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by Mirage_GSM
Sun May 27, 2012 9:59 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The United States of Misha (Misha Post Shizune Good End)
Replies: 203
Views: 104988

Re: The United States of Misha Updated 5/27

No problem for me. I have the same policy.

Close to the end you have a few dinners that could do without an ' .
And somewhere in the middle there's some confusion between their and they're or something similar, but I can't find the place again...
by Mirage_GSM
Sun May 27, 2012 9:20 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Anybody else disappointed Katawa Shoujo didn't make Cracked'
Replies: 77
Views: 18235

Re: Cracked 86'd KS from 6 Most Insane Video Games About Dat

I'm quite amused by how the 'mainstream' internet despises 4chan while lapping up any memes they crap out. It's come to the point where I use 4chan as a litmus test for ignorance and idiocy: if someone goes 'EURGH' instead of 'yeah, that place has some weird shit, but I browse [insert subboards] be...
by Mirage_GSM
Sun May 27, 2012 5:37 am
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: "Can you feel the love tonight" (Shizune/Misha/Hisao/Lilly)
Replies: 79
Views: 48129

Re: "Can you feel the love tonight" (Shizune/Misha/Hisao/Lil

Well, it doesn't say anywhere that only Disney is allowed...
That and I didn't think this was worth its own thread.
by Mirage_GSM
Sun May 27, 2012 4:31 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Game
Replies: 22
Views: 8779

Re: The Game

Chapter 4 After ten minutes of surprisingly entertaining puzzle solving the lesson is over and Shiina and Shizune come over to my desk. <Hi Hicchan! Would you like to come to the caféteria with us for lunch? We can show you around the school afterwards.> I also rise from my desk. <Sure. I’m quite h...
by Mirage_GSM
Sun May 27, 2012 4:20 am
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: "Can you feel the love tonight" (Shizune/Misha/Hisao/Lilly)
Replies: 79
Views: 48129

Re: "Can you feel the love tonight" (Shizune/Misha/Hisao/Lil

Inspired by a recent xkcd strip... I'm sure you recognize the song it is suppsed to be sung to without my help - it is quite distinctive... While Kenji’s eyesight’s pretty bad he still sees more than other men, And Lilly cannot see at all but gets to play the mother hen. Ritsu had to give up her dru...
by Mirage_GSM
Sun May 27, 2012 12:05 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: KS: Bloodline (Act 2: Chapter Three 2/11)
Replies: 91
Views: 34054

Re: KS: Bloodline (Act 1 : Chapter Five 5/26/12)

I don't mind either way about the music, but for me it's wasted effort. I never listen to music when I read. It tends to distract me.
Oh, and very nice chapter by the way.
by Mirage_GSM
Sat May 26, 2012 9:29 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Anybody else disappointed Katawa Shoujo didn't make Cracked'
Replies: 77
Views: 18235

Re: Cracked 86'd KS from 6 Most Insane Video Games About Dat

Agree that there's no reason why KS should be on that list in the first place.
I can think of at least half a dozen more VNs I'd put on that list before I'd even consider KS. Except for Kenji, there's nothing even remotely insane about it.
by Mirage_GSM
Sat May 26, 2012 9:23 pm
Forum: Blog posts
Topic: KS at Comitia 100
Replies: 14
Views: 13109

Re: KS at Comitia 100

I'm not sure if delta speaks farsi...
I guess you can say he'll translate it to python :-)
by Mirage_GSM
Sat May 26, 2012 9:18 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Facing my Pains
Replies: 115
Views: 30204

Re: Facing my Pains

The thing about line breaks... You're only supposed to use them when the speaking/acting person changes. For example, if Hisao is having an inner monologue of four sentences you don't have to use any line breaks at all - except if he changes the subject completely. But I'll shut up about this now, s...
by Mirage_GSM
Sat May 26, 2012 8:26 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The United States of Misha (Misha Post Shizune Good End)
Replies: 203
Views: 104988

Re: The United States of Misha 5/24 Update

I find it a bit funny that in a fanfic to a VN that contains graphic sex scenes, people find it offensive if someone who is about 20 years old is drinking a beer... Especially since here in Germany the legal drinking age for beer is 16 years. I'm not sure about the state of New York. Is the legal ag...
by Mirage_GSM
Sat May 26, 2012 8:11 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Three small stories.
Replies: 11
Views: 3161

Re: Three small stories.

Damn wiifi connection made me lose my post :-( Anyway, nice stories, all three of them. Rin's story feels a bit slow - not much happening there. Characterisation of Rin is pretty good, though. I like Hanako's story best. At the end there is a line where she worries about Lilly coming in and seeing S...
by Mirage_GSM
Sat May 26, 2012 7:36 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Running Interference (Haganai/KS Xover) *Discontinued
Replies: 96
Views: 40261

Re: Running Interference (Yozora vs. Hanako, Xover) Updated

Sometimes, Hisao is dense, but the levels you take it to become a bit hard to believe. He shouldn't need Miki to point out the obvious to him, and even after that "revelation" his behaviour doesn't change one bit. No idea why Hanako might be mad? Really? And if he wants to show Yozora their friendsh...
by Mirage_GSM
Sat May 26, 2012 6:15 am
Forum: Blog posts
Topic: KS at Comitia 100
Replies: 14
Views: 13109

Re: KS at Comitia 100

AfaIk, the only dev working on the translation is SC, who does the Italian one.
...and I guess once the translations are done it will be delta who creates the new download versions.
by Mirage_GSM
Sat May 26, 2012 6:06 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Three small stories.
Replies: 11
Views: 3161

Re: Three small stories.

I don't think that collection threads get fewer responses in general. It's probably just that one shots - which the collection threads primarily contain - don't have as much potential for speculation as multi-parters. Regarding these stories... Well, I don't usually follow any links to pastebin or o...
by Mirage_GSM
Fri May 25, 2012 7:43 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tea Gone Cold [WIP]
Replies: 70
Views: 14751

Re: Tea Gone Cold [WIP]

Hope this helps because you have great potential mate :wink: Is this sentence missing a comma or an "a"? The wink made me suspect the latter... Writing is okay except for one "who's" in the beginning, but there's an awful lot of hugging invloved so far - especially since he's had almost no contact ...