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by Mirage_GSM
Mon Jul 16, 2012 5:44 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369541

Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Aiko Kurai (OC) Updated 7/16

griffon8 wrote:
However, “almost only counts in horse-shoes and hand-grenades.”
Actually, the original phrase uses 'close', not 'almost'.
No, I've never seen that before, but I agree it works better with 'close'.
by Mirage_GSM
Mon Jul 16, 2012 5:26 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369541

Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Aiko Kurai (OC) Updated 7/16

However, “almost only counts in horse-shoes and hand-grenades.” What? The rest of the lunch period flies by with considerably less tension. We ate, talked about class, reminisced about the festival a little -avoiding certain topics- and groaned about the tests we had to take earlier. Prime example ...
by Mirage_GSM
Mon Jul 16, 2012 4:55 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The United States of Misha (Misha Post Shizune Good End)
Replies: 203
Views: 104988

Re: The United States of Misha Updated 7/10

Warhammer 40k- I'd call that roleplaying, and Mirage, it occurs in Chapter Five- For the Emperor! But yes, they were playing with the minitaures. They just really get into it- although Lynda's just in it for the cape. See, that's the kind of stuff, had I made clearer, woulda made her character less...
by Mirage_GSM
Mon Jul 16, 2012 4:47 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Five Year Illumination (A Reunion Tale). Updated 8/02
Replies: 101
Views: 48101

Re: Five Year Illumination (A Reunion Tale). S7 Updated 7/14

Is Miyagi actually the English teacher or was that just fanon? Or are you talking about Pat Morita (please let it be that)? Ms Miyagi does not have any appearances in the VN, but she is mentioned by Lilly once. There is a semi-canon story by CplCrud (I think) featuring her. Ah, good to know. I thou...
by Mirage_GSM
Mon Jul 16, 2012 1:50 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Raita comments on Katawa Shoujo on his homepage
Replies: 26
Views: 12335

Re: Raita comments on Katawa Shoujo on his homepage

Interestingly, he doesn't say anything about the VN itself. He just praises the dedication of the Dev team...
Three possibilities:

1. He didn't read it yet. (no idea how good his English is)
2. He didn't like it, but is too polite to say so.
3. He just doesn't want to comment on that for some reason.
by Mirage_GSM
Mon Jul 16, 2012 1:41 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The United States of Misha (Misha Post Shizune Good End)
Replies: 203
Views: 104988

Re: The United States of Misha Updated 7/10

Is there any LARP W40K in the story? I was under the impression they were playing with the miniatures.
Regarding Lynda - I wouldn't go quite as far in my critique, but I sometimes wondered if she was really bipolar. If she hadn't told us, I wouldn't have guessed.
by Mirage_GSM
Sun Jul 15, 2012 5:45 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Five Year Illumination (A Reunion Tale). Updated 8/02
Replies: 101
Views: 48101

Re: Five Year Illumination (A Reunion Tale). S7 Updated 7/14

Dr. Robotnik wrote:Is Miyagi actually the English teacher or was that just fanon? Or are you talking about Pat Morita (please let it be that)?
Ms Miyagi does not have any appearances in the VN, but she is mentioned by Lilly once.
There is a semi-canon story by CplCrud (I think) featuring her.
by Mirage_GSM
Sun Jul 15, 2012 3:32 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369541

Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Aiko Kurai (OC) Updated 7/15

I really would like some feedback here. Delving into the insecurities of a teenage girl is new territory. Well, my feedback usually comes in the form of (hopefully) constructive criticism, so I don't have much to say about the story. Your characters are all very well worked out, and currently this ...
by Mirage_GSM
Sun Jul 15, 2012 1:04 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Clarity: (Complete)
Replies: 54
Views: 14834

Re: Clarity: Part Four (Update 7/14)

I scowl and want to call Shizune a fowl word,...
As much as I like fowl, I think you were going for foul here.

And "Western" Karaoke doesn't seem to be so uncommon in Japan. There was one place just a few minutes walk from my hotel and I heard about several others.
by Mirage_GSM
Sat Jul 14, 2012 4:10 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Slices
Replies: 29
Views: 9067

Re: Slices

“So you don't want me to go home with you?” She asked me. Rin could be very confusing, at least to me, I wanted to be sure what she meant. So I asked. “It's this or that.” “Excuse me?” “Either I go home with you Hisao or I stay here, what do you think I'd prefer?” Who is saying What here? Also, muc...
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Jul 13, 2012 12:59 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Slices
Replies: 29
Views: 9067

Re: Slices

“We have students here who lost their legs in car crashes, got most of their bodies scarred in house fires or lost their hands due to fireworks. Yet, you are worried about the scars on your chest that was made by professionals?” I think I liked the first version better. That was some mino OOC behav...
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Jul 13, 2012 2:01 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 912
Views: 596647

Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 7/12)

And there go another few hours of my time. I consider them well spent, but smaller bits would be easier to chew. A few nitpicks: “Welcome to half an hour ago.” Shouldn't that be "Welcome to half an hour into the future!" or something like that? Hisao looks like he doesn't quite know what to say at t...
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Jul 12, 2012 11:26 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Starbursts (Mutou and Miyagi) (UPDATED)
Replies: 57
Views: 16775

Re: Starbursts (Mutou and Miyagi) (UPDATED)

Too bad that link doesn't say how said linguists get the idea that Japanese nouns could have genders... Would be very interesting...
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Jul 12, 2012 4:36 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Katawa Shoujo Folding@Home Team
Replies: 1023
Views: 297003

Re: Katawa Shoujo Folding@Home Team

So...What does all of this accomplish again? I see a lot of posts about cancer and all but has any of this folding stuff actually done anything yet? Yes, it has. In other news, I am back at home and have started folding again. At the moment only at my laptop, but I think I'll get my PS3 back someti...
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Jul 12, 2012 4:30 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: High Times At Yamaku University (UPDATED 5/08/12)
Replies: 28
Views: 7659

Re: High Times At Yamaku University

That was cigarettes, and while those will kill you as well, the effects are rather long-term.
Drugs are known to affect stuff like heart-rate not to mention any problems in combination with Hisao's plentiful medications.