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Names. How did you get to naming the characters (main cast at least)? I can't believe nobody asked you that already, but I can't find it using search. It just hit me, while looking for some Eimee Mullins references how her first name sounds like Emi's. Am I even close with that one? What about the ...

So your OC is half blind, hard of hearing, missing a foot and has burn-scars? Is he going to lose a hand soon as well, or do you think you've done enough to him already? Also, having the protagonist blatantly address the readers and tell them his life-story is about as close as you can get to writin...

Ah, that might be where my confusion came from. I misread that part for Hisao being now in class 3-4 (which is Emi's) but in the story it's class 4-3, so apparently they are supposed to have advanced a year - which as stanman pointed out is impossible since they'll be graduating at the end of the sc...

Well, let's just say you shouldn't be too disappointed if your first time doesn't go as (almost) flawlessly as in your fic. From my experience it doesn't especially if both partners are first-timers.
Then again, it wouldn't be fun to write a fic about something like that...

I haven't seen "Boku wa tomodachi ga sukunai" but so far I can follow your story just fine. Obviously I don't know the character you introduced, but you did a good job with her introduction, though I can't tell if it's true to the original.

I saw it coming. You don't make a character sick unless they're going to die. That's a theme in almost all the fics I've seen so far.

And this here where almost every character is "sick" to some degree.
Of course, since this story is by Doomish, it wasn`t hard to guess the ending.

Roamin12 wrote:..., as long as it isn't Rin's neutral (My god, that ending man, that ending *shudder*).

I don't understand why so many people agree Rin's second bad ending is heart-wrenching to the extreme, yet still continue to label it "neutral"...

PV = nRT is usually introduced in your first semester of college chemistry. Strange. In chemistry you'd use mol to describe how much of one substance you need in relation to another substance for a reaction to take place. Calculating the volume of a substance under specific pressures and temperatur...

I didn't think Hisao came across as a dummy at all. Quite to the contrary. He tried his best to make Rika see what she is doing to herself (and to himself), and I think she needed to be told that one way or the other. Not telling each other what you think is not a healthy way to lead a relationship....

I'm a bit confused... Why is Hisao no longer in Mutous class? If you got the classes correct, Hisao, Hanako, Shizune and Misha changed into Emi's class and Mutou is now teaching the blind class Lilly was in^^° Also, in your story everybody seems to have taken a deep drought from the nice-bottle... S...

Rika sure is a bitch. Honestly, I can't imagine the other option leading to a better end. Hisao did a really good job of showing his feelings and made a good effort to take a look at herself and maybe change for the better. Just sucking it up and continuing to catering to every whim of a narcissist ...

“The cherry blossoms last year isn’t as beautiful as today, don’t you think so…?” he asks. "Last year" Hisao was in the hospital fot the cherry bloom... Also, "the cherry blossoms last year" should be: a) plural and b) past tense So: “The cherry blossoms last year weren’t as beautiful as today..." ...

Please don't hijack another thread...

Wow... I get to choose between two of my least favourite characters...
At least you included "other".

Otakumon wrote:Good story, but why is Mutuo beating himself up about calling Hisao's parents? That's the principal's job.

Here in Gemany a call like that would be the job of the police. No idea how they handle it in Japan, though.