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Why do you think trolls need another rationale besides that one?
If there was a rationale like that, people would use it to make an argument instead of posting stupid one-liners.

Very good start. I'm not sure, but from the end of the chapter I have a feeling the plot might move a bit too fast for the elaborate setup in the beginning. Well, let's see what kind of twists you have up your sleeve. Also, you might want to reconsider your timeline: If it was only six months since ...

It simply means "story" - so the full title would be "The Story of the Crippled Girl"

You mean Hisao and Misha don't have each others phone number??? Yes, that was the most unbelievable thing in this chapter ;-) But I also think Shizune was a bit OOC this time: She scolded Hisao, he snapped at her and sulked. The Shizune I know would tell him to suck it up, not have a breakdown and r...

That scene might even be Hisao practising AFTER Shizune found out he was learning JSL. Regarding what he signed in the scene - I don't think Mike Inel, who did that scene, has any experience with JSL and the devs didn't credit anyone as a special advisor for that either. So I guess it's just a rando...

In the neutral ending, Hisao does everything completely differently. He doesn't encourage or leave space for Hanako to grow in any way, he's basically just trying to always be there in order to help her regardless of whether this help is needed or if it's hurting her in the end Have a little faith ...

Another good chapter, but I think Hisao overreacts a bit there. He should be used to Shizune not mincing words by this point, and I don't see a real reason for him to snap like that.

How long is it from the end of Hanako's path to graduation? Possibly using Shizune's route as a measuring stick, since people say it goes up until graduation. I'd guess since Lilly has not come back from Scotland yet, and in Lilly's path there are still end term exams after her return, there are at...

Beautiful story, really!

And don't worry about the double post too much. SC will have it locked or deleted in no time.

Saved at each choice point and methodically tried out each possibility... So: "Other."

Drake wrote:I agree, Aura really wrote that scene well.

Would be weird if I requested she wrote more?

I'm pretty sure we haven't read the last of Aura yet. I don't think whatever is to come will be KS-related, though.
However it will be him doing the writing, not her.

I don't mind stories taking the characters into other settings, as long as they are good stories. That said, writing stuff for military settings is hard to do because most of us have fewer personal experiences with mitlitary situations than, say with romantic relationships. Just for example (I'm not...

Haven't seen any current recruitment threads in the forum...

Not sure what to think about that story yet. Might be fun, might be silly.
Anyway, you should pay more attention to the tenses. They are all over the place, and interestingly you seem to get more of them wrong than if you were just guessing...

I've only one question: Why the recruitment for the team dev is still on going? Is still there any projects hidden? That should be revealed, even if the ETA of it is another 5 years. So whats the problem? All of us can wait patiently for this kind of masterpiece. And anyways, the more people in the...