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Don't worry, you'll surprise me no matter what you do.
I admit that's pretty easy, though, because I know no Pokemon besides Pikachu.
(And yes, I will be surprised if you use that one.)

Of the four fanfictions I've written for these forums so far, one was inspired by a line from Act 1, two were inspired by other fanfictions here on the boards and one by a real-life experience. You figure out which was which ;-) I got the idea for the fifth thing I wrote here (not exactly a fanfic),...

To me it seems like Lilly is way out of character here, and Hisao... Well, in the VN he would now be well on the road to a manly picknick... Other than that a few missing words and wrong homophones, like "I let out a sigh and relax my stair". That one is especially odd, since you correctly used "sta...

I like this one the best yet, but I think Shizune is an amazingly stupid choicefor relationship advice...

Oh and:
At first… At first it was nothing more than that,...

And don't belittle your grasp of the english language. It is excellent.

Chapter Nine – Beauty And The Beast When I arrive in class after my usual morning run with Emi, almost all seats are already filled. Only Hanako is absent again. Misha jumps up as she sees me, waving cheerily. Hearing her “Hey, Hicchan!” I could almost be fooled to think nothing had ever happened, ...

Minister of Gloom wrote:Make that "KS40K: In the cripple dating sims of the far future, there are only BIONIC EMIS WITH FLAMETHROWERS"

If I didn't suck at action scenes I'd totally make that into a fanfic. Sounds like a hilarious idea

Long hiatus, but I haven't forgotten this story. I have currently almost finished writing chapter ten, and at the moment the plan is for about fifteen chapters altogether. Chapter Eight – Let's Go Fly A Kite I arrive at the track earlier than usual. A good night's sleep and no Kenji does wonders for...

I read the EU books until the Yuuzan Wong appeared and stuff started to get silly... Whether or not something deserves a sequel depends very much on the work in question and how it was ended. I would be interested in reading more stories about the KS-characters, and the Fanfiction board is proof tha...

I will point out that if someone seems to not have a pulse but is in fact breathing very faintly, and someone doesnt pick that up (easiest way is to put your cheek up close to the mouth to feel for air) and then uses CPR, it will do more harm then good, and can in fact be fatal. That is correct, ho...

I'm sorry, but most of this reads like a particularly bad acid trip. I don't know if that was intentional or not, but up to the point where Iwanako's name was mentioned, I had absolutely no idea what was happening. The first scene might be a nightmare or a flashback, the distinction of which would h...

I think the length was perfect for the story.

Your first story was very good spelling-wise, so I guess you could have avoided most of the mistakes in the second one by giving it a once-over yourself like Aapo suggested, but if you need a proofreader just send me a PM.

I can't see you being sued for giving CPR in any country. Like I said, if a person is in need of CPR, they are for all practical purposes already dead or will be in a matter of minutes. If you do give CPR and they don't survive, you didn't make them worse, so there should be no grounds for a lawsuit...

Well, I guess this is what passes for normal where kosher is concerned...

A while back I was walking down the street with some friends when one of them had a small epileptic seizure thing. Shamefully enough, I was paralyzed, even though I theoretically know what to do. Sudden stress makes your mind go blank. Not much you can do until the seizure has passed - except for r...

I think it is very good. You captured both characters quite well and I like your writing style. A few minor nitpicks: - "the sun began his downward movement" should be "its" - some instances of present tense in an otherwise past tense story: "And, as always, I sit down beside her and let my eyes dri...