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Hanako shook her head. “I'm going crazy.” she muttered to herself, “That or I'm being talked to by some ghost or something. But crazy's a lot more likely.

Actually in THIS scenario it should be obvious to everyone which is more likely

The articles I've read show that around 24,000 ancient copies of the New Testament existed within 300-500 years of the actual events. Around three of those, and some odd fragments, can be dated to be within 100 years or less. On the other hand, the earliest copies of the Annals of Tacitus, a Roman ...

Apparently the only source for that story is a book written by some Irish priest some 50 years later...

At the beginning of the chapter I wondered why you hadn't taken the opportunity to have Lilly's blindness miraculously cured...
A few lines down I got the answer ^_^°

Again I am reminded about the accident that occurred almost a month ago,

This implies that it's been less than a month since the accident, right?
And when did the summer holidays happen? SOmetime during mourning or during the weeks since Shizune came back?

...maybe with a sad little banzai tree sitting on his window sill... That banzai tree has to be kick-ass ^_^ Pausing for a moment -to think, I assume- he exclaims, “oh! Your birthday must be coming up soon, then.” If her birthday is coming up soon, she wouldn't be able to see the constellation, sin...

From your writing I don't get the impression of equal numbers. Seems more like the bad guys have a huge advantage in numbers...

And I really recommend OHHC

Yeah, the lack 0f 2, 20 or 200 Yen coins really causes your wallet to swell up at a rapid pace. Especially if you're not used to the coins and don't want to hold up lines for several minutes sorting through your wallet. And yes, only those three denominations of notes. At least I didn't encounter an...

S. Third person singular need it. I'm not quite sure about the chronology of this story. The accident happened after they started dating, i.e. after tanabata, and since they were still in school I assumed it was after the summer holidays, but then Misha would have already cut her hair. Also in this ...

While 200 Yen might be enough to buy a bit of milk, I don't think that 20 Yen would suffice even in the fifties. Not sure if Jigoro is really that old either.
Besides there aren't any 20Yen notes in Japan - nor 200Yen notes. The smallest notes are 1.000 Yen. Probably have been in the fifties as well.

Well, there the fact that I have no depth perception and keep bumping into things, and the occasional headache, but I'm not sure that's related.

Not sure if she's being sarcastic here or if your sentence is ambiguous...

I would say Canada because i may emigrate there. He's discussing his moving to Canada, not his leaving Italy (based on his location tag), thus he's describing the immigration portion of the process. If phrased along the lines of, "I would say Canada, because I may emigrate from Italy to there," tha...

Very good story.
I was a bit disappointed that the scene where he met Emi again ended so abruptly. I would have liked to see Emi's reaction to learning of Lilly's death. Otherwise no complaints. Looking forward to the conclusion.

A few questions were missing a none/don't care option.
For example regarding which path would need an additional scene at the end (none) or which has the best sprites/CGs (all equal)
Also the "When did you first read the final version?" question lacks a December option

Okay, your OC has now officially left the border of Gary-Stu-Land behind and is preparing to invade the Saintly Territories. He is not only genre savy, he is prescient. Just because he hasn't seen one guy since the morning during the school festival - He didn't see several other characters either - ...