt?

Point of view should be Ritsu.

Who else but Rin?

On reading the promp I was thinking about a different Takeshi.

Oh, and your autocorrect seems to think a literary is a place to look things up.

Oh, and her uncle reminded me of Kenji...

I'm fairly certain this follows the letter but not the spirit of that wish

Ritsu and Miki? First I'm pretty sure about, tha latter not so much.

You know, at "half-foreign" I had somehow set my mind on Molly being the girl for this story - so much so that "healthy adloescent sex-drive" was really jarring... Hisao and I would spend Christmas together with his parents, and then the three of us would end up spending two nights in Hokkaido toget...

I agree - a very nice story. And extra points for catering to some very specific story prompts
Oh, and it seems your not the last to submit their story by a long shot. About half are still to be sent in...

Every answer you give just confuses me more, so I guess I'll stop asking questions...

I think the "wavering bonds" part is nicely done - why should that have to be a sad story?
I don't really consider Hisao and Miki "unusually paired", though, but I'm not complaining

That was one of the interpretations I had in mind, but then
- why would "truth" be a gift that Natsume had to give to Naomi instead of vice versa?
- how did Natsume learn what "the others" think of her?
That line felt more like Naomi was adressing the ghost of Hisao...

To help me, I decided to set my story after any character in KS would have graduated, simply because they aren’t needed and no such club is referenced in the game. That was kind of the point of that prompt. Since I figured most other prompts would be Hanako this or Shizune that I intentionally pick...