No problem for me. I have the same policy.
Close to the end you have a few dinners that could do without an ' .
And somewhere in the middle there's some confusion between their and they're or something similar, but I can't find the place again...
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- Sun May 27, 2012 9:59 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: The United States of Misha (Misha Post Shizune Good End)
- Replies: 203
- Views: 104988
- Sun May 27, 2012 9:20 am
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Anybody else disappointed Katawa Shoujo didn't make Cracked'
- Replies: 77
- Views: 18235
Re: Cracked 86'd KS from 6 Most Insane Video Games About Dat
I'm quite amused by how the 'mainstream' internet despises 4chan while lapping up any memes they crap out. It's come to the point where I use 4chan as a litmus test for ignorance and idiocy: if someone goes 'EURGH' instead of 'yeah, that place has some weird shit, but I browse [insert subboards] be...
- Sun May 27, 2012 5:37 am
- Forum: Fan Works
- Topic: "Can you feel the love tonight" (Shizune/Misha/Hisao/Lilly)
- Replies: 79
- Views: 48129
Re: "Can you feel the love tonight" (Shizune/Misha/Hisao/Lil
Well, it doesn't say anywhere that only Disney is allowed...
That and I didn't think this was worth its own thread.
That and I didn't think this was worth its own thread.
- Sun May 27, 2012 4:31 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: The Game
- Replies: 22
- Views: 8779
Re: The Game
Chapter 4 After ten minutes of surprisingly entertaining puzzle solving the lesson is over and Shiina and Shizune come over to my desk. <Hi Hicchan! Would you like to come to the caféteria with us for lunch? We can show you around the school afterwards.> I also rise from my desk. <Sure. I’m quite h...
- Sun May 27, 2012 4:20 am
- Forum: Fan Works
- Topic: "Can you feel the love tonight" (Shizune/Misha/Hisao/Lilly)
- Replies: 79
- Views: 48129
Re: "Can you feel the love tonight" (Shizune/Misha/Hisao/Lil
Inspired by a recent xkcd strip... I'm sure you recognize the song it is suppsed to be sung to without my help - it is quite distinctive... While Kenji’s eyesight’s pretty bad he still sees more than other men, And Lilly cannot see at all but gets to play the mother hen. Ritsu had to give up her dru...
- Sun May 27, 2012 12:05 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: KS: Bloodline (Act 2: Chapter Three 2/11)
- Replies: 91
- Views: 34054
Re: KS: Bloodline (Act 1 : Chapter Five 5/26/12)
I don't mind either way about the music, but for me it's wasted effort. I never listen to music when I read. It tends to distract me.
Oh, and very nice chapter by the way.
Oh, and very nice chapter by the way.
- Sat May 26, 2012 9:29 pm
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Anybody else disappointed Katawa Shoujo didn't make Cracked'
- Replies: 77
- Views: 18235
Re: Cracked 86'd KS from 6 Most Insane Video Games About Dat
Agree that there's no reason why KS should be on that list in the first place.
I can think of at least half a dozen more VNs I'd put on that list before I'd even consider KS. Except for Kenji, there's nothing even remotely insane about it.
I can think of at least half a dozen more VNs I'd put on that list before I'd even consider KS. Except for Kenji, there's nothing even remotely insane about it.
- Sat May 26, 2012 9:23 pm
- Forum: Blog posts
- Topic: KS at Comitia 100
- Replies: 14
- Views: 13109
Re: KS at Comitia 100
I'm not sure if delta speaks farsi...
I guess you can say he'll translate it to python
I guess you can say he'll translate it to python
- Sat May 26, 2012 9:18 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Facing my Pains
- Replies: 115
- Views: 30204
Re: Facing my Pains
The thing about line breaks... You're only supposed to use them when the speaking/acting person changes. For example, if Hisao is having an inner monologue of four sentences you don't have to use any line breaks at all - except if he changes the subject completely. But I'll shut up about this now, s...
- Sat May 26, 2012 8:26 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: The United States of Misha (Misha Post Shizune Good End)
- Replies: 203
- Views: 104988
Re: The United States of Misha 5/24 Update
I find it a bit funny that in a fanfic to a VN that contains graphic sex scenes, people find it offensive if someone who is about 20 years old is drinking a beer... Especially since here in Germany the legal drinking age for beer is 16 years. I'm not sure about the state of New York. Is the legal ag...
- Sat May 26, 2012 8:11 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Three small stories.
- Replies: 11
- Views: 3161
Re: Three small stories.
Damn wiifi connection made me lose my post :-( Anyway, nice stories, all three of them. Rin's story feels a bit slow - not much happening there. Characterisation of Rin is pretty good, though. I like Hanako's story best. At the end there is a line where she worries about Lilly coming in and seeing S...
- Sat May 26, 2012 7:36 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Running Interference (Haganai/KS Xover) *Discontinued
- Replies: 96
- Views: 40261
Re: Running Interference (Yozora vs. Hanako, Xover) Updated
Sometimes, Hisao is dense, but the levels you take it to become a bit hard to believe. He shouldn't need Miki to point out the obvious to him, and even after that "revelation" his behaviour doesn't change one bit. No idea why Hanako might be mad? Really? And if he wants to show Yozora their friendsh...
- Sat May 26, 2012 6:15 am
- Forum: Blog posts
- Topic: KS at Comitia 100
- Replies: 14
- Views: 13109
Re: KS at Comitia 100
AfaIk, the only dev working on the translation is SC, who does the Italian one.
...and I guess once the translations are done it will be delta who creates the new download versions.
...and I guess once the translations are done it will be delta who creates the new download versions.
- Sat May 26, 2012 6:06 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Three small stories.
- Replies: 11
- Views: 3161
Re: Three small stories.
I don't think that collection threads get fewer responses in general. It's probably just that one shots - which the collection threads primarily contain - don't have as much potential for speculation as multi-parters. Regarding these stories... Well, I don't usually follow any links to pastebin or o...
- Fri May 25, 2012 7:43 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Tea Gone Cold [WIP]
- Replies: 70
- Views: 14751
Re: Tea Gone Cold [WIP]
Hope this helps because you have great potential mate :wink: Is this sentence missing a comma or an "a"? The wink made me suspect the latter... Writing is okay except for one "who's" in the beginning, but there's an awful lot of hugging invloved so far - especially since he's had almost no contact ...