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By the way, by ECT do you mean electrochemotherapy, electroconvulsive therapy, elementary cognitive testing or something else altogether? Because neither seem apppropriate for curing hallucinations... Well, the second might have been considered appropriate 50 years ago... are you under the assumpti...

I think in an earlier chapter you said he would run only short distances now because of his injury. Why would that even be an issue if he only ever ran the 100m anyway? Somehow the second half of this chapter felt like someone had pushed the fast forward button. There are a few other things that put...

Well, it would be one explanation why they admit Hisao to a mental hospital instead of simply having him see a therapist regularly. By the way, by ECT do you mean electrochemotherapy, electroconvulsive therapy, elementary cognitive testing or something else altogether? Because neither seem apppropri...

Somehow this made me crave some chicken and egg...

But seriously, over the last two or three chapters I started to like this story more and more. Might be that she's not trying so hard to antagonize everyone anymore...

I'm happy when I remember my dreams at all, much less several levels of dreams nested within each other^^
Are you saying this actually happens to people?

Yes, very, but I certainly won't return there when I have to foot the bill myself - or need to suitably impress a date like Misha did

I wasn't saying there isn't a restaurant like that - there migt well be.
I was just relating a personal experience pertinent to the story.

There were three or four sentences that were missing a word to make sense...
Also: "then" and "than" - keep them straight!

I made a pronounciation guide for all the names if you care to find it - posting links from my tablet is a bit complicated ^^ I've been to a japanese steakhouse once, and expensive is only half of it. I didn't get to see the final bill (business dinner), but an orange juice cost about ten dollars......

Also - and I, too, could be wrong - I think this story's mention of Rika running with Miki predates Rikabro's.

If I had to speculate...
If Lilly were with the rebels, I'd expect Hanako in that camp as well... So my guess for the rebel leader is Kenji:-)

I agree it's a vey nice story.
If I had to complain about something it would be that you get a bit too descriptive at some points, especially regarding stuff we already know from the VN. That's mostly in thefirst half, though. It gets better later.

Interesting... I wonder how fainting works in the afterlife. Usually it's a lack of oxygen in the brain due to stress widening the arteries and the blood falling down the extremities, in this case legs. But Hisao - scientist that he is - has already established by experimentation that his brain no l...

Wow, a really busy day for new fanfictions...
I expect the girls have also met an untimely demise, or it wouldn't make much sense to use any KS connection at all for this story.
I cannot say much about the story yet, but I like your humour and the OC you introduced

What do you expect? That whole thread happened within 24 hours of the release of KS, and nobody there had heard of it before or read the VN.
The worst it says is that the cracked forums aren't very well moderated.