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I wanted to reply to the question, but there is nothing I can add to what Bagheera already wrote. I am glad I am not the only one who thinks this way.

As far as blame goes though I still think his cheating is potentially the worse of the two; either he's giving emotional as well as sexual intimacy to another (while Lilly offers only the latter)... Not sure I see it that way at all. Yeah the cheating is a problem but how is telling him going to do...

Before this becomes a second Mendacium, can we please agree to disagree. I think we all made our opinions sufficiently clear and repeating them slightly reworded won't change that.
Also Doomish's story doesn't deserve this kind of bickering. I think we all agree on that.

I think your Rin is fine. My personal opinion is that she wouldn't change her personality completely, but your version is surely viable. Whar I don't understand at all is Hisao. First, he makes her remember, then he leaves her again. First he's certain it will work out this time, then he loses hope ...

Agree with Bagheera. Sure I would be angry at Miki, but I'd be angry at Lilly A LOT more. And, let's be honest, sleeping with Miki while still keeping his options open with Lilly was not really nice towards Miki either. Considering her honest display of affection later I think I'd be willing to forg...

Not to put a too fine point on it, but Hisao doesn't really seem to bee too concerned about that guys physical well-being.

Is a white corridor still a white corridor when it is painted blue?
And why does Hisao check the pulse if he already noticed the man was breathing?

He was seriously talking about discourse :-3

Also making the story sound more natural and less awkward would be the same as the worlds fattest man running the four minute mile... it's virtually impossible since I've had to think on my feet at some points in the story, otherwise I'll be taking weeks and not days on each chapter because I'll be...

Well, she's probably related to Lilly in some way and he's her godfather or something.e

I think Rin is fine.

But why does Hisao have an artificial inner ear?

Nah... Molly needs a new friend. Maybe the diabetic girl that sits by Miki that nobody ever talks about? Or maybe somebody from the mysterious class 3-1. Heh, call me nobody, then :-) And her name's Ikuno. There's a picture on the shimmie with all the names, clubs and disabilities of the 3-3 studen...

Of course I accept it.
For one thing it's his story, for another I like the pairing myself.
I was just noting this is the... Fifth? Story to use it...
Compared to one with Miki/Molly

One week? Pretty short notice for such a thing...
Never did it myself so I can't be certain, though.

Nice story so far.
Two things:
First, it's a bit of a wall of text. Try to use more spacing.
Second, pairing Miki and Suzu as firends has been done a lot lately... Feels a bit repetitive.