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Emi... Not sure if you're trolling... If you're missing two scenes directly after a choice point try the option you didn't pick the first time ! In This case run after her when she leaves the room. Not sure if you're trolling or just wrong ... to get the last two scenes of the good ending (what I l...

Yeah, sorry about that, I've always been rather bad at identifying and using proper tenses. Know of any online guide or anything that can help? There's not really any way but to practice. I learned English by reading tons of novels, but writing should be even better. If you like I can proofread you...

Well, it's basically just a very elaborate piece of Fanfiction/Fanart, but calling it "KS Plus" is pretty cheeky...

Acerus wrote:Nope, neither of them were mentioned at any time during Rin's arc.

Wrong. Sae calls Nomiya by his first name several times. (As I mentioned above...)

Act 1 Part 1: Slow Recovery - Join the student council and go run with Emi Act 2 Part 2: The Deep End - Just be an ass to everybody. Emi... Not sure if you're trolling... If you're missing two scenes directly after a choice point try the option you didn't pick the first time ! In This case run after...

You probably would have been disappointed.
As the original topic of this thread suggests, KS is not really suited for that format.

Very promising start, especially if this really is your first fanfic. One thing: You decided to write the story in past tense, which is fine, but you slipped in about half a dozen present tenses. Personally, I find it easier to write a first person narrator story in present tense. Two reasons: 1.) W...

Some of them were war veterans and historians, but they're coming off more as mysterious or faceless. Maybe that's what you intended, but they don't. They come off as arrogant assholes with no sense of empathy and no clue about what they are doing. At one time I was reminded of preschoolers trying ...

I'm sorry to say, but again the text needs a lot of reworking. You jumped between present and past tense more than a dozen times, you confused singular and plural several times and a few prepositions are off as well. I suggest you search for a proofreader if you're not yet comfortable with the Engli...

Also, two hours to write a chapter? Is that an act, or each section of the act? "Chapter" as in "scene" as they are in the library. I can definitely recommend using a laptop running the game, with a doc file open on another computer... I tried that to estimate how long it'd take me to transcribe, a...

Simple: As far as I am concerned, if the author of a work says it's canon, it is; if they say it isn't, it isn't.

I'm not sure what Aura will have to say about this, but if you really don't want to make a profit just post the *.doc-files on the forum^^° Regarding the workload, it's definitely doable. So far, it's taken me about two hours on average to type one chapter; a bit more if it's a long one. And you see...

Could also be simply because she cuts her hair during summer break and all other paths are finished before that...

Look here.