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Well, the last time he had sex with Shizune should have been about seven months earlier, so I guess he's golden there...
There were a few more typos than usual in your story; e.g. Clinging on for dead life instead of dear life

Oh right, Magneto's name is Magnus, not Maxwell, isn't it? Seems I focussed to much on the surname. Given what I know about Magneto's background, I think the possibility of an evil - okay, good - twin is slim... Guess, I'll let myself be surprised... Regarding the backstory: I don't know much more a...

Three stories; about as different as can be, yet all of them excellent.
It's little gems like these that I like more than 50-page epics!
About walls - is it supposed to be after Emi's bad ending or between the fight and the reconciliation? I assume the former,but the latter would also fit nicely...

I wasn't aware Magneto's touch can kill, but if you have the suspicion it might do something like that, you shouldn't touch someone to test it. One of Rin's paintings seems to be a bad choice for the first visual input to show to a blind person. Even sighted people would be challenged by those. Also...

"Yes, but pray do tell, what is this prestigious club you would rather have me attend instead of this apparently taboo extra ciricular activity in which I wish to partake in?" I say, deciding to play mind games by utilizing my vocabulary in order to cause Misha to mess up the translation as much as...

Which begs the question: Can the title be considered content?

And if Hanako is the girl who just can't control her own libido, then she would be most likely willing to accept an open relationship. If Hisao plays it smartly, he's in for a life full of orgies and wife swapping. ;) Believe it or not, but some people just aren`t interested in stuff like that - ev...

The scarf was a nice touch. Otherwise it felt a bit too rushed.

I assume Yozora has areason to be so hostile to Lilly? If so it isn`t obvious yet.
Also, lying to Hanako is one stupid move. He knows she will get the truth from Lilly sooner or later.
And finally merde is french not italian. Not sure, if this was intentional or not...

You should have your characters only use vocabulary you yourself are familiar with...

Very fun read.
At first I thought Star Trek crossover, but then... Fighters
Still they seem to value redundant systems just as little as their Star Trek counterparts...

They are referring to this.

... and the outcomes of everyone's lives seems very believable to me. No. Not really... It more like. "This fleeting acquantance I had during Highschool completely turned my life around." While something like that might in some cases make a good story, this is it times six . Since this is set post ...

If you want real advic, wait for Mirage. Thanks for the vote of confidence, but there's not much I can say about the story yet. No mistakes that jumped at me, nice writing style, and best of all you didn't feel compelled to spell out every last bit of background about yout OC during the first three...

You know, I'm always happy to see a well-written story here - especially if it doesn't have Hisao as the narrator^^° Also, it's interesting to see your take on a narcoleptic character. It's quite different from my own. If this were a one-shot it would be a curious place to stop it, so I guess we're ...