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Very good chapter.
Only, I think that instead of "abit" you intended to refer to "a bit"...

Isn't it ironic that Rin's "neutral" ending got twice as many votes as the "bad" one?

A few minor errors you might want to fix: ...in an industry first, you can actually turn the nudity off. No, you can't. You can turn off the porn, but nudity will still remain. The game allegedly was supposed to feature him as a possible mate, but then the company was shutting down and thus they kil...

Doctors Without Borders is indeed a worthy cause, and all the volunteers there have my highest respect!

@Suriko: What made you change your mind after all this time of not endorsing any single charity?

Hmm... I don't see how that definition could apply to this story, as none of the characters seem to be either married or in a relationship so far.

There are VNs without H-scenes, but in the case of KS, it being an eroge was part of the concept from its inception.
It's handled way better than in any other H-VN that I know - most of them are just cheap fap-material.

Is it really necessary to quote a full post with five pictures just to say that you loled?
I think this thread contains more quoted pictures than original ones. ^^°

Usually I don't need to complete all the bad endings in a VN either, but in the case of KS, you miss out on a lot if you don't read them. The best bad end in KS - and in fact in any VN I've read so far - is Rin's. It is so elaborate that I didn't want to believe that all that buildup was for a bad ...

Something I didn't think about when I first read the chapter:
I think epileptics don't usually lose consciousness when they have a seizure. But as you said her case of epilepsy is apparently more serious than usual...

Usually I don't need to complete all the bad endings in a VN either, but in the case of KS, you miss out on a lot if you don't read them. The best bad end in KS - and in fact in any VN I've read so far - is Rin's. It is so elaborate that I didn't want to believe that all that buildup was for a bad e...

Intriguing twist there at the end. Very kosheresque

One thing: The trip to Hokkaido lasts only one extended weekend, which seems to be contradicted by a few lines in your story, e.g.: ...reminding her of what they did that night…and the nights before. It wasn't the first time, but each time he shared the bed with Lilly, it was magical. Also, Hisao an...

You're off to a good start, but I have a feeling the title is already a big spoiler towrds the end...
Not too bad for a one shot, but for a multi-part story it's something I try to avoid.

charmisokay wrote:Meh, for me I dont really like the idea of it if someone you love is involved.
Not someone you would like to make love with...

Call me old-fashioned, but for me, that is pretty much the same.

I can feel Lilly's eyes staring at my back,... Really? Seems I somehow missed Chapter 3. How exactly is it difficult to explain a tablet? It's a small, flat computer with a touchscreen. Also I find myself skipping the diary entries, since they are in essence a tl:dr version of the previous chapter...