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The emphasis on Hanako's downward spiral isn't going to let up any time soon, unfortunately.

When it does you might give a heads up.
I guess I'll skip the chapters until then...

Much better than the first chapter! A few nitpicks: Before he got to the desk, the girl sitting in front of him caught Makoto's eyes. ...and Hikari sat at a table near the lunch lines with [a girl with(?)] strawberry blonde hair who sat in the front seat closest to Kagami's desk. Also, the line wher...

yipyapper wrote:The anime possibilty is there, but I highly doubt there will be one in the next 2-3 years.

The "anime possibility" has been brought up by fans and denied explicitly by the devs several times so far.
There won't be a KS anime.

The orphanage is first mentioned in that scene.
It would be easier to answer if you said what part of the plot you think it contradicts...

However, I strongly disagree with "Shizune's path made the perfect use of options". There was only one, and it didn't involve deep logical thinking. It was either obvious bad or obvious good. Shizune's path was extremely straightforward and didn't develop Shizune till the very last arc, where you f...

Oh, I thought that was just Mr. Bruce mangling the name...

Well, the number of choices is no indicator for the quality of a story. In my opinion every choice point interrupts the immersion in the story, so they should be used as sparingly as possible - only for really important decisions. In this regard, I thought Shizune's path made perfect use of the opti...

I continue to like this.
Excellent pacing; I haven't been bored for a second yet.

We had that same problem before sometime last year.
It was fixed then, so I guess Delta will be able to fix it again once he's back.

Hmm, somehow I don't think any of this was authorized by the devs...

First of all, kudos for writing OCs. It's a welcome change from many of the Fics here. Regarding your writing, it's not bad. Two or three wrong tenses, but no real problems with grammar or orthography. The only thing you might want to work on is the complexity of your sentences. Some of your sentenc...

To say it in the words of the interviewer: "Very cool!"
I see - okay hear - Crud is a bit pessimistic regarding the timeframe for the Japanese translation.

Am I eligible as a non-US-citizen?

Great AMV, very good choice of music.
@historylover: Why don't you just grab it from youtube?

That scene is in Act 1 and has been out for two years.
I don't think it can be called a spoiler anymore.