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I assume this is the same continuity as your other story? Or is it that you just couldn't resist the menage a trois idea?
Regarding the rest of the story: Very well written. Moving.
Hope to see more of your work in the future.

Thanks for the warnings. I don't think I need to read this.

Hanako, ... 2. Hanako is such an emotionally dependent person that she'll love Hisao unconditionally. If we are talking in real life terms: ... 2. Ditto, but other way around (She's getting emancipated more and more every day, she can wake up one morning thinking she don't really need the mope anyw...

When the full version came out we did take on a few new members, but right now we are comfortable at five translators.
If that should change, I will put up a call for help on the forums.

Nudity is not adult content. You get that in soap commercials on prime time TV and noone complains.
The adult content filter only skips explicit sexual content.

Excellent!
The best chapter so far, and that's saying something.

Hmm.... Let me think... In reverse order: Shizune - What relationship? They're more or less fuckbuddies. Rin - Uhm... Not really likely. Lilly - She was this close to leaving him already and still has a sister she loves half a world away that she might start to miss once she's gone. Hanako - Probabl...

Mirrormn wrote:... It's painfully unnecessary, awkward, and immature.

Yep. Totally sounds like something teenagers would do.

Thought it might be that. Implications unpleasant...

Google it, if you don't get the reference.

Alexbond45 wrote: This was explained in another topic of mine.

Japan has school differently, You start in January, Have Summer Break, and finish the school year at the winter semester.

I think...

Not quite. Starts in April, ends in March.

Why should there be a scene like that if there's no plot reason at all to include one?
They go to three different classes, have different hobbies/clubs and in some cases don't even know each other by more than name. Why should they all hang out together?

...I don't want to share any MST Ken might have.

MicroStructure Technology?
MicroScale Thermophoresis?
Minimum Spanning Tree?
Missouri University of Science and Technology?
Multimedia Systems Technician?
Monterey-Salinas Transit?

The most common reason is people didn't get Lilly's bad ending.
I think it is also possible to unlock every scene in Emi's path without seeing her bad ending, so check if you got that.

Well, the writing is not that bad, but can you give me a reason why I should continue reading this? The plot is exactly the same as in the original with only a few lines of dialogue changed (and the nurse visit skipped). Add to that the plot-hole of why two apparently healthy people should attend Ya...

The idea itself is neither good nor bad, but it is hardly original. At the moment there are two ongoing fics here in the forum concerning Hisao pursuing Rika and Saki respectively... three if you count that Miki path but that seems to have been abandoned after one or two chapters. What is WAY more i...