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by Mirage_GSM
Tue Feb 14, 2012 9:50 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: -
Replies: 148
Views: 62507

Re: With Apologies To Harlan Ellison [Spoilers, Gore Discret

Hmm... Bagheera is right...
The only thing that can conceivably happen is that everything turns out to be a dream, but in that case it will be impossible to bring the story to a satisfying end at all, because everything that happens would be subject to doubt.
by Mirage_GSM
Tue Feb 14, 2012 6:01 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: -
Replies: 148
Views: 62507

Re: With Apologies To Harlan Ellison [Spoilers, Gore Discret

I liked the ending. So the government did it. So what? Someone had to have done it. Yes, they did let them go, but I fear we will learn the reason for that soon. So he did skip over the rest of their school life and the years in between. All that could have been written, but it wouldn't have fitted ...
by Mirage_GSM
Mon Feb 13, 2012 12:43 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: -
Replies: 148
Views: 62507

Re: With Apologies To Harlan Ellison [Spoilers, Gore Discret

I prefer stories to have a logical explanation. It need not be scientific, but it should be consistent with the setting. (So in a fantasy setting you can get away with "a wizard did it.") Maybe that's why I'm not the biggest fan of horror stories, because most of them seem to sacrifice logic on the ...
by Mirage_GSM
Mon Feb 13, 2012 11:55 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Greater Than The Sum (Finished!) - All days now up: 11/4/12
Replies: 96
Views: 44268

Re: Arriving At Yamaku - Days 0-1 Complete

To be a bit more constructive: I noticed that you tend to write very elaborate descriptions. The opening passages or when he enters his room... However, when he comes across the most interesting thing for him (Naomi) all we really learn about her is that she is "ginger-haired." I'm not really sure i...
by Mirage_GSM
Mon Feb 13, 2012 5:46 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Greater Than The Sum (Finished!) - All days now up: 11/4/12
Replies: 96
Views: 44268

Re: Arriving At Yamaku - Day 0

Bit of advice: DON'T colour-code spoken text! It looks like a cop-out and it isn't even necessaary in this first chapter. Also some passages in the first half are inexplicably past tense, e.g.: Even though he had not been to the office at all today, or scheduled any meetings, or even conducted any p...
by Mirage_GSM
Sun Feb 12, 2012 2:05 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: The Hanako Thread - Spoilers, obviously
Replies: 641
Views: 154554

Re: The Hanako Thread - Spoilers, obviously

Nothing is canon, except for
a) what's in the VN and
b) what one of the devs expicitly declared to be canon here in the forums or on the blog. Best source for that would probably the "Ask"-Thread.
by Mirage_GSM
Sun Feb 12, 2012 1:50 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Listen to your Heart. Hisao x Misha. Contains sex.
Replies: 25
Views: 17464

Re: Listen to your Heart. Hisao x Misha. Contains sex.

myshoesarebrown wrote:*coughcough* I think a certain other...totally legit... Misha x Hisao fic was left out... *cough*Did I say anything?*cough*
Oh there are more of them, those were just those I could find on short notice. If you don't mind a nightmare or two, look up "Pearly Whites" ...
by Mirage_GSM
Sun Feb 12, 2012 8:41 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: -
Replies: 148
Views: 62507

Re: With Apologies To Harlan Ellison [Spoilers, Gore Discret

"THERE IS... ANOTHER."
Hmm... I wonder what it was about to say...
I'm fairly certain it wasn't "Skywalker." 8)

Oh, and by the way, that experiment setting somehow reminded me of "The Cube."
(If you haven't seen it, don't. All things considered it's a crappy movie.)
by Mirage_GSM
Sun Feb 12, 2012 6:48 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Reconciliation - (a Hanako bad-end story)
Replies: 227
Views: 120094

Re: Reconciliation - (a Hanako bad-end story)

...and I think I like your latest chapter.

I'd really like to hear "the sound of Julia finally realizing what [Hanako]’d actually handed her."
by Mirage_GSM
Sat Feb 11, 2012 10:02 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Listen to your Heart. Hisao x Misha. Contains sex.
Replies: 25
Views: 17464

Re: Listen to your Heart. Hisao x Misha. Contains sex.

I was wondering when you were going to post this. Looking forward to the second part ;-) This is great I was hoping for someone to explore MishaXHisao relationship! Hisao X Misha is not as common as some other pairings (I think Hisao X Hanako will top that list), but there's several to be found arou...
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Feb 10, 2012 7:14 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Other Disability Ideas
Replies: 9
Views: 3767

Re: Other Disability Ideas

I was talking with a friend not long ago (the conversation started as one about Katawa Shoujo, actually) and at one point, the conversation turned to, "If you had to lose one sense, what would it be?" And she and I both agreed that loosing the sense of touch would be the worst, as touch is related ...
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Feb 10, 2012 8:21 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Other Disability Ideas
Replies: 9
Views: 3767

Re: Other Disability Ideas

Thanks, you've added another webcomic to the list of stuff I have to follow. :?

I hate you. not really
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Feb 10, 2012 7:21 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Weekend at Hisao's (Was: At the Train Station) - [Some Porn]
Replies: 201
Views: 144134

Re: Weekend at Hisao's (Was: At the Train Station) - [Some P

Demoneq wrote:after all, there was supposed to be Kenji's route, but it was cut from the final version, I believe.
No.

(I realize you might be joking, but such things get quoted out of context all too easily.)
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Feb 10, 2012 6:29 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: KS on TVTropes
Replies: 20
Views: 5592

Re: KS on TVTropes

It's a better fit, but I'd rather say, it is a piece of Narrative Filigree that makes a second appearance, since it does not influence the plot in the slightest.
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Feb 10, 2012 5:57 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Weekend at Hisao's (Was: At the Train Station) - [Some Porn]
Replies: 201
Views: 144134

Re: Weekend at Hisao's (Was: At the Train Station) - [Some P

...Hisao is a hypocrite, commenting on Misha as Shizune's maid, while having Kenji as his best man.
There's quite a bit of a difference there, since Kenji has never been in love with him.
Common-law-marriage
I don't think there is an institution like that in Japan.