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Converting something from "language X" to "natural language X" is usually more work than redoing the job completely. It skips the process of trying to understand what the original translator was trying to say. This is especially hard, if you don't have the original text as reference. I saved some of...

... then, you're gonna hit a line spoken by Rin, and you're going to start weeping. Actually I plan on calling dibs on Rin's storyarc when Acts 2-4 come online. I thought her scenes were a lot of fun to translate in Act 1 - as well as a challenge. Regardless of which way you picked, there are two p...

Kaeseis wrote:Aura what is wrong with Rin's mom's boobs and don't say real women have lopsided boobs too.

It's just that Aura is not one of the project's artists

Also, when did Emi dye her hair green? Green hair on Emi? I think you mixed up the dialogue in the first paragraph. (Or maybe I'm very thick and missing something *laugh*) Though indeed looking at it now, it's a bit... hard to follow, so I went and added a few explanatory words. So, when did Rin dy...

Misha is not from the area. She says so in one scene.
Also, I think she mentions how she met Shizune at Yamaku, so they probably didn't know each other beforehand. Can't find the proper quote for the latter on short notice...

Member22 wrote:

neumanproductions wrote:M22: You can delete your own posts you know. The devs don't need to do it for you.

I know how to, but it doesn't let me, it says that post cannot be deleted idk why..

You can't delete them, once someone has replied to them.

It was almost evening when Emi and Rin finally found themselves behind a certain door in the boys' dormitory. At that point they're still standing in front of it, right? Also, when did Emi dye her hair green? Other than that a nice story. Very good going on Rin's dialogue, especially the porridge b...

I'd prefer that it would happen in all good endings... it makes Hisao a stronger character Just how does dieing make anybody a stronger character? Character-development could happen by the way a character reacts to impending death. Said reaction could be an indication whether the character was a "s...

As far as I know,there aren't any schools like Yamaku in real life, so most people with the mentioned disabilities would have to attend a regular school.

Ah, yes. It has been fixed in Version 1.4.
I was using the script files for the german translation for this post - easier to search for the relevant passages. I thought those were taken from 1.4...
Seems they aren't... I don't suppose you have a changelog or something?

Some conflicting information on the location of class 3-2's classroom: Chapter A7 (Pseudo Tea Cosy): li "Correct, I'm in class 3-2; which is in a room a little further down this wing. This scene is in the tea room, which is on the second floor. Chapter A16 (A Private Lunch): "The classrooms closest ...

There is at least a class 3-4: "The classrooms closest to ours are designated belonging to classes 3-1 and 3-2 on the right side, and 3-4 on the left side, each door looking exactly the same." I just realized this is conflicting information: li "Correct, I'm in class 3-2; which is in a room a little...

Jaen-ni-rin wrote:On a lighter nore:
Quite an interesting idea. I've just seen some awesome Air wallpapers and think that if executed right, It can be quite a nice VN.

Funny, because Air already IS a visual novel...

You're not missing a "..."
I just thought the typo would be obvious without comment...
“Uh... I guess so. The only guy I talk with regularly makes me what to hit him.” - "what" -> "want"

Nope, it's fine without tags, thank you. I like the story, but still some nitpicks: “Sicchan, there’s no one- oh... Hisao and?” - missing an "h" “Uh... I guess so. The only guy I talk with regularly makes me what to hit him.” - ... Also regarding fainting: When people faint due to stress or exciteme...