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You know... after so many years this is one explanation for a possible disability for Misha that I haven't read before and that still makes perfect sense...

Okay, where to start... Let's start with the grammar, since others have mentioned it already. Usually I would offer my help with that, but in this case that would entail rewriting your story entirely, and that's something I don't have the time for. English is obviously not your native language (Your...

Well, yeah... It's Hanako's reaction there I think is quite over the top. I mean, if one of your best friends is asking to talk to you privately, would you say basically "No, I have a girlfriend now, and I can't bear to be seperated from her for 15 minutes, so if you want to share your innermost fee...

Hmm.. I didn't really have any issues with SpaG in this story. ...and I didn't feel reminded of Scissorlips' Suzu at all - which is also a compliment, because frankly I never liked that Suzu very much at all. This one was... original. If anything she could have been replaced by any number of other c...

I was referring to the scene in the dorm's corridor...

It wasn't meant to be a prerequisite. I was just following my own train of thought without stopping at every station...

Mirage_GSM wrote: ↑

Sun Mar 29, 2015 10:33 am

Well, that was fun.

It still is.

Great chapter as always! It would be super sweet if Hisao and Saki got married in an unofficial wedding, just the two of them, since she won't be gettin' a real one 'cause of her condition :( I wasn't too clear on that bit earlier: Why would her condition prevent her from marrying? The only thing t...

Hmm... In the scene with Lilly, Misha and Hanako I honestly have no idea who got angray at whom at what point and for what reason.
To me it seemed as if the plot called for a fight and you tried to make one happen...

Thanks! I have to thanks the work of Mirror_gsm for the English...

It's "Mirage", thank you very much
(You can consider the "GSM" optional.)

That was... Actually about what I was expecting from you :-) As for Crud's new project... Funny in his blog he says he won't go into details because he doesn't want to repeat stuff on the project page and then he continues to give more details than can be found on the project page - which isn't sayi...

In the art room I was expecting Hanako to run several times. Both Takashi and Saki were pretty intense for her standards... And don't mind the page views too much. They don't tell you anything about the actual number of people who read the story. People will be counted every time they open the threa...

But... this story did not work for me, at all, on so many levels. That. I also agree with most of the other stuff calcifer wrote, and let me add that the point that ripped me out of immersion completely was when Miki started to blurt out her complete family history out of the blue without any build...

You do realize that this means "Sendai Ikuei High School High School"? :lol: Indeed! They even have a website , and a school motto that Suzu could take the piss out of. You know I actually googled the name and found that website this afternoon (because I thought "Ikuei" was a strange name for a hig...

Sendai Ikuei Gakuen high school?" You do realize that this means "Sendai Ikuei High School High School"? :lol: and she would definitely play an undead 'lock! Well, certainly no Firemage... I'd see her as either a BM Hunter or some Healing class... Maybe Mistweaver... As for the bits of story not me...