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The Top 20 producers is only about current production, not about totals.
And three days? Don't worry about that hurting your GPU any. My Laptop's GPU has been folding for about 18 months now without problems.

Hmm...
The characterisations are very similar to those in the anime. Maybe you shouldn't copy it quite as closely.
In any case it's very good writing. Hope you continue.

I wonder why noone had this idea before - Seems obvious now that it's out in the open.
Okay, KS doesn't have quite that many potential handlers...

It's a bit better than before, but it still reads like the summary of a story rather than the story itself.
I'm not sure what kind of advice would be useful for you... For starters I'd say you should read more english language stories. That will help you in the long run.

This discussion has already been done to the death in either Hanako's path thread or in Lilly's - maybe even in both^^° My opinion: Hanako gets better in both paths. In her own path she additionally ends up with a boyfriend. Q.E.D. Regarding the opportunity - or non-existance thereof - to avoid bad ...

What he said.
Is this Rock person supposed to be a cameo from some other show?
I'd google it, but I think the number of hits for "rock" would be staggering...

Heh, that made me laugh.
Can't wait for the TypeMoon and KID chapters

First of all, with good writing you can make an interesting story even with a ridiculous concept. Also, I've never seen people make fun of a well-written story on these forums yet. I was a bit sceptical about what marvel heroes could possibly do to help with the problems arising in a setting like KS...

Why there are attacking India?...

In that story this is what made you blink?

Yes, that was mean. Now I feel bad for Misha.
But Misha was behaving a bit strangely herself. Usually it would be Shizune who'd insist on adhering to the rules, and Misha'd wink and laugh it off...

No, the "i" is audible.

...and history proves that 15 weak guys have a good damn chance of beating up 1 strong guy (WW2) In WWII two strong guys did a pretty good job of beating up a dozen weak guys until two other strong guys decided to join the brawl. (I realize this is only marginally more historically correct than the...

Okay, so I decided to take a break from the translation and write another chapter of my story or two, just to show this story is still alive. Don’t expect regular updates anytime soon, though. The translation is still my priority. The break has been a bit longer than I expected it to be. I planned t...

...so give positive critiques OK? You're making it hard... The best advice I can give you is to take more time writing your chapters. They read as if you were writing the summary of a story and not the story itself. (And this doesn't just apply to the introduction but to the rest of the story as we...