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One thing - do you think Japanese people say "Oh My God?" Serious question because I don't know either.

They say it all the time in KS...
I've seen it at least a dozen times so far while translating Emi's path.

Why does everyone always assume that someone who just woke from a year-long coma can just up and take a stroll to the cafeteria without even a wheelchair?
Also, it's "oppose" not "appose". Looking forward to the next chapter.

It is quite obvious that one kind is supposed to be Emi's written text and the other is supposed to be Shizune's.

Well one of them is empty because that's where Rin likes to hide out sometimes, and we're explicitly told it's currently going unused. I suppose it could be 3-5 or higher, but I thought it was stated somewhere there are only 4 classrooms in the hall. Hmm. I am sure there are a lot more empty classr...

AT The beginning I was feeling some sort of deja vu, but you took the story in a different direction.
The only thing that felt a little off to me was how the letter survived the fire... There wasn't really any reason to deposit it with a lawyer.
Otherwise a very interesting piece, like always.

Not sure it's empty - there are simply no characters from that class appearing in the story.

Iirc Rin and Emi are in class 3-4.
Also, Lilly's homeroom teacher is called Ms Miyagi.

Seems like Lelouch is here to stay - at least in fanfiction - even though he is gone from the VN...
I for one didn't use him because I liked the character (though I do) but because I thought it would be a challenge to write an aphasic character.

I never said I didn't like it...
I 'll reply in more detail to your PM.

Hisao became 67 years old.
When he died, Hanako was 63.
I don't know, but to me that sounds like Hisao is four years older than Hanako...

So... Anyone ever told you about this stuff called suspension? You know, creating and sustaining it? What you had here was the beginning of a story. You introduced an antagnist with Apocalypse, you put one of the protagonist in danger... You could have filled a storyarc with this. And then you have ...

There is a competition for naked chess?

Joking aside, how come Hisao is four years older than Hanako at the time of his death?

Interesting concept... I hope this thing about reserving posts for future chapters doesn't become an epidemic around here, because I find it very annoying! If you want people to find the next chapter more easily, put in a link or an index! This way we either miss the updates, or you have do make an ...

The important words are "She saw"...
Anyway, I wonder why Lilly didn't do a little CSI work in Hanako's apartment...

Because Mutou has written [Maxwell's equations] on the blackboard, and is making a point of telling us they're important. I guess they might be important to recognize in a historical sense, since they did help scientists understand light, but I can't think of many high school students who can actua...