Why is Lilly resigning from the council, if she is only going to Scotland for three weeks?
Other than that... Lots of mistakes concerning verb forms. Mostly tenses but also singular/plural mixups. Too many to point out individually...
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- Fri Jun 15, 2012 7:19 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: The Haunting: A Love Story *UPDATED 02/26/2015*
- Replies: 124
- Views: 64442
- Fri Jun 15, 2012 6:43 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Lilly "Bittersweet" neutral end continuation
- Replies: 26
- Views: 8235
Re: Lilly "Bittersweet" neutral end continuation
Considering this takes place during the graduation, she wouldn't be pregnant anymore...
- Fri Jun 15, 2012 9:56 am
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Ask!
- Replies: 4980
- Views: 1482617
Re: Ask!
Just the stuff that has been said before: Yamaku is located in Japan, thus uses the japanese school system. In Japan there are six years of elementary school, three years of middle school and three years of high school. Third year of high school corresponds to the 12th year overall. The school year ...
- Fri Jun 15, 2012 6:23 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
- Replies: 862
- Views: 332253
Re: Mean Time to Breakdown — (Iwanako) (u. 6/3/2012)
Natsume and Naomi are not canonically lesbian. There is one fic where Naomi is paired up with Hanako, while Natsume is explicitly straight. There is another recent fic about Miki and Suzu where Natsume and Naomi are referred to as a couple. There might be one or two more fics I am forgetting at the ...
- Thu Jun 14, 2012 6:47 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: The United States of Misha (Misha Post Shizune Good End)
- Replies: 203
- Views: 104988
Re: The United States of Misha 6/14 Update
Is there anyone here who can translate Hisao's sentences to japanese, put them through a translator and post the results? I'm afraid my Japanese is not sufficient for the topics they are talking about 
- Thu Jun 14, 2012 6:41 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Facing my Pains
- Replies: 115
- Views: 30204
Re: Facing my Pains
Let me get this straight...
He asked Hanako to visit his home over the holidays?
With Hanako's anxiety as it is?
While being in an almost-relationship with Suzu?
I can imagine the reactions of his parents ("Oh, you already found a girlfriend?")
...and that of Suzu when she found out...
He asked Hanako to visit his home over the holidays?
With Hanako's anxiety as it is?
While being in an almost-relationship with Suzu?
I can imagine the reactions of his parents ("Oh, you already found a girlfriend?")
...and that of Suzu when she found out...
- Thu Jun 14, 2012 6:01 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: The United States of Misha (Misha Post Shizune Good End)
- Replies: 203
- Views: 104988
Re: The United States of Misha 6/14 Update
Gosh, japanese - english translators on smartphones were a lot better in 2008 than they are today it seems. :-) I think you missed the potential for some REALLY awkward mistranslations. Yesterday I had google tranlate a smiley as "engineering"... Or if you're not into that, just have Hisao talk Engl...
- Thu Jun 14, 2012 9:21 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Challenge Accepted (Kenji/Iwanako) Updated 4/3
- Replies: 12
- Views: 6267
Re: Challenge Accepted (Kenji/Iwanako One-Shot)
Duh... Yeah, following Kenji's logic can hurt sometimes... And yes, the "na" can mean fish, and "ko" means child - not necessarily "of". That depends on the context. So you could write Iwanako's name with the Kanji for rock, fish and child. Not sure which Kanji they actually use, and I can't write K...
- Thu Jun 14, 2012 8:56 am
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Who Told You About KS?
- Replies: 69
- Views: 14862
Re: Who Told You About KS?
We already have a thread called "How did you find yourselves here?" (or something similar).
- Thu Jun 14, 2012 7:58 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Lilly "Bittersweet" neutral end continuation
- Replies: 26
- Views: 8235
Re: Lilly "Bittersweet" neutral end continuation
During the whole storyline, Lilly has always been shown to be an exceptionally good judge of character, especially where Hisao is concerned. There is no way she would have interpreted his reaction as "blasé acceptance" At the time Hisao confronts her, it is only a few days until she finally leaves. ...
- Thu Jun 14, 2012 7:42 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Challenge Accepted (Kenji/Iwanako) Updated 4/3
- Replies: 12
- Views: 6267
Re: Challenge Accepted (Kenji/Iwanako One-Shot)
See? That wasn't too hard, was it? :-) Ahem, I mean I would like to state that in no way was my post the other day meant to be a challenge of any kind. I approve of the results, though. A few typos: Tall building scraping the sky... Feminist are everywhere... You're never suppose to lie... ...corner...
- Wed Jun 13, 2012 6:18 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Lilly "Bittersweet" neutral end continuation
- Replies: 26
- Views: 8235
Re: Lilly "Bittersweet" neutral end continuation
It's not so much a lie as misleading action. She started a relationshipwith him, not mentioning that she would dump him a few weeks later anyway. That's worse than lying in my book. But if you look at it that way... In the bad ening they were both dishonest which each other, so maybe they deserve ea...
- Wed Jun 13, 2012 5:56 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
- Replies: 862
- Views: 332253
Re: Mean Time to Breakdown — (Iwanako) (u. 6/3/2012)
Easy: You just have to make up the situation where they are meeting instead of copying it from the VN.atw_ah wrote: I just realized, how would a Iwanako/Kenji storyline even start without Hisao being in Yamaku in the first place?
- Wed Jun 13, 2012 5:50 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Facing my Pains
- Replies: 115
- Views: 30204
Re: Facing my Pains
You may be able to estimate your limit, if it is because of endurance. If the problem is a back pain, that may or may not be set off by everey running step you take, you cannot tell if the step that eventually WILL set it off will be the 1001st, the 762nd or the 58th. Basically it will be the step w...
- Wed Jun 13, 2012 5:45 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Taxi ride to nowhere
- Replies: 34
- Views: 13157
Re: Taxi ride to nowhere
Hoo boy. Reminds me of 5cm/s. God I didn't want to remember that. First anime that gave me the feels. Never heard of it. You should fix that! It's a very good bittersweet slice-of-life anime about finding and losing love. Same director as The Place Promised in our Early Days and Voices of a Distant...