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by Mirage_GSM
Sat Aug 11, 2012 3:56 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 912
Views: 596647

Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 8/10)

And for the test questions, too hard, or too easy? High school physics class was quite a long time ago for me, but they didn't seem to be anything too different from problems I would have seen back then. Thank you for pointing that out, though. Yes, the type of question is pretty common, but that i...
by Mirage_GSM
Sat Aug 11, 2012 3:41 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369541

Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Aiko Kurai (OC) Updated 8/10

I humbly hope I can maintain that level of praise.
Just try not to introduce some construed conflict for conflict's sake.
I'm perfectly happy to watch this story spin along without watching them fight over something not really worth fighting for.
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Aug 10, 2012 7:39 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369541

Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Aiko Kurai (OC) Updated 8/10

“You just missed Emi.”
“I must have blinked,” he says sardonically.
This story is now officially my favourite story around here.
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Aug 10, 2012 6:47 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 912
Views: 596647

Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 8/10)

I even poured over my dad's old comic books... I hope she didn't really pour anything over the comic books. Poring over them would be less wasteful. glancing around in casing She's in casing? Got to hand it to you - even your typos make your story more fun to read ;-) Oh, and probably a good thing ...
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Aug 10, 2012 10:55 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Lilly continuation story. Hisao goes to Scotland.
Replies: 21
Views: 10227

Re: Lilly continuation story. Hisao goes to Scotland.

Okay, so very unfinished...
I would of had more people...
This would of been dealt with...
It's still "would have", though, ;-)
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Aug 10, 2012 6:20 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Lilly continuation story. Hisao goes to Scotland.
Replies: 21
Views: 10227

Re: Lilly continuation story. Hisao goes to Scotland.

(phone rings) My thought process of trying to figure out just how they were even allowed this much luggage on the plane is interrupted by Lilly's cell phone. Outside airport A sense of relief spreads over me as I see the exit. Dining room As we enter the dinning room... Now why do you have to use a...
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Aug 09, 2012 2:46 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: OC Route - Azumi Maeda (8/6)
Replies: 25
Views: 9833

Re: OC Route - Azumi Maeda (8/6)

Eprlide wrote:I meant it in a way that means that the person doesn't take the other person's feelings into account.
That would be a lack of empathy.
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Aug 09, 2012 4:46 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A New Life (Tentative Title)
Replies: 33
Views: 8558

Re: A New Life (Tentative Title)

that bit with Kenji was just to keep him generally out of the story If you want to keep him out of the story, why did you include him in the first place? Kenji is the easiest character to keep out of a story since he almost never comes out of his room anyway. I've based Ryo's eye colour and eyesigh...
by Mirage_GSM
Wed Aug 08, 2012 3:30 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Katawa Shoujo Folding@Home Team
Replies: 1023
Views: 297003

Re: Katawa Shoujo Folding@Home Team

PS3 doesn't amount to much - at least if you want to catch up to Bara ^^°
A bit more than 600 points per packet at one packet every six hours or so, iIrc.
I had that thing running for almost 20 months.
by Mirage_GSM
Tue Aug 07, 2012 8:09 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A New Life (Tentative Title)
Replies: 33
Views: 8558

Re: A New Life (Tentative Title)

Oookay... About a dozen present tenses slipped in, "then" and "than" are mixed up a few times, and I'm not really sure which injury would cause a limb to bleed easily... Thats not what worries me, though... What worries me is that I already see the markings of another Gary Stu: Your OC shows remarka...
by Mirage_GSM
Tue Aug 07, 2012 5:54 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Ask!
Replies: 4980
Views: 1482617

Re: Ask!

What happened to the rule of posting only questions in this thread?
by Mirage_GSM
Tue Aug 07, 2012 6:34 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369541

Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Aiko Kurai (OC) Updated 8/08

Thanks for reminding us that Yamaku has more teachers than Mutou and Nomiya ;-)
by Mirage_GSM
Mon Aug 06, 2012 8:04 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: OC Route - Azumi Maeda (8/6)
Replies: 25
Views: 9833

Re: OC Route - Azumi Maeda

It's commonly thought that he resents Rin (possibly hates) for always being the apple of Nomiya's eye, and starts going out with Molly just before Hisao arrives... But I'mma shut up and let you tell your story. That is the version in one or two other fics around here. It is in no way canon and even...
by Mirage_GSM
Mon Aug 06, 2012 2:30 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Visit to the Hospital-short, humour (warning:DRY)
Replies: 9
Views: 4262

Re: Visit to the Hospital-short, humour (warning:DRY)

Disagree.
It ends at a perfect place.
Anything added would remove the effect of the current ending.
by Mirage_GSM
Sun Aug 05, 2012 3:50 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Clarity: (Complete)
Replies: 54
Views: 14834

Re: Clarity: (Complete)

If I'd had the choice, I'd have chosen not to have the experience :(