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How is that now? It's a bit better, though it is still a bit strange. From the VN we know that the path between the boys' and the girls' dorm splits a short way before the entrance. As it is now it seems as if she followed him up to the entrance of the boys' dorm, and then she sneaked in after him,...

“You too. I hope to see it again sometime… um… I mean you again….” Ah, the master of romance strikes again :-) I did not realize that she’s walked with me all the way up to my dorm room. Okay, THAT'S an accomplishment in itself... Jokes aside this section feels as if something is missing. They step...

Interestingly, most of those terms seem apt, though it's likely the intended use was simply "weakness". I'll defer any further reflection on German to our resident native speaker. If you insist... :-) weakness, debility, deficiency, frailty, feebleness, faintness, failing, softness, foible, penchan...

The passing reference to Hanako's "family issues" struck me as odd somehow. Just say she didn't have family and would feel bad alone. She's not got family issues in the ordinary sense so you need to specify. Oh, but we didn't know that back when that story was written. It was more or less accepted ...

Just came across this character when reading the Danmachi Light novels. She's a pink-haired, bubbly, slightly dizzy, slightly lazy character, and she's even named Misha. She's also the sidekick of a bespectacled serious type character (though that's where the other character's similarities to Shizun...

Well, that was... cute.
At first I thought the idea of waiting ten years with the proposal was a bit strange, but if it makes sense with any of the girls, it would be Emi.
A proposal in public is probably VERY unlikely- in Japan in general and for Hisao specifically.

That's basically what I meant when I said this might have worked as the climax to a larger story. I also don't think the idea of nurse and Emi sharing some kind of blood relationship is completely of the rails. IIrc there's nothing in the VN explicitly contradicting it (Sure, nurse told Hisao the st...

...and now Emi finally understands why he rejected that confession she made to him a few months ago...

See? Surprises aren't hard to write at all!

Hehe, I strongly doubt you'll be the last. We still get new people regularly, though few of them stick around.
Anyway, welcome!

Okay, apparently, she just confessed her love for Nurse. Okay, that adds another layer of unbelievability that I didn't get... When reading the story I took the "she" that confessed to nurse to mean Meiko, because she had been mentioned in the previous sentence. Knowing how the story continues make...

Well, the author's intention rarely factors into my enjoyment of their stories...
It would have to be exceptionally well done to do so. I can think of a few stories that did, some by the current curator of this thread.

Okay, that was one of the rare stories on this forum I hadn't read previously - mostly because the author had made it clear from the first time he posted that he wasn't intersted in constructive feedback. Now that others are interested in feedback... I mostly agree with QS. The technical side of the...

Maybe we should all stop feeding the troll.
He'll either go away on his own or annoy SC enough to ban him completely.

You know this whole argument was invalidated the moment you tried to present your opinion as a "fact". I don't even need to read beyond that to know that it's useless to even try to argue any further. Also, you should learn to quote correctly, because Oddball never wrote Hanako was "always meant to ...