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Maybe you should consider posting smaller portions...
I don't know about other people here, but I mostly check the forums in the mornings before I'm off to work, and simply don't have time to read half a novel...

I like the story so far. Not much to comment on at all. As to the dashes, I do not like m-dashes, personally. I think one kind of dash is sufficient to express everything without ambiguity, but like I said this is more personal preference than anything else. Oh, and this is not really something that...

Interesting start, interesting character - did I mention I am always glad for stories with OCs for a change?
Oh, and I smiled at the "Silent Banshee" bit. Very fitting image!

You know, from the looks of them I'd say that Shizunes and Misha's skirts would violate rules about length at just about any Japanese school. I would have thought so as well before I came here... Anyway, some remarks regarding continuity: KS takes place in 2007. Since many students have been going ...

Maybe you should make it more clear that your description of Emi's speed is supposed to be hyperbole. It reads like it's supposed to be real.
Oh, and is there really such a thing as a gutair or is that a regular typo of yours?

I found this very hard to read with the narration always interrupted by the lyrics and you switching back and forth between past and present tense all the time...

Oh no! Someone found IT...
Seriously, there are a lot of old fics necroed lately. Not that they haven't earned it, but still...

I do not think it is ridiculous, even less so if she really does have a crush on Hisao.
Need I say that I would have told Rika a piece of my mind and told her to see a shrink long ago?

I wonder why the robot assessed Lilly as the highest threat.
I also wonder why noone else wonders about that...

I generally try to have at least three or four chapters written in advance before I post one. That was what I did for Katawa Kijo as well as for Tripping, though at the moment, what is postet for the latter is the extent of what I've written. I've found this very practical for several small retcons ...

Nein, alles kommt auf einmal wenn es fertig ist.
Eventuell wird delta auch mehrere Sprachversionen in einen Patch packen.

Actually, Emi not wanting augmentation is something I'd believe in a heartbeat. She doesn't really need them. She's already faster on her prosthetics than most healthy people.

Hallo! Erstmal vielen Dank für dein Lob. Wegen des Releasedatums muss ich dich enttäuschen. Es gibt noch keins und wird auch keins geben. Wir wollen uns nicht unter Zeitdruck setzen, denn was am Ende rauskommt, soll auch eine angemessene Qualität haben. Nur umzu hohe Erwartungen zu dämpfen: Die über...

I agree with Beoran: You don't pass out from just pain for more than a day. Doesn't happen, or the spanish inquisition never would have gotten any confessions :-) Besides anything - be it pain, injury or any other medical condition except for sleep deprivation - that knocks you out for more than an ...

Miki being the negative influence? I cannot imagine any influence worse than Rika... Who wants to bet she hid Hisao's pills for some some sick reason of hers or other? I'm surprised he didn't call her on it immediately. Oh, and the second sentnce of scene 5 is a bit strange. Is it supposed to be neg...