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Personal experience?

No god ever said anything of the sort.
The only answer ever given to questions like this was "That's up to your imagination"
You can probably find it somewhere on the first 70 pages of the ask-thread ^^°

Say... Do you have any life outside of writing KS fanfic? Seems to me you have to be churning this stuff out 24/7.

Great chapter again. Glad you didn't drag out the secret-keeping too long
Not sure this song is too practical as a ringtone though - 30 seconds intro.

"Mute by choice" is a very strange way of putting it. since the ability to speak and the ability to hear are not physically related, it is extremely unlikely that a person is both deaf and physically mute at the same time. It still would not call those who are unable to speak because of their inabil...

...she wasn't in fair shape, Hoping that this will bring Misha's guard down a little. Sentence fragments. Avoid. Sora was the very outspoken of the small Interfaith Club there on campus. Leader? Also, what's an "Interfaith Club"? Misha 's smile widened, And though the Student Council ha d n't heard...

“You think I'm going crazy.” Hanako said. It was a statement, not a question. “Well, let's not rush to conclusions. Undergoing side effects, probably. Crazy, maybe Worst. Psychiatrist. Ever. Shouldn't any psychiatrist have his office full of people trying to get over being mind-controlled in one wa...

"I've seen a lot of TV shows about X" does not equal "I know a lot about X."

Replace "X" with (police, doctors, CSI, aliens, Japan, mafia, cooking...)

Okay, you probably can learn something about cooking from watching TV...

That may be part of it. Emi's point of view is probably a lot more different than the front she presents. That said, I've deliberately written her more "careful", because she's sensing something off about Hisao. (In the game, they have great chemistry [the best, IMO], so that's never really an issu...

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themocaw wrote: "Have a wonderful time in America," Akio says, at long last. "Write --->to<--- me."

How do so many people manage to get that wrong?

Spoken language in fiction is always as correct as the character doing the speaking.
Mutou is not the kind to care about stuff like that.

Well, it's not really your fault that it was obvious.
For your character it mightn't have been, but we know Hisao's personality, and we know he wouldn't do something like that (in a serious fiction). So by elimination of the impossible, whatever remains has to be the truth...

Hey, he's back!
おかえり！

Quality story as always. And I agree that porn very rarely improves a story.

No I didn't "miss this". They "protested" but docile staff that they are they just meekly watch as a student ignores their orders and walks off to confront a potential murderer. I can see that going down well in court: "But it wasn't our fault. We protested !" Basically it drives the point home even...

Well, it says "short story" in the title..

True, love is not built on lies. But it is built on forgiveness. True love is not built on forgiveness, it is built on trust. Sometimes forgiveness can restore the trust, but unless that trust is broken in the first place, you don't even need forgiveness. As for getting her to stay, I think Hisao w...